https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9 Using your self assessment reflection, identify what area(s) do you show the greatest strength and improvement. Areas: imagery, dialogue, establishing a strong hook, organization, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. en-us 2021-10-27 12:59:13 UTC 2021-10-27 18:41:17 UTC hello@padlet.com tparker35 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848097876 Area of Strength: strong hook, vocabulary, and organization

Area of Improvement: incorporating more imagery and dialogue]]> 2021-10-27 13:01:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848097876 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848132324 Area of Strength: strong hook(all I wrote so far basically)

Area of Improvement:
organization, details, imagery, vocabulary; etc. (just about everything else besides hook)]]> 2021-10-27 13:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848132324 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848133200 Area of Strength: Language conventions, narrative, point of view, and partially the storyline

Area of Improvement: Character development, hook, imagery, plot development, and the storyline.]]> 2021-10-27 13:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848133200 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848133792 Area of strength: spelling, punctuation, and capitalization 

Area of Improvement: dialogue, imagry, and hook]]> 2021-10-27 13:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848133792 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134054 Area of Strength: grammar, spelling, punctuation.

Area of Improvement: hook, imagery, dialogue, length.]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134054 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134459 Area of Strength: I feel that I am quite good at writing the hook as well as telling the story in general.

Area of Improvement: I think that I could improve on my spelling, use of commas, and a little bit on imagery.]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134459 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134473 Area of strength- good hook and good imagery.


Area of weakness- Establishing characters ]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134473 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134731 Area of strength: Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook, wording choices, and detail]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848134731 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135092 Area of strength: Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook, dialogue, getting started, and grammer.]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135092 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135116 My area of strength is having good grammar

My area that needs improvemnet is my hook and imagery]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135116 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135187 Strength:Grammar and spelling

Weakness: Dialogue and Imagery]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135187 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135336 Area of Strength: spelling, and use of imagery.

Area of improvement: better hook, improvement in dialogue.]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135336 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135349 Area of strength: Punctuation, spelling and capitalization.

 Area of improvement: Hook and imagery]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135349 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135563 Area of strength- Organization, and spelling.
Area of improvement- Dialogue, and imagery ]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135563 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135646 Area of Strength: Emotions

Area of Improvement: strong hook, organization, details, vocabulary]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135646 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135814 Area of strength: I like organizing and creating imagery when I feel creative

Area of improvement: Need to add more vocabulary and dialogue, along with characters.]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135814 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135834 Area of Strength: Strong hook, good word choice, and good flow 

Area of Improvement: Spelling and organization ]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848135834 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136076 Area of Strength: Grammar, Organization

Area of Improvement: Needs more details and imagery, no strong hook]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136076 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136258 Area of strengths:grammar,spelling, and organization
Areas of weakness: my hook,imagery, and storyline]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136258 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136458 Area of strength: Vocabulary, Establishing a POV, Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136458 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136572 Area of Strength: strong hook, grammer, and POV

Area of Improvement: organization, imagery, and dialoge]]> 2021-10-27 13:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848136572 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848137311 Area of Strength: Capitalization, imagery

Area of Improvement: Organization, hook, character development ]]> 2021-10-27 13:13:02 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848137311 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848138328 Area of Strength: I think I am doing a good job at re-telling details and adding some imagery.
Area of Weakness: Hook, and organization.]]> 2021-10-27 13:13:21 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848138328 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848139456 Area of Strength: Organized

Area of Improvement: hook, imagery]]> 2021-10-27 13:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848139456 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848139628 Area of Strength: Punctuation and spelling

Area of Weakness: Hook and Imagery]]> 2021-10-27 13:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848139628 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848140744 Area of Strength: grammar and spelling 

Area of Weakness: Hook, Dialogue, and storyline

]]> 2021-10-27 13:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848140744 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848140809 Area of Strength: Dialogue, Spelling

Area of Improvement: Establishing a Strong Hook, Imagery, Organization]]> 2021-10-27 13:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848140809 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848141127 Area of strength: Grammar 

Area of Improvement: Dialogue, Hook, Details, and Imagery]]> 2021-10-27 13:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848141127 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848142875 area of strength: Grammar, imagery, point of view, organization

Area of improvement: hook, closing out a story]]> 2021-10-27 13:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848142875 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848143284 Area of strength: spelling and staying organized

Area of improvement: working on hooks, and imagery

]]> 2021-10-27 13:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848143284 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848143777 Area of strength: Language conventions, organization, and hook

Area of improvement: imagery and dialogue]]> 2021-10-27 13:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848143777 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848144327 Areas of Strength: vocabulary, capitalization, punctuation, spelling

Areas of Improvement: creating a good hook and dialogue]]> 2021-10-27 13:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848144327 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848145182 Area of Strength: emotions, grammar, point of view, and organization. 

Area of improvement: stronger hook, dialogue, and conclusions. ]]> 2021-10-27 13:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848145182 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848145246 Strength- I'm good at showing emotional thoughts hooks.

