6C Shared Writing - A Scary Night in Whitby by CASEY DUFF VOLDEN

Mr. Casey

cvolden — 2023-10-30 00:17:17 UTC

From his position in the coffin, Jake could see the menacing shadow moving towards him, it's cape flowing in the wind.

Yue Tong

wongyuetong — 2023-10-30 00:19:15 UTC

In the tight coffin , Jake could see the tall , lean figure slowly navigating it way towards him , it's eyes glowing as it eyed the coffin.

😏😏KADEN🤑🤑

2023-10-30 00:19:42 UTC

From the small coffin, he could see the foul, horrifying creature coming closer and closer, it’s giant fangs dripped with saliva…

Zihan

2023-10-30 00:19:44 UTC

From his position,he could see a bloody shadow,the figure came closer

- Ashley ☄️ -

teokexin — 2023-10-30 00:19:47 UTC

From his position ,he could plainly see a shadow coming towards him ,getting closer and closer every second.

Alyssa✨

2023-10-30 00:20:00 UTC

From his position, he could clearly see the figure getting closer, the figure’s cloak covered in blood as it came closer…

Yee Sien

tkd48jq8gn — 2023-10-30 00:20:04 UTC

From his position, he could see a scary, ugly figure making its way closer, its mouth full of blood.

Jaelia

2023-10-30 00:20:13 UTC

Peeking out the coffin, he could see a gigantic, ominous figure crawling closer and closer towards him, his head dripping with rusty red blood.

Abhi

2023-10-30 00:20:14 UTC

Peeking out of the coffin, Jake could see the slender, menacing figure with an aura of death circling it, making it's way to the spot jake was hiding.

✏️ Jade 😌

2023-10-30 00:20:22 UTC

At that moment, With the moonlight flashing into Jake’s eyes, he could only see a glimpse of the tall, slender figure moving closer and closer to where Jake was hiding

An Xin

2023-10-30 00:20:37 UTC

From the narrow cracks in the damp coffin, he could clearly see the humongous, horrifying figure stomping nearer to him, blood dripping down its pale chin and staining the floor.

Aiden

2023-10-30 00:20:44 UTC

From his position, he could see a tall, dark figure creaking its way toward the coffin, it had a red cloak flying up like a cape.

⭐️Jayda⭐️

2023-10-30 00:20:53 UTC

From the corner of his eye, he could clearly see a black, mysterious figure making its way closer, its long cloak floating behind him like a majestic cape.

Ayen

2023-10-30 00:21:01 UTC

From his position,Jake saw a tall bloody suits and mask.

Yu Yi

2023-10-30 00:21:05 UTC

In the dark coffin, he could see a humongous, horrific figure inching its way closer, dark red blood dripping from its mouth leaving a trail behind it as the figure took each step.

𝑀𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝓏𝑒

2023-10-30 00:21:10 UTC

From my perspective,I could see the hooded figure hovering it’s way closer, with a soul killing scythe that was bloody up with preys.

En Xuan

2023-10-30 00:21:28 UTC

From his position, he could clearly see the tall figure making its way closer and closer

Nik

2023-10-30 00:22:02 UTC

From the coffin,jake saw a tall,evil shadow,with pale skin

Manfred

2023-10-30 00:22:47 UTC

From his position,he could see a black figure,coming closer and closer,his saliva dripping down from his huge mouth

-CHLO3- 👹👹👹

2023-10-30 00:22:59 UTC

From his position in the dark coffin, he could plainly see a gigantic shadow coming closer to Jake by every second, his eyes glowed red in the dark like a candle flickering in a shadowy forest. 👀 👁️ 🕯️ 🔥 🌳

katelyn

2023-10-30 00:25:11 UTC

From his position, Jake could see the tall,scary shadow figure come closer and closer ,it's hand dripping blood

Meini

2023-10-30 00:25:31 UTC

From his position, he could see a monstrous, ugly figure making its way closer, its red flaming eyes looking at him.

