Racism by BK14110220 SIN CHONG HUAT

Chee Kai Shyan BK14110086

xansyh — 2015-05-07 04:02:07 UTC

Type B block organisation is used

Thesis sentence:

Racism in Malaysia is usually caused by the lack of communication and understanding between races, racial poverty gap and the diminishing of tolerance.

Effect

Body paragraph 1: The effect of racism is the the widening of the already existing racial gap between races, slowing the development of our country.

Causes

Body paragraph 2: Malaysian are becoming more racist towards the other ethnics, due to the lack of communication between races.

Body paragraph 3: Racism in our country is very common, because of the racial poverty gap that existed ever since Malaysia is formed.

Body paragraph 4: Malaysian have failed to develope a strong sense of tolerance toward other races in their country, as a result, racism becomes a more serious effect to our country.

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stanley6223 — 2015-05-11 04:23:08 UTC

And i think the target language are used properly too.

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stanley6223 — 2015-05-11 04:23:10 UTC

In my opinion, type B block organisation is more suitable because the causes of racism are far more significant than its consequences.

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mkhee94 — 2015-05-11 04:27:01 UTC

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mkhee94 — 2015-05-11 04:27:04 UTC

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mkhee94 — 2015-05-11 04:27:06 UTC

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mkhee94 — 2015-05-11 04:27:08 UTC

Yes, I agreed with you. Target language such as "caused by" and " because of" are used. In addition, racism is a big issue in our country however not many of us actually understand the causes. In this outline, it allows us to understand and know the reason clearly.