Weakness- vocabulary grammar details the ending ]]> 2021-10-27 13:15:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1848145246 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849171119 Area of strength: Organization, grammar, and spelling


Area of weakness: amount of dialogue and imagery]]> 2021-10-27 18:36:15 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849171119 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849171856 Areas of strength: dialogue & organization
Areas Of improvement: imagery and getting started. ]]> 2021-10-27 18:36:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849171856 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849172370 Areas of Strength: Hook and Spelling.
Areas of Improvement: Closing out of story and Organization.]]> 2021-10-27 18:36:50 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849172370 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849172693 Area of strength: Description and punctuation 

Area of improvement: Imagery, Dialogue, and Hook]]> 2021-10-27 18:36:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849172693 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173011 Area of strength: Good organization, being descriptive, and spelling
Area of improvement: Using more imagery and using more dialogue ]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173011 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173269 Area of strength: Imagery

Area of improvement: Hook and dialouge]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173269 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173848 Area of Strength: I established a strong progression of events, and I used good description.
Area of Improvement: I did not have a great hook, use well developed dialogue or use figurative language well. ]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173848 lasanchez646 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173913 Area of strength: Grammar, Hook




Are of improvement: Dialogue, development ]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173913 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173937 Area of strength: Good hook, and transition from intro to body.

Area of improvement: Spelling and language. ]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849173937 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849174229 Area of Strength: Imagery and storytelling
Area of Weakness: Developing characters and punctuation]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849174229 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849174521 Area of strength: Good use of imagery and description

Area of Improvement: A more interesting hook and adding more dialogue]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849174521 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849174833 Area of strength- Grammar, organization, and spelling.


Area of improvement- Dialogue and imagery]]> 2021-10-27 18:37:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849174833 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175011 Area of strength: capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, imagery and pov as well as organzation

Area of improvement: lacks a hook, dialogue, 


]]> 2021-10-27 18:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175011 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175344 Area of strength: good hook and good use of dialogue

Area of improvement: imagery, plot development, storyline]]> 2021-10-27 18:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175344 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175572 Area of Strength: imagery and emotions.

Area of Improvement: dialogue and hook.

]]> 2021-10-27 18:38:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175572 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175731 Area of strength: Grammar, organized dialogue 

Area of improvement: a strong hook and imagery ]]> 2021-10-27 18:38:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175731 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175905 The Divine Areas of Strength- Spelling, Organization, Imagery, Point of View,Vocabulary,Punctuation,Capitalization, Storyline, and my beloved Hook,

The Incompetent Mortal Weaknesses-Scenery and Dialogue]]> 2021-10-27 18:38:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175905 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175964 Area of strength: Hook , Clear pov , and grammar


Areas of Improvement: dialogue , more details , and imagery]]> 2021-10-27 18:38:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849175964 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849176904 Area of strength: Hook/introduction, and vocabulary.

Area of Improvement: Dialogue, imagery, and grammar.]]> 2021-10-27 18:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849176904 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849177325 Area of strength:Hook,Describing,Dialogue


Area Of Improvement:organization,spelling and grammar ]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849177325 tkgantt667 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849177505 my area of strength is setting the scene of the story 
my area that needs improvement is imagery]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849177505 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849177967 Area of strength: Grammer, Punctuation, Point of View.

Area of Improvement: Hook, Imagery, and dialogue.  ]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849177967 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178305 Area of strength: I am good at using figurative language in my story, and my story does not have any grammar errors.

Area of improvement: My area of improvement is the organization of the story and writing an interesting hook.]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178305 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178337 Area of strength: point of view, spelling, grammar, and punctuation

Area of improvement: Hook, imagery, and organization]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178337 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178624 Areas of strength: Introduction, grammar, capitalization, and spelling

Areas of improvement: Dialogue, imagery, details, feelings]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:38 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178624 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178925 area of strength: grammar, imagery, pov.


area of improvement: capitalization , taking a long time to make a hook]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178925 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178944 Area of strength: Imagery, hook, and telling the story

Area of improvement: Incoporating more dialogue, and figuratice language]]> 2021-10-27 18:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849178944 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849179992 Areas of Strength: If feel that my hook, POV clarity, and pacing is good.
Areas of Improvement:Some things that I could add/better are more dialogue, more figurative language, and concluding. I have some dialogue, but it does not feel equal. The same is happening with figurative language. I was not able to finish, so I need a conclusion. ]]> 2021-10-27 18:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849179992 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849181000 Area of strength: POV, Grammar, Spelling and Hook
Weakness: Dialogue, pacing of events and too short to develop a storyline]]> 2021-10-27 18:40:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849181000 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849181670 Strength: Hook,detail and point off view

Improvement : Grammer, dialogue and Imagery]]> 2021-10-27 18:40:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849181670 https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849182376 area of strength: organization imagery
area of improvement: hook]]> 2021-10-27 18:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tparker35/knp8gfn03wkjxdk9/wish/1849182376