Nik

2023-10-30 00:32:46 UTC

From behind the pillar…

Jae 🍳

2023-10-30 00:32:51 UTC

He started breathing heavily

An Xin 🌸🌸🦋

2023-10-30 00:33:04 UTC

He walked cautiously towards the ruins

👏🏻 Jade 😌

2023-10-30 00:33:42 UTC

From where he stood…

Ayen

2023-10-30 00:33:49 UTC

Behind the door…

⭐️Jayda⭐️

jaydalim — 2023-10-30 00:33:58 UTC

He breathed heavily as the figure came closer.

M҉i҉n҉t҉z҉e҉

2023-10-30 00:34:06 UTC

From under the cabinets, he waited nervously hoping the principle wouldn’t see him…

CHLOE 서우👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

2023-10-30 00:34:14 UTC

Behind the tall tree, he waited nervously for the terrifying creature to go away…🌲 🧍🏼‍♀️🦖

-adds in dramatic sounds 🍿 🎥

DUN DUN DUNNNN-

Yue Tong

wongyuetong — 2023-10-30 00:34:27 UTC

- Suddenly, ...
- In the blink of an eye,
- All of a sudden , the robber's slammed aggresively into the window
- With a crash , the chandelier fell on the figure

💀💀KADEN🤑🤑

2023-10-30 00:34:31 UTC

He waited nervously as it was coming closer,

Hours past and Jake still waited there,

Running back home Jake breathed heavily and quickly,

Yu Yi

2023-10-30 00:34:37 UTC

He frantically gasped for his last bit of air,

Zihan

2023-10-30 00:34:51 UTC

He waited nervously,near the pillar..

✏️ Jade 😎

2023-10-30 00:34:58 UTC

The closer he came…

Abhi

2023-10-30 00:35:00 UTC

From inside the cabinet...

in terror...

The minutes felt like hours...

courageously...

Alyssa

2023-10-30 00:35:03 UTC

He was shaking with fear when the figure came closer

👍Manfred🧌

2023-10-30 00:35:21 UTC

Under the bed he breathed heavily

- Ashley ☄️ -

teokexin — 2023-10-30 00:35:32 UTC

Deep inside the coffin, he breathed slowly.

⭐️Jayda⭐️

jaydalim — 2023-10-30 00:35:46 UTC

Dangerously, he jumped out of the coffin!

Ayen

2023-10-30 00:35:54 UTC

He waited nervously…

Aiden

2023-10-30 00:36:32 UTC

He hides under the coffin.

Yu kuan

2023-10-30 00:36:40 UTC

Nervously, he jumped to the coffin

⭐️Jayda⭐️

jaydalim — 2023-10-30 00:37:00 UTC

Unluckily, Jake tripped as he was running from the figure…

Yee Sien

tkd48jq8gn — 2023-10-30 00:38:15 UTC

He anxiously watched the figure.

⭐️Jayda⭐️

jaydalim — 2023-10-30 00:38:24 UTC

Sadly, he did’t make it…

katelyn

2023-10-30 00:38:51 UTC

Behind the tree, he breathed heavily.

Mr. Casey

cvolden — 2023-11-01 00:23:02 UTC

Suddenly, a creaking sound by the statue turned into a crashing sound as the wooden ceiling panels came crumbling down, allowing a stream of early morning sunlight to enter.

💀🤑💀KADEN🤑💀🤑

2023-11-01 00:27:11 UTC

All of a sudden, the ghosts of previous students that were poisoned by the ELL appeared and started violently throwing sharp objects at her, forcing the evil spirit to shriek!

👁️👅👁️👌👌💀💀

⭐️Jayda⭐️

jaydalim — 2023-11-01 00:27:16 UTC

Out of the blue, the spirits of the previous students who were poisoned by the ELL, joined forces to get revenge and threw deadly pots, pans and knife at ELL!

Jae 🍳

2023-11-01 00:27:29 UTC

All of a sudden, the ghosts of the previous students who had been poisoned by the evil lunch lady jumped out of a humongous closet, started throwing things at her.

Nik

2023-11-01 00:27:49 UTC

Suddenly,the ghost of previous students who were poisoned by ell circled around ell,beating her up.

