https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid What did you learn from this editing and revising activity? What were the areas that you had the most issues with when editing. en-us 2017-10-19 15:10:12 UTC 2017-10-23 14:41:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597308 I learned that I need to use higher level words and stop using pronouns. While editing, I found that I had a lot of pronouns that I needed to adjust. Also, the pdf word searches didn't work so I had problems citing pages.]]> 2017-10-23 14:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597308 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597318 I learned to not use as many pronouns and to move words or sentences to make the flow sound better. I had the most trouble finding higher level words to substitute other words. ]]> 2017-10-23 14:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597318 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597465 When editing this essay, I learned that I need to fix my wording of sentences as time and time again I had to edit sentences because the wording of the sentence was incorrect. I also need to work on limiting run on sentences. 

]]> 2017-10-23 14:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597465 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597671 While editing my essay, I learned that I had grammatical errors and I needed to use higher level vocabulary. I also deleted and added sentences where it was needed.]]> 2017-10-23 14:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597671 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597899 I learned that is need to use higher level words and to us commas in compound sentences.]]> 2017-10-23 14:33:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597899 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597976 I learned that I would need to work better on how I word things, which would include to not use pronouns.]]> 2017-10-23 14:34:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199597976 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598153 I learned to choose words carefully, and to make sure everything makes sense. I also learned to go back and reread carefully and make sure there are no typos. The hardest part of editing for me was trying to find the right words to fit best in the sentences. ]]> 2017-10-23 14:34:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598153 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598226 I learned that I needed to use higher level words and less pronouns.

]]> 2017-10-23 14:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598226 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598471 I learned to use fewer contractions, and I learned to circle back to my thesis often. Originally, I was only circling back to my topic sentences. When I looked at the rubric, I leaned to circle back to my thesis, too. ]]> 2017-10-23 14:35:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598471 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598499 I learned that I needed to use higher vocabulary and work on how I word things. While editing I noticed I had lots of run on sentences.]]> 2017-10-23 14:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598499 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598604 I learned that I needed to go back and re-read what I wrote , and I needed to use higher vocabulary. I also learned that I should not use a lot of pronouns when writing.]]> 2017-10-23 14:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199598604 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199600333 I learned that I need to use less pronouns, and increase my vocabulary to higher level words. My score did increase because I went back and changed some of my words to more advanced vocabulary. I changed some of my pronouns to just nouns.]]> 2017-10-23 14:38:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199600333 https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199600710 I learned that I needed to use less pronouns and choose higher level words. I also need to work on not using such long sentences. ]]> 2017-10-23 14:38:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cbean/kmemecjczpid/wish/199600710