TED TALK FEEDBACK by Emily Merrigan https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze Made with an aura of mystery en-us 2021-12-10 21:48:51 UTC 2021-12-15 17:32:33 UTC hello@padlet.com Climate Change emerrigan1 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941138195 2021-12-10 21:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941138195 Race & Justice System emerrigan1 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941138394 2021-12-10 21:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941138394 Social Media: Nadia & Lexi emerrigan1 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941140152 2021-12-10 21:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941140152 Social Media- Leonardo & Maggie emerrigan1 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941140343 2021-12-10 21:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941140343 Video Games emerrigan1 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941140669 2021-12-10 21:52:31 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941140669 Disabilities & Ableism emerrigan1 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941141272 2021-12-10 21:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1941141272 Funny and informational- Maybe talk more clear? https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1949989896 2021-12-15 17:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1949989896 Really strong beginning, middle, and end- At one point maybe add some humor but the piece wouldve been strange if you added the humor because it was a serious topic, so overall really good. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1949994774 1]]> 2021-12-15 17:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1949994774 bmurphy51 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950000930 Very funny and entertaining, but maybe add more clear information.]]> 2021-12-15 17:16:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950000930 Really good lots of talking- add some movement https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950001080 2021-12-15 17:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950001080 Very well said, and strong, you could work on gestures a bit more. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950001180 2021-12-15 17:16:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950001180 I got your points, and they were strong, but you guys were a bit quiet https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950005255 2021-12-15 17:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950005255 bmurphy51 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950005957 Very good information, I did learn but it wasn't as entertaining as others that engaged there audience more. Also you should look up at the camera/audience instead of the computer.]]> 2021-12-15 17:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950005957 Really nice job making it funny, and making it relate to yours and others lives. And nice job being clear when speaking. (Social media) zmalek https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950006890 2021-12-15 17:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950006890 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950006922 you did good but wyatt needs to speak up]]> 2021-12-15 17:19:03 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950006922 Video Games https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950007305 Glow: Great collaboration and evidence!
Grow: Try to speak loudly and show enthusiasm]]> 2021-12-15 17:19:13 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950007305 gzeeck https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008004 I really liked how you added humor.  The only grow is that I feel like there could have been more information. ]]> 2021-12-15 17:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008004 Really good presentation of the TED talk- Maybe for the counterargument include more of the other side because of someone that has a special needs sibling he works better with kids like him so maybe add more detail to why they should be joined together in classes. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008100 2021-12-15 17:19:36 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008100 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008163 Good but maybe look at the audience more than the paper overall very good]]> 2021-12-15 17:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008163 social media https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008196 spoke very clear and didn't mumble. Had some good eye contact and had very good humor]]> 2021-12-15 17:19:39 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950008196 Really nice job speaking clearly, and using visuals to support what you are saying. (Race and justice system) zmalek https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950009628 2021-12-15 17:20:20 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950009628 bmurphy51 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950009827 Definitely had a clear claim with lots of statistics, but sometimes people were looking down at the paper instead of glances at the paper.]]> 2021-12-15 17:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950009827 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950009882 very strong point but maybe you can speak more to the audience more]]> 2021-12-15 17:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950009882 GROW https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950010141 I couldn't really hear you when you talked because of background sound.]]> 2021-12-15 17:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950010141 gzeeck https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011497 You spoke really clearly so it was easy to understand. From the part we re-watched today, the main grow is that you looked at the computer/paper instead of the camera a lot. ]]> 2021-12-15 17:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011497 Social Media https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011583 Glow: Awesome evidence and use of gestures! 
Grow: I couldn´t really hear ]]> 2021-12-15 17:21:17 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011583 tnixel https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011883 I liked the poem and the humor that you guys added. You could work on a little more facts.]]> 2021-12-15 17:21:25 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011883 I really liked how this group had a lot of information on there topic, like the slideshow with all the statistics. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011884 2021-12-15 17:21:25 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950011884 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950012023 Nice facts! 
You might want to speak louder and more clear.]]> 2021-12-15 17:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950012023 Very good humor and gestures, you could work on the volume a little bit more. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950013143 2021-12-15 17:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950013143 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950013830 Good job asking questions!
Could look up more]]> 2021-12-15 17:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950013830 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950014743 Really strong beginning to end. But maybe more hand gestures. Also I understand why there wasn't any humor.]]> 2021-12-15 17:22:44 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950014743 gzeeck https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015241 I couldn't really hear, so maybe trying to speak more loudly. I like how you asked questions to engage the audience.]]> 2021-12-15 17:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015241 tnixel https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015347 I liked how you guys used pictured and images. You could work on gestures.]]> 2021-12-15 17:23:02 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015347 Nice job with the evidence. Maybe you could speak up more. And maybe talk more at the camera than at the computer. (Social media) zmalek https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015387 2021-12-15 17:23:03 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015387 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015400
Work on having equal turns speaking, I understand if someone does not want to talk but they should at least say something that they wrote.