🎃 Jade 👻

2023-11-01 00:27:52 UTC

Out of the blue, the students who were once in this very school, maniacally throwing random kitchen utensils, pots and pans, forks and spoons

CLoEhh 👹🔥

2023-11-01 00:28:59 UTC

In the blink of an eye, a loud sound of the previous students running turned into a screaming 😱 noise allowing the ghost of the ELL to turn around. 👻

🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎🦎 🦎🦎

Ayen

2023-11-01 00:29:43 UTC

suddenly,a clanking sound was coming and all the dead children came and threw all the kitchen utensils at the evil lunch lady.

₥ł₦ ₮ⱫɆ

2023-11-01 00:29:45 UTC

Suddenly, the screeching sound turned into a banging sound as the wooden ceiling came crumbling down, which led the scorching hot sun to enter the old building..

Alyssa

2023-11-01 00:29:49 UTC

Without warning, the spirits of the old students who had been poisoned by the evil lunch lady, jumped in and threw things at her aggressively hoping they would defeat her for good.

🌸AN 🦋 XIN 🌸

2023-11-01 00:29:59 UTC

Unexpectedly, A groaning sound shifted into a shriek as some little anonymous figures threw sharp objects at the evil beast, forcing her to leave the innocent alone.

Meini

2023-11-01 00:30:21 UTC

Out of the blue the children who died the Evil Lunch Lady,want to help Alice.

Yu Yi

2023-11-01 00:30:48 UTC

All of the sudden, the bell rang, the ghost of the previous students that were poisoned by the ELL barge out of the class and threw hot food at her burning her alive!

Yue Tong

wongyuetong — 2023-11-01 00:31:33 UTC

Out of the blue, children emerged from the ground armed with a handfull of food and they aimed the food at the ELL and started to beat her up with all types of vegetables and fruit , the ELL let out a loud shriek as a carrot smashed into her face knocking her to the ground.

👍Manfred👍

2023-11-01 00:32:38 UTC

All of the sudden,the ghost of previous student,started to throw things to the evil lunch lady.

Zihan

2023-11-01 00:32:40 UTC

Suddenly, the kids who was poisoned by the ELL are throwing things to her.

katelyn

2023-11-01 00:33:03 UTC

Suddenly, David and Alice that were poisoned by Evil Lunch Lady, two explorers started threw things at ELL. (^_^)

Aiden

2023-11-01 00:33:08 UTC

All of a sudden, the old student that the ell poisoned jumped out of nowhere, and fought the ell

Character reaction - How does the Evil Lunch Lady React?

cvolden — 2023-11-01 00:33:14 UTC

Yu kuan🌚

2023-11-01 00:33:22 UTC

Suddenly, The evil lunch lady throw a pan with pancakes with poison inside the pancakes at them

Abhi

2023-11-01 00:34:06 UTC

Without warning, the ghost of the previous students who had been poisoned by the ELL reappeared, throwing things and taunting her, making her screech in despair

⭐️Jayda⭐️

jaydalim — 2023-11-01 00:35:15 UTC

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! STOP PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!!” screamed the ELL.

Meini

2023-11-01 00:35:18 UTC

The Evil Lunch Lady runs away.

Ayen

2023-11-01 00:35:49 UTC

Aaahhh,stooloooooooooooooop,bang,to the wall

ChlO3hhhhHHHhH 👹👹👹👹👹🔥🔥🔥🦎🦖

2023-11-01 00:36:16 UTC

“AAARRRGGHHHHHH 👹👹👹👻 HOW DARE YOU EVIL, EVIL CHILDREN 👧🏻 ! AFTER ALL I HAVE DONE FOR YOUU”

👹👹😱😱👧🏻🥶😱👹😱🦎🦎😏

Aiden

2023-11-01 00:36:17 UTC

“AAAAAAAAAAA”

Yu kuan🌚😈

2023-11-01 00:36:23 UTC

The evil lunch lady slipped down at the floor and the plunger fly to the evil lunch lady faces AAAAA get off on me right now saids the evil lunch lady

😭😭KADEN👁️👅👁️💅💅

2023-11-01 00:36:27 UTC

“AUGUGH!” Yelled the ELL as a pot flew at her and covered her UGLY face.

