Isabella lopez Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Isabella Lopez https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC 2023-06-04 03:42:14 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925801 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925801 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925802 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925802 30 Basic Human Rights 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925803 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925803 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925806 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925806 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925807 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925807 Rough Draft 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925808 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925808 Final Draft 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925809 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925809 1. Point of View: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925810 The point of view in my story is going to be third person.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925810 2. Setting: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925813 My story takes place in a planet where only blue and pink aliens live in .]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925813 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925814 Another rule is that Blue  aliens aren't allowed to have names so they are called blue alien then with a certain number at the end of their "name ".
The blue alien that starts the protest is called " Blue alien#1]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925814 4. Conflict: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925815 The conflict in the story is how the blue aliens aren't treated fairly by the pink aliens.The blue aliens aren't treated fairly because the pink aliens are in a" higher class."  So for example blue  aliens aren't allowed to wear clothes with bright colors but pink aliens are allowed to wear bright colors. Also blue aliens don't get to chose the career they want to have (  the pink aliens get to  choose the jobs the blue aliens have). Another unjust thing about the society that the blue aliens live in is that the blue aliens aren't allowed to learn as much things as the pink aliens and there is police aliens that watch all the blue aliens to make sure that they are following all the rules.  If the blue aliens don't follow the rule they have t give the police aliens about half of there earnings of money ( since blue aliens get jobs they don't want , they barely make enough money).]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925815 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925816 The pink aliens finally notice what they are doing to the blue aliens is unfair. So, they change all the rules and the blue and pink aliens live happily together.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925816 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925817 All the blue aliens in the beginning are shy and then in the end they begin to speak up. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925817 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925819 The climax of the story is when a group of blue aliens start to protest about how it isn't fair how the blue aliens can't be treated as equally as the pink aliens .]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925819 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925821 The theme is to never give up on your dreams because if u keep working hard all your dreams will come true.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925821 Due Dates 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925824 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925824 Prompt 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925826 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925826 Theo's Song 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925828 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925828 Rubric 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925831 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925831 Point of View: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925832 The point of view for the story  "Theo's Song" is in third person. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925832 Setting: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925833 The setting of the story" Theo's Song" is in the black smith shop around the 1900's -1910's maybe in Arizona. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925833 Characters: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925834 The characters in the story " Theo's Song " is Theo, The Decider, The Authorities, and Neama ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925834 Conflict: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925836 The conflict in the story " Theo's Story" is about how unfair it is that the Authorities are giving the orphans the jobs that they don't want. For example Theo wanted to be a Singer and instead they made him work as a blacksmith.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925836 Plot: Sequential 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925837 Event #1: Blacksmiths are working in the smithy.
Event #2: Theo is taken from the nursery pod and is told his assignment.
Event #3: Neama explains why the government gives people miserable lives.
Event #4: Theo makes a resolution.
Event #5: Theo sings against the Authorities .
Event #6:(Climax):Theo is taken by the Authorities and gets punished .
Event #7: Neama and other blacksmiths to sing and stand up to the Authorities and the Decider.
Event #8(Resolution):  The government realize what they are doing wrong and let all the blacksmiths get the job they want .]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925837 Theme: 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925838 The theme of the story," Theo's Song" is to never give up and you will accomplish all your dreams . I think this is the theme because in the story Theo never gave up and he accomplished his dream of becoming a singer.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925838 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925840 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 

When I researched," How does it feel to live in an unjust society ?" People explained how they were always sad or mad because they wouldn't be treated equally or fairly.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/215925840 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201105791 https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/217040299 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:48:18 UTC https://padlet.com/201105791/kkz1mfb08mvm/wish/217040299