https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k its all about learning from your work! en-us 2020-04-20 15:58:37 UTC 2022-05-13 00:23:50 UTC hello@padlet.com 1012507 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178125444 I had a good hook to draw the reader in. I had to reason my quotes or evidence a bit better and thesis could have been better stated. Need to work on commas and periods, not making sentences to long. ]]> 2022-05-10 18:34:12 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178125444 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178126987 Great feedback on my amazing writing some constructive criticism here and there (very few) ]]> 2022-05-10 18:35:11 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178126987 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178130644 I had a good job organizing my essay with transitions to show how ideas relate to each other.  I also had a clear thesis that responds to the prompt and lets readers know exactly what my essay will be about. I have to work on backing up my claim with the right quote.]]> 2022-05-10 18:37:27 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178130644 10126541 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178132315 she stated that i did very good transitions and i made my introduction clear but she said my main problem i had was grammar and she said i needed a little of work on making things clear]]> 2022-05-10 18:38:31 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178132315 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178132598 I had a really good hook that the readers could relate to and addressed the prompt very good. I needed to add more evidence that was related to Christopher's trust being broken.]]> 2022-05-10 18:38:41 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178132598 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133022 Most of my feedback was constructive criticism talking about how I needed to provide more brief and important details. Also, to include a thesis that states if Christopher's dad was justified in hiding the letters and saying his mom died. ]]> 2022-05-10 18:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133022 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133264 I didn't get any feedback because i didn't do it ]]> 2022-05-10 18:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133264 10127041 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133617 Some feedback I received was to match some of my sentences together. ]]> 2022-05-10 18:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133617 10124561 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133996 I had my thesis well which responded to the prompt and let the readers know about my essay and for my evidence I need to clarify the purpose that I was proving for my thesis. ]]> 2022-05-10 18:39:35 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178133996 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178134336 I got good feedback on my transitions it said paragraphs flow smoothly and logically.I just need to do a better job on getting stronger evidence .]]> 2022-05-10 18:39:49 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178134336 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178135441 No feedback]]> 2022-05-10 18:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178135441 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178141502 The feedback criticized my grammar and my lack of detail when I came to conveying my stance. I was told my thesis was solid and clear which was important to the reader.]]> 2022-05-10 18:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178141502 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178143787 I didn't get any feedback because I didn't do it.]]> 2022-05-10 18:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178143787 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178147294 I recieved good feedback with my transitions and how I gave a thought provoking thought at the end in my conclusion. I was criticized on my 3rd paragraph because I was losing focus on my main thesis.]]> 2022-05-10 18:48:46 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178147294 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178152390 I had good feedback on the transitions I used at the beginning of my paragraphs. I just needed to put the title of the book in italics. ]]> 2022-05-10 18:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178152390 10127055 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178159007 Most of my feedback was telling me I needed more justification on how Christopher's father was lying and factual evidence that Christopher mother was a terrible mother. I did well in responding to the prompt and responding.]]> 2022-05-10 18:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2178159007 https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2182078402 I didn't receive back any feedback. Since I wasn't able to do the PBA.]]> 2022-05-13 00:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/veronicapulido2/ki732fte1lpfym9k/wish/2182078402