Jae 🍳

2023-11-01 00:36:32 UTC

“OUCH!!” The ELL cried as a pot got stuck in her rusty hair net trying desperately to get it out.

🌸AX🌸

2023-11-01 00:36:35 UTC

"You rascals!" screeched the Lunch Lady and stumbled away, her other eyeball being gouged out of the socket as she screamed with discomfort. The explorers stayed still in their position.

Zihan

2023-11-01 00:36:38 UTC

“AHHH!!”cried the ELL

Nik.

2023-11-01 00:36:43 UTC

“Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!”cried ell as she got beaten up by the previous students.

Yue Tong

wongyuetong — 2023-11-01 00:36:54 UTC

"EEK!" yelped the ELL as she came crashing down to the floor, slowly she lifted herself up but she had a carrot stuck to her nose; like a snowman! Enraged, the ELL launched at the kids in an attempt to tackle them but the children turned into shadows to escape her wrath.

🧌Manfred🧌

2023-11-01 00:37:02 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA😱😱😱AAAAAAAA!!!!!!! Shouted ELL and she runs away.

Yu Yi

2023-11-01 00:37:35 UTC

"HOLY MOLEH" cried the ELL and trys desperately to avoid being hit but gets eliminated by the old, greasy frying pan.

Yee Sien

tkd48jq8gn — 2023-11-01 00:38:05 UTC

“Ahhhhhhh”

🎃 Jade 🍪

2023-11-01 00:38:17 UTC

She gave out a loud ‘SCREECH’ the lunch lady frantically ran around, bumping into each and every wall, her eye rolling on the floor

MIN TZE👺👺🤡🤡

2023-11-01 00:38:42 UTC

“AUGHUSSH” SCREAMED the ELL with a blender in her head and the pan stuck in her mouth as she tried to run away.

Alyssa

2023-11-01 00:38:54 UTC

“AHHH !” Shouted the ELL as the spirits of the previous students threw things at her repeatedly, the ELL ran away but a pot hit her on the back, and the ELL fell to the ground unconscious.

Katelyn

2023-11-01 00:39:02 UTC

ELL falled down and 'AHHH!' screamed loudly.(^3^)

⭐️Jayda⭐️

jaydalim — 2023-11-01 00:45:52 UTC

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! PLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Shrieked the ELL!

Jade

jadeevanpower — 2023-11-01 00:47:10 UTC

The lunch lady shrieked with horror, aruuuuuughhh! The children couldn’t resist, all down the narrow and dark corridors, the ELL couldn’t stand it, she sunk to the bottom, bleeding in every possible way

Mr. Casey

cvolden — 2023-11-06 00:09:51 UTC

“What has just happened?” he questioned, as his breath escaped in a cloud in front of him.

Jade

jadeevanpower — 2023-11-06 00:14:56 UTC

“What on planet Earth has happened here?” the explorers thought to themselves, their hearts beating out of their chests.

Jayda

jaydalim — 2023-11-06 00:15:10 UTC

“What in the human world was it?!?” he wondered, as he/she started hallucinating and seeing things.

Jae 🍳

2023-11-06 00:15:11 UTC

“What in the world just happened?” he pondered,as he stealthily stood up trembling with fear.

Ayen

2023-11-06 00:15:29 UTC

“What the Mother Nature’s is that?”as he picked he self.

👹😎ChLOEhH 😎👹

2023-11-06 00:16:13 UTC

“What in the world just happened?” ❓🌎 they pondered, as they ran near the mysterious, eerie van with his eyes bulging out of their head.🚐

MiTze

2023-11-06 00:16:16 UTC

“What in the fudge cake was that?”he wondered, as a warm bit of carbon dioxide escaped Jake.

💕AX💕

2023-11-06 00:16:46 UTC

"Wait. . . WHAT IS GOING ON?" he processed the thoughts as he stared blankly at the once-evil book.

Nik

2023-11-06 00:16:50 UTC

“Holy moly,what in god’s green world just happened!”he thought to himself,as he gasped for air.

- Ashley ☄️ -

teokexin — 2023-11-06 00:17:23 UTC

“WHAT IN THE WORLD WAS THAT?" they wondered, as their breath stopped for few seconds.

