https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d Made with a lightning strike of genius en-us 2017-09-08 02:28:16 UTC 2025-09-26 06:10:05 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747369 2017-09-08 02:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747369 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747385 I need to remember to answer each and every part of the question in the introduction. ]]> 2017-09-08 02:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747385 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747406 I learnt 'referred' is not spelt reffered. I also learnt 'utilises' is not spelt utilizes. 

]]> 2017-09-08 02:44:06 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747406 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747412 tie-back sentences]]> 2017-09-08 02:44:06 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747412 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747424 I wrote a great introduction]]> 2017-09-08 02:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747424 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747452 2017-09-08 02:44:20 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747452 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747460 I learnt that contractions are informal language and should not be used in a formal essay.]]> 2017-09-08 02:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747460 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747484 I wrote from the director/author's point of view, which markers are looking for.]]> 2017-09-08 02:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747484 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747510 2017-09-08 02:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747510 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747515 I wrote a sufficient introduction ]]> 2017-09-08 02:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747515 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747518 I have a need to stop using these. An example is don't. Do not use these in formal essays.]]> 2017-09-08 02:44:59 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747518 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747527 My evidence was relevant and clear. ]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:04 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747527 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747530 I  wrote three clear and descriptive paragraphs.

]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:06 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747530 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747536 2017-09-08 02:45:12 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747536 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747546 2017-09-08 02:45:18 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747546 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747551 I constantly used the word love throughout my essay to remind the reader of how it is the main theme.]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:20 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747551 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747555 I had good examples and explanations to back them up ]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:21 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747555 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747557 I have used clear and convincing examples to support each point I have made]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:25 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747557 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747572 2017-09-08 02:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747572 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747599 I wrote a good introduction that prepared the reader for what is coming in the essay

]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:44 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747599 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747608 What I need to improve on- I need to improve on my spelling]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747608 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747609 the lack of topic sentences in my essay paragraphs]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:50 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747609 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747613 I need to strengthen my tie backs]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747613 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747621 I wrote a clear structure]]> 2017-09-08 02:45:58 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747621 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747632 I need to be mindful of the spaces inbetween paragraphs.]]> 2017-09-08 02:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747632 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747654 i need to improve my spelling

]]> 2017-09-08 02:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747654 andrewbergh https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747665 I used alot of contractions in my essay. And it effected my grade so I need to stop using them. ]]> 2017-09-08 02:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747665 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747690 I need to mention film techniques in my Introduction, as I need to build on them for later]]> 2017-09-08 02:46:33 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747690 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747706 2017-09-08 02:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747706 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747708 i n]]> 2017-09-08 02:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747708 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747716 I could've included more examples of Film Techniques, Camera angles and shots that the director used in the film.]]> 2017-09-08 02:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747716 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747717 2017-09-08 02:46:48 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747717 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747732 I need to work on how to spell beatrice ]]> 2017-09-08 02:46:58 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747732 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747740 I need to work on having an introduction that links into my first paragraph ]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:06 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747740 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747752 I clearly explained the relevance of thee examples used]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747752 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747760 I gave good examples of camera shots and techniques]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747760 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747771 I need to work on my punctuation so my scentences are not too long and unending]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:25 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747771 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747778 I need to work on my spelling, punctuation and grammar better

]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747778 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747783 2017-09-08 02:47:32 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747783 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747786 A very well done detailed introduction. ]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747786 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747790 I used good adjectives, eg. 'disdainful' and 'argumentative'. ]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747790 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747819 2017-09-08 02:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747819 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747828 I used examples and quotes to back up my statements ]]> 2017-09-08 02:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747828 https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747883 2017-09-08 02:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewbergh/ks8rpl82ek7d/wish/185747883