Peer Review Stephanie Frailty by Felix Ehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh your feedback and recommendation en-us 2022-03-15 10:22:31 UTC 2022-03-15 14:46:06 UTC hello@padlet.com good structure: idea and content clear https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095905122 2022-03-15 13:03:19 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095905122 writing style https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095905919 Good use of academic language and terms. ]]> 2022-03-15 13:03:45 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095905919 felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095907093 I liked the writing style]]> 2022-03-15 13:04:21 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095907093 Hand activity vs. activity https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095907404 2022-03-15 13:04:31 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095907404 Overall Impression, Concerns, Questions felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095907582 2022-03-15 13:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095907582 Formal aspects, manuscript preparation https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095909227 2022-03-15 13:05:29 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095909227 frailty assessment introduction might be a bit to detailed https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095910397 2022-03-15 13:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095910397 First impression https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095910469 Sometimes I believe your paper would profit from more explanation, maybe even simpler explanation, less abbreviations. As a non-specialist in that field I believe some things were hard to understand. ]]> 2022-03-15 13:06:08 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095910469 felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095912056 The match between aim, hypotheses, methods, results, discussion was only partially clear; I couldnt easily find whether key hypothesis were confirmed or rejected, questions answered

]]> 2022-03-15 13:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095912056 Hypotheses https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095912990 I had to read over your hypothesis a few times - maybe you can make them more clear? ]]> 2022-03-15 13:07:30 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095912990 https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095914583 writing style/language: somtimes long sentences, unnessecary use of words like "Additionally","Therefore"]]> 2022-03-15 13:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095914583 Benefit, Outcome felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095916043 Could be clearer what's the benefit of knowing the relation between self-reported frailty and objective PA. What can we do (better) with it?]]> 2022-03-15 13:09:02 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095916043 Methods https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095918599 Material section - I did not immediately understand which measurements you use and what you measure how. Maybe state them all shortly more clear ?]]> 2022-03-15 13:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095918599 Different journal - different audience https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095919450 make it fit to readership]]> 2022-03-15 13:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095919450 analysis https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095920968 Not sure if I over-read it, but I did not quite understand how your clusters were defined and why you use them]]> 2022-03-15 13:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095920968 Structure, Argument (writing) felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095973479 2022-03-15 13:35:06 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095973479 felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095976675 a bit jumping between thoughts in Intro]]> 2022-03-15 13:36:34 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095976675 felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095977661 Roter Faden not visible]]> 2022-03-15 13:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095977661 consistent use of terms felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095980825 (gait performance, - function, - capacity) 

ambulation vs. gait?]]> 2022-03-15 13:38:26 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095980825 felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095982082 less abreviations]]> 2022-03-15 13:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095982082 style, clarity and conciseness felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095991547 2022-03-15 13:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095991547 focus more felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095997466 frailty assesment part: get more directly to the point :-) 

PA-part: reduce info to advantages, provide references only, not repeating results from studies

Intro in general a bit long

]]> 2022-03-15 13:45:37 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2095997466 parallel construction felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096011408 stick with one "order", e.g. you speak about "relation between PA and frailty", then don't switch to speaking about "association between frailty and PA"]]> 2022-03-15 13:51:21 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096011408 felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096012880 sentences are sometimes too long]]> 2022-03-15 13:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096012880 General Feedback felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096019310 2022-03-15 13:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096019310 felixehrlenspiel https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096021767 some spelling errors, typos]]> 2022-03-15 13:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/felixehrlenspiel/ki6fi77c5gmf3bnh/wish/2096021767