Yue Tomg

wongyuetong — 2023-11-06 00:17:26 UTC

"What the heck just happened?" the 3 explorers wondered,as they slowly pushed open the locker door.

🤑💀🤑KADEN👁️👅👁️👌💅💅💅💅💅💅

2023-11-06 00:17:26 UTC

“What the hack just happened?!?” the 3 boys wondered, as they ran out of the huge forest.

👁️👅👁️👍

YuYi

2023-11-06 00:17:29 UTC

"What in the flipping world did I just withness?" he pondered, as he tried to regain consciousness from the unbelievable event that took place near them.

Aiden

2023-11-06 00:18:23 UTC

“What in the world just happened?” He questioned as his breath ran out of his mouth.

Meini

2023-11-06 00:18:43 UTC

“What does heck was that?”He wondered as he walked to the wall in front of him.

Yu Kuan 🌚🤓

2023-11-06 00:18:54 UTC

"WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT!?" he wondered as he walked into the forest and ran away.

Alyssa✨

2023-11-06 00:19:16 UTC

“What in the world was that?” he wondered, as a shiver sprinted down his spine.

Abhi

wongyuetong — 2023-11-06 00:19:22 UTC

"What in the golly darn heck happened here?" pondered the 2 explorers, as they peeked through the cracks in the lockers.

😱Manfred🍟

2023-11-06 00:20:22 UTC

“What in the world just happened?” he pondered,his breath stopped for seconds.

Mr. Casey

cvolden — 2023-11-06 00:21:41 UTC

Relief exploded inside; a shiver sprinted down his spine.

Yue Tong

wongyuetong — 2023-11-06 00:22:45 UTC

She stumbled as she picked herself up; frightened by what had just happened.

katelyn

2023-11-06 00:22:49 UTC

"What in the world just happend!??" he pondered, as he stoped his breath .

Jaee 🍳

2023-11-06 00:23:09 UTC

Relief burst inside; she trembled with fear.

💕aN xIn😓

2023-11-06 00:23:56 UTC

He had a mini explosion of relief inside; his hands shaking with immense fear.

💀🤑💀💅KADEN👁️👅👁️👍

2023-11-06 00:24:02 UTC

He screamed inside; shaking with fear 😰.

👁️👅👁️💅👍

Alyssa

2023-11-06 00:24:09 UTC

Relief multiplied inside her; she shook with fear.

Jade

jadeevanpower — 2023-11-06 00:24:28 UTC

Good thoughts erupted inside of her; she shook and stumbled as got up from the brutal event.

👹🤓😏👹CHloEHHHH👹😏🤓👹

2023-11-06 00:24:46 UTC

Relief 💥EXPLODED💥 inside him; as his bones shook with fear.

Zihan

2023-11-06 00:25:50 UTC

Relief inside a explosion; shaking his hand with fear.

Relief exploded inside him; his hands shook with fear.

Meini

2023-11-06 00:25:53 UTC

He was going to through wall.

Abhi

wongyuetong — 2023-11-06 00:25:59 UTC

Relief burst inside; he trembled with dread

꧁MINTZE꧂

2023-11-06 00:26:08 UTC

Jake had a explosion of fear inside him; a bullet flew by his spine…

YuYi

2023-11-06 00:26:33 UTC

Relief ran through his body; he shook with immense fear.

Jayda

jaydalim — 2023-11-06 00:26:36 UTC

A mini burst of relief exploded inside him/her; nerves shivered down his/her body.

Ayen

2023-11-06 00:26:58 UTC

he exploded with relief inside him;as a shiver went down their spines.

Nik

2023-11-06 00:26:58 UTC

His fear multiplied by the thousands;shivering intensely.

katelyn

2023-11-06 00:27:34 UTC

Relif exploded inside him: his body was shaking with fear.

🌚🤓Yu Kuan🤓🌚

2023-11-06 00:27:47 UTC

Relief exploded inside; he trembled nervously ☹️

- Ashley ☄️ -

teokexin — 2023-11-06 00:28:39 UTC

Relief massive burst; their hands were shaking uncontrollably.