Which personal narrative do you like the best? Which personal narrative traits did the author do a good job including? by https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr en-us 2017-10-13 21:35:30 UTC 2017-10-16 17:28:25 UTC hello@padlet.com Giving life https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197467473 In the story giving life the author used good personal traits. In the story giving life he used the trait sentences because he included the 5 senses by saying “That made the beautiful day a dark gloomy one” the one sense that I connected to was see because I can picture a cold dark gloomy day as a room with no lights. 

By Cooper ]]> 2017-10-16 17:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197467473 https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197467695 My favorite personal narrative is how to make friends.I like it because it makes me laugh when the dog gets wedged in the fence.The best trait the author used was the setting.
- Gavin]]> 2017-10-16 17:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197467695 Flying Through The Air https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197467899 Flying Through The Air is my favorite personal narrative. The author told how he felt when he was going on the trapeze. For example the author said " As I started to climb the ladder, I was excited and nervous at the same time." - Madison]]> 2017-10-16 17:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197467899 I think help help was the best. The author did a good job including the huck because when I read help help https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468113 2017-10-16 17:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468113 I like the personal narrative The great paw paw Alex https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468169 I like the great paw paw because the author did described the setting The dictionary defines it as the mental ability to recall the past experiences.]]> 2017-10-16 17:07:34 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468169 Jet https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468237 2017-10-16 17:07:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468237 https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468296 My favorite story is how to make friends because it is probably going to make me think about my new town. The characters do really funny things and they sure make me laugh!-Brody


]]> 2017-10-16 17:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468296 Jet Bikes https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468429 Jessica

]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468429 Jet Bikes https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468430 2017-10-16 17:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468430 Jet Bikes https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468448 Jessica
My favo]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468448 Jessica https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468460 My favorite part about Jet Bikes is that Trent said “ let’s open a bike shop” his friends said yes. I think the author did great on the characters names and how they are communicating. If you want to know what point of view this story is in, this story is told in third person

]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468460 Flying Through The Air https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468533 2017-10-16 17:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468533 Help,hel https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468539 For example I like when the ]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468539 Giving life https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468560 I like giving life the best. The author did a good job including the characters. The characters are the dad the the daughter and the dads friend and the little girl who died. Estella ]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468560 Giving life https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468570 My favorite personal narrative was giving life because of the beginning, middle, and end. (Kendall McCracken)]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468570 I really liked jet bikes cause they gave a lot of examples of tools like bolts black tape and screws. Also they https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468581 2017-10-16 17:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468581 The best personal narrative is giving life.a example of the text is " she gave me more than I could ever give to her". The author did a good job of showing feeling. https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468588 Izzy]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468588 The great paw paw https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468623 I liked the great paw paw.I liked how the author described the setting. Isabel]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468623 Mashed potatoes pizza https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468764  
I liked mashed potatoes pizza because it was fun and it was nice and simple to read.
 I could image everything that was going on. (Form hunter)]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468764 I like when I took the spotlight,because the first sentence is a question. The Arthur did a good job on plot be cause I could see him looking at the crowd. https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468773 2017-10-16 17:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468773 Indys life story https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468774 I think the o]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468774 My favorite was the day I took the spot light https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468868 I liked it because it used  great
descriptions like events like I won first place.
-Josep




]]> 2017-10-16 17:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197468868 The great paw paw https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469026 I liked the personal narrative the great paw paw because of the setting

]]> 2017-10-16 17:09:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469026 Flying https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469181 2017-10-16 17:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469181 The Day I Took The Spotlight. The Author did a marvelous https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469274 2017-10-16 17:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469274 I liked Flying Through The Air https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469544 I liked Flying Through The Air because the author used descriptive words.

Caleb]]> 2017-10-16 17:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469544 I read the story Indy's Life Story and it https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469565 2017-10-16 17:10:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469565 https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469711 I think the author did a really good at including a really good hook and the the author dispcribed the setting,time and were they were and the story. I 
picked was indys life story. This is how the author hooked me to the story she discussed the people all through the story and she or he hooked me by saying what kind of dog they were going to buy.
-Kaydence Silva




]]> 2017-10-16 17:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469711 Jet bikes https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469717 I like jet bikes because 
 they started the story off with a question for example have you ever run a business from a play house because you can feel like you can see the play house. By Brooklynne ]]> 2017-10-16 17:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469717 I liked the personal narrative help help. The author did a great job on the voice. Colton https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469827 2017-10-16 17:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469827 I liked flying though the air https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469925 Because it’s about Mexico and I learned about Mexico a lot about Mexico.The Arthur includ a lot of setting.-keeganpalmer ]]> 2017-10-16 17:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197469925 Mashed potato pi https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197470058 2017-10-16 17:10:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197470058 https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197470322 I liked Negotiating with mom because it uses good word choice. It uses good word choice because it used descriptive word choice like blaring. Isaiah

]]> 2017-10-16 17:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197470322 Mash potato pizza https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197470479 I like mash potato pizza because 
this kid axdlently drops the last pies of pizza in a Mach potato bowl and now he has mash potato pizza now he feels inbarist in front of kids and when  
he sat at a table every body started ]]> 2017-10-16 17:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197470479 The Day I Took The Spotlight. I like how the author used marvelous words to express the persons feeling .The author included details too. https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471213   Gracie Uplinger ]]> 2017-10-16 17:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471213 Jet bikes https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471263 2017-10-16 17:13:10 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471263 Indy's Life Story https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471275 I read the story Indy's Life Story and i loved the ending. I liked the ending because it had a good closing sentence such as we are so glad we found him/a good pet.- souleen]]> 2017-10-16 17:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471275 I really like jet bikes cause they gave a lot of details cause they gave a lot of tools names like rusty bolts and screws. Owenkatz https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471544 2017-10-16 17:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197471544 I like help help the best. The author did a good job including a huck when I read "help help "and " have you ever been so nervous that you felt sick" Jenner miller https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197472844 2017-10-16 17:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197472844 I really liked jet bikes cause I liked the characters and they gave a lot of description and details how they made the bikes. Owen https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197475456 2017-10-16 17:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197475456 Mash potato pizza https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197476034 Mash potato pizza was my favorite because when he dropped the last pizza lice and now people started laughing he didn’t feel inbarist any more because people was laughing in a good way.
 ]]> 2017-10-16 17:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197476034 The great paw paw https://padlet.com/lwhite41/kr4k9w5b0bgr/wish/197476348 Lexi I liked the great paw paw personal naritiv because of the setting
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