-Harper]]> 2021-12-15 17:23:03 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015400 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015803 Nice job mixing facts and style together!
Might want to add more question]]> 2021-12-15 17:23:13 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950015803 Social Media https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950016073 Glow: Spoke really clearly! 
Grow: ???]]> 2021-12-15 17:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950016073 bmurphy51 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950016632 You guys engaged us very well with questions, although you could be better with making sure everyone talks, and looking at the camera not the paper. ]]> 2021-12-15 17:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950016632 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950016765 you spoke very clearly ]]> 2021-12-15 17:23:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950016765 Climate Change Feedback lfisher217 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950017038 I think you guys did well with getting the humor in, but maybe more facts could have been stated in the talk.]]> 2021-12-15 17:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950017038 Nice job asking questions. But maybe speak up a little more. zmalek https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950017202 2021-12-15 17:23:53 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950017202 Very well said, you could work on how loud your voices are. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950017271 2021-12-15 17:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950017271 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950018510 Glow: I loved the humor in the talk
Grow: could've been more formative]]> 2021-12-15 17:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950018510 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950018884 I liked the poetry you added and the humor.]]> 2021-12-15 17:24:42 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950018884 it needed to be louder https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019190 2021-12-15 17:24:50 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019190 gzeeck https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019522 I couldn't really hear you. It was good that you introduced yourselves in the beginning.]]> 2021-12-15 17:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019522 Race And Justice System lfisher217 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019560 You guys did a good job on stating your evidence and reasons, but you could have been more engaging.]]> 2021-12-15 17:25:01 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019560 Nice job letting everyone speak. But maybe you could make it a little more clear what you are saying. Also nice job asking questions. zmalek https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019655 2021-12-15 17:25:03 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950019655 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950020245 A Grow is that you need to explane it better and glow is how funny it was]]> 2021-12-15 17:25:20 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950020245 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950021678 It was really strong and there was humor and easy to understand. But maybe more hand gestures.]]> 2021-12-15 17:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950021678 tnixel https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022011 You guys spoke really clear. You guys could work on a little more facts.]]> 2021-12-15 17:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022011 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022196 Glow: you both spoke clear and had good evidence
Grow: add more gestures]]> 2021-12-15 17:26:16 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022196 Climate Change https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022382 Glow: Loved your raps! Hilarious! And great use of evidence!
Grow: Made almost no sense though (raps)]]> 2021-12-15 17:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022382 Social Media (Lexi and Nadia) Feedback lfisher217 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022612 You guys did well with interaction and engagement, but you could have focused a little more.]]> 2021-12-15 17:26:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022612 Even though this group had a lot of humor, I feel like it was informative too. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022675 2021-12-15 17:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950022675 Climate Change https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950023436 One glow is I like how yours was different from everyone else. One grow I have for you is to make it make more sense. ]]> 2021-12-15 17:26:51 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950023436 I loved how strong Stella's points were, you could try to have Wyatt talk more. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950023550 2021-12-15 17:26:55 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950023550 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950025919 Strong beginning but i think if you had been more connected with the audience more.]]> 2021-12-15 17:27:58 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950025919 I liked the rap, but the information seemed to disappear a bit. https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950026315 2021-12-15 17:28:08 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950026315 bmurphy51 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950027228 Very clear talking and structure, good humor placement, but you could have added more information on the topic. in some places rather then more stories, almost like a better balance.]]> 2021-12-15 17:28:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950027228 Social Media (Leonardo and Maggie) lfisher217 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950027605 You guys did a good job with showing evidence, as well as reasons. You could have done better with making sure everyone could hear you.]]> 2021-12-15 17:28:45 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950027605 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950028079 Good with facts and information but maybe more hand gestures and more focused towards the camera/audience.]]> 2021-12-15 17:28:59 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950028079 tnixel https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950028553 You guys did well on evidence. You could work on speaking up.]]> 2021-12-15 17:29:14 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950028553 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950029215 I think you could have been more enthusiastic but you had good evidence


]]> 2021-12-15 17:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950029215 Video Game Feedback lfisher217 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950031174 You guys did pretty well with showing supporting details throughout the talk. I think you could have done better with engagement.


]]> 2021-12-15 17:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950031174 https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950032045 Good with information. But needs more hand gestures and more enthusiasm. ]]> 2021-12-15 17:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/emerrigan1/krv1bu1i9cky05ze/wish/1950032045