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         <title>Beth</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Good Morning Everyone!<br><br>1.&nbsp; The teacher stressed the importance of accurate grammar.<br><br>2 In fact, the lecturer emphasized the need to conserve the environment.<br>or<br>The lecturer actually emphasized the need to conserve the environment.<br><br>3. The fax from the Hong Kong office offered little data on the rising cost of housing.<br><br>4.&nbsp; To date, Dr. Smith has lacked sufficient funding to complete his research on AIDS.<br><br>5.&nbsp; Natural disasters may alter lives.<br><br>6. Weather can frequently degrade electrical systems.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:08:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Silu</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. Teacher emphasized the importance to have good grammar.&nbsp;<br>2. Lecturer said that it was actually necessary to save the environment.<br>3. Fax from Hong Kong office has little data about the high price of housing.<br>4. Up until now, researchers in Dr. Smith's laboratory have not had enough funding to finish their study on AIDS.<br>5. Various natural disasters might change a person's life.<br>6. The distribution system of electric power can be normally affected by a variety of weather situation.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:16:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhou</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.The teacher lectured about the importance of proper grammar.<br>2. The lecturer actually stated the necessity of environment saving.<br>3.Fax from Hong Kong office obtained few data regarding the high price of housing.&nbsp;<br>4.The researchers in Dr. Smith's Laboratory lack sufficient funding to finish their study on AIDS yet.<br>5.A person may forced to change his life under various natural disasters.<br>6. The distribution system of electric power could often be affected under all weather conditions.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jiasheng</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1 Teacher stated the importance of proper grammar.<br>2 The lecturer emphasized the necessity of environment saving.<br>3 It did not contain much information about high price of housing in fax from Hong Kong.<br>4 Researchers in Dr. Smith Laboratory currently can't afford to finish their study on AIDS.<br>5 A number of natural disasters have the potential ability to change a person's life.<br>6 The distribution system of electric power can be affected by weather.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yushan</title>
         <author>shaafeida</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>1.Teacher stated the importance of appropriate grammar<br>2.lecturer mentioned that saving the environment was actually necessary.&nbsp;<br>3. Fax from Hong Kong office has insufficient data a about the exorbitant price of real estate<br>4.researchers in Dr. smith's laboratory lack sufficient money to complete their study on AIDS up to now.<br>5. Variety of natural disasters might cause a person to change his life.<br>6. the distribution system of electric power can be often affected by all kinds of weather</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sinan</title>
         <author>sinanxiong</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. The teacher stated the significance of proper grammar.<br>2. Lecturer pointed out the necessity of environment conservation as a matter of fact.<br>3. Few data was provided in the fax from Hong Kong office regarding the high housing price.<br>4. Researchers in the laboratory of Dr. Smith lacked sufficient fundings for AIDS study until recently.<br>5. A variety of natural diseases can lead to changes of one's life.<br>6.Various weather conditions usually have an influence on electricity distribution system.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title></title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Yaqi &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mao</title>
         <author>maoyq94</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. Teacher emphasized how important it is to have skillful grammar.<br>2. Lecturer actually reminded that it is necessary to save the environment.<br>3. Fax from HK office had rare data about the high price of housing.<br>4. Up till now, researchers in Dr. Smith's lab cannot afford completing their study on AIDS.<br>5. Many kinds of natural disasters exist, which might change a person's life.<br>6. The distribution system of electric power can be often affected by all kinds of weather.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Xi</title>
         <author>philomum</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br><br>5. Every individual's life might be changed drastically by numerous kinds of natural disasters.<br><br>6.&nbsp; Normally, any meteorologic phenomenon could have impact on distributed electric power system.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yaqi</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Teacher stated the importance of grammar.<br>The lecturer point out the necessity of environment protection<br>Fax from Hong Kong lack the data about the high price of housing.<br>Researchers in Dr.Smith's laboratory can't afford their study on AIDS.<br>Various natural disasters might change the life of a person.<br>Weather can affect the distribution system of electric power.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jiahe</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The teacher emphasized the importance of good grammar.<br>Lecturer in fact stated the necessity of environment protection.<br>Fax from HK office is not informative with regarding to the high price of housing.<br>Researchers in Dr. Smith's laboratory IS lack in financial support in completing their study on AIDS.<br>People might change their life due to different natural disasters.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Amber</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. The teacher emphasized&nbsp; the importance of appropriate grammar.<br>2. Indeed, the lecturer clarified the necessity of saving the environment.<br>3. Insufficient data was provided by the Hong Kong Fax office regarding the high-priced housing.<br>4. The researchers in Dr. Smith's laboratory did not complete their study on AIDS due to the lack of funding.<br>5. Various natural disasters can alter a person's life.<br>6. The distribution system of electric power could be frequently affected by distinct weather.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ting Dai</title>
         <author>davidus</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Hola<br>1. It is emphasized by teacher the importance of having proper grammar in writing.<br>2.The lecturer delivered the necessity of saving environment.<br>3. Fax from Hong Kong office was lack of data about high price of housing.<br>4.Researchers in Dr.Smith's Laboratory lack enough funding to finish their study on AIDS yet.&nbsp;<br>5. The life of a person could be changed by various natural disasters.&nbsp;<br>6. The distribution system of electric power could be affected by different&nbsp;kinds weather. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>J</title>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhanwei</title>
         <author>zzwzhong698800</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. The teacher emphasizes the importance to have good grammar.<br>2. Lecturer said that it was actually necessary to save the environment.<br>3. There was not so much data about the high price of housing in the fax from Hong Kong office.<br>4. Up until now, there is not enough money for researchers in Dr. Smith's laboratory to finish their study on AIDS.<br>5. Many kinds of natural disasters might cause a person to change his life.<br>6. Distribution system of electric power can be easily affected by weather.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chen</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The teacher talked about the importance of good grammar</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:17:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Qitong</title>
         <author>gaoqitong</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Teacher introduced how good grammar is of importance.<br><br>Lecturer actually emphasises on the necessity of saving environment.<br><br>Fax from Hong Kong office only have less data pertaining to the high price of housing.<br><br>The funding researchers received cannot sustain their study on AIDS.&nbsp;<br><br>A great many natural disasters could perform a significant function on changing an individual's life.<br><br>Weather change can affect the distribution system of electric power.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:19:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chen</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. The teacher talked about the importance of good grammar.<br>2. The lecturer actually said that saving the environment is necessary.<br>3. Fax from Hong Kong office did not obtain plenty of data about the high price housing.<br>4. Researchers in Dr. Smith's laboratory lack sufficient money to finish their study on AIDS.<br>5. Many kinds of natural disasters might change one's life.<br>6. All kinds of weather are often able to influence the distribution system of an electric power.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-09-13 14:22:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>J</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The distribution system of electric power can be affected by various weather.</div>]]></description>
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