Burnage Presentation Feedback by Katrina Greenwood https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage en-us 2018-10-01 07:52:13 UTC 2018-10-04 09:15:17 UTC hello@padlet.com Reflection questions katrina_harrington1988 https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/287471103 1. What was your topic and why did you choose it?
2. What was good, and what was difficult about working as a group?
3. What positive feedback and advice did you get from the audience?
4. What would you change next time?
]]> 2018-10-01 07:57:59 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/287471103 Maggie https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006403 Our topic was smoking, the reason why we chose this topic was that my partners think it was easy to talk. For making PPT, all of our group members tried their best to find data. For communication, because our memebers were from different countries, sometimes I cannot understand what they was talking. Besides, when I was doing presentation, the classmates gave me some eyes feedback . However, for me, I felt very nervous. For next time presentation, I hope I can try to be better and overcome fear.]]> 2018-10-04 08:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006403 Saad Alfahim https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006503 In the 1 of September I arrieved to Manchester and seen many smokers. They were beside the schools, restaurant, and etc. Therefore, I choose smoking as our group presentation. One Advantage of working as a group that we worked equally and with no difficulty. I felt that the audience were listning specially when I was talking about the advantages of smoking. I learned that I should read more about the background of the topic in order to answer the audience correctly.

]]> 2018-10-04 08:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006503 ZHAO https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006517 I am in Group two,and our topic was ACCENT.It was really difficult to decide the topic at first,we had talk about this question for at least one week.In the end,we made the decision together,because almost everybody had this kind of questions before.Personally,I think we chose a interesting topic and it pulled us together finishing the work.A lot of research had been down in the process.Audience was quite interested in our topic because laughter could be seen on their faces.Perhaps next time,I am going to check the grammar errors before presenting and try not to block the board]]> 2018-10-04 08:26:55 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006517 FAN https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006588 Our topic is CAT CLOUD which is a most fanciful one. Cat cloud is about a phenomenon people preferring to enyoy cutes cats online instead of keeping a own one. As soon as the idea came to our mind we were pretty sure that is what we want,because it becomes quite commen nowadays. 
One good aspect of our presentation I think is the pictures which made the audiences understand better. 'Cloud' in our topic is a new concept and when it's combined with 'cat' tings become more complicated. Pictures really helped but the vedio in our presentation is inaproperiate and it seems like a kind of time wasting in the presentation.
Working with groupmates is fine. There os noting difficult about it.
The Feedback from the audience is quite defferent from what I thought before. Audience seem that having no interest about our topic. In my view there were two reasons. The first and the more important reason is we do not do our presentation in a vivid way. We Lacked eye contact with audience and sometimes just read the notes. The ]]> 2018-10-04 08:27:09 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006588 Wen https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006982 2018-10-04 08:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289006982 Rosie https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007033 The topic we chose is ‘should the government give birth control compulsorily?’ for the reason that a new suggestion of Chinese government about birth caused a big discussion on the internet at the time I came to the UK finding different countries have different policies about birth. The good aspects are that the power point we made is very logical and we are also very confident.
The difficult problem we met caused by different opinions about the logical links between parts. During the presentation, the questions from audiences make me know it is important to have communication with audiences. What I need to improve is to put more research on the power point to make it more scientific and professional]]> 2018-10-04 08:28:26 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007033 Glories https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007089 Our topic is Cat Cloud which is a pretty special topic. The reason why we choose this is there is an increase in the number of people who prefer to watch cat videos and pictures rather than keep a cat. In the preparation for our presentation we have found that it is easy for us to dope with why this phenomenon will exist. However, it is difficult for us to summarize the advantages and disadvantages of Cat Cloud. After our class, we got feedback from our teacher. Firstly,]]> 2018-10-04 08:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007089 Becky https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007147

]]> 2018-10-04 08:28:48 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007147 Yuki https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007398 We chose the globalization as our topic.The reason of our group to choose these topic is that we have just acquired some relative knowledge in our economic class.And it is also a very heated topic these years,such as Britain leaves Europe.
In our group,I think there are not very hard difficulties.We have divided our group into three parts at first.And we all agreed with that.During the processing of the presentation,I am a little bit nervous and I am afarid to look at the audiance’s eyes.Maybe next time I can have more interaction with the audience. If I look at their eyes,maybe I can have more feedback.Next time I will focus on my pronunciation and speak more fluently.]]> 2018-10-04 08:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007398 Catherine https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007432 2018-10-04 08:29:36 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007432 Sukie https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007446 The topic of our presentation is whether should governments control the birth rates compulsorily. Reasons why we chose the topic is because there are controversial views about it.I think our presentation had a clear logic.When we work as a group,we firstly came up with many topics so we needed to chose one,which made us both interested in.Then,we were going to write down some opinions.Finally,we should find a way showing our logic easily.The questions asked by the audiences really connected our presentation to their thoughts.The next time what I want to improve is I want to recite the presentation and add more eyes contacts. I also want to be more confident in my next presentation]]> 2018-10-04 08:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007446 Simon https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007575 1.that is not my decision,i missed the group talk hahahaha 
2.i think there’s no difficult when we work as a group,we all get our own part,it’s quite easy for us.but i just search search some information online,Fan do the most,including power point.
3.from outher group’s ,i learned a lot about diffident things.
4.i need to take a part in this group next time,this time I just do the qusetion answering,it’s too easy for me to pass this presentation ]]> 2018-10-04 08:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007575 Queenie https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007582
Our topic is to describe a phenomenon which is about the cat. We occasionlly found that this kind of phenomenon is usually seen in China and Japan where the people suffer great working pressure,so we choose it.
I think the positive part of our topic is that it reflects a common situation, which is the way people choose to release their stress. However, the most difficult thing i think is that the expansion of our topic is limited and it's hard to build small tips.
In addition, using more formal and academic words is necessary. Besides, more eye contacts and avoid reading directly from notes is what I have to improve.
Personally speaking, it’s more useful for us to choose a more controversial and critical topic which will make the presentation not interesting.]]> 2018-10-04 08:30:04 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007582 Wen https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007612 I am a new student here,and I am doing Humanities and social science study.I am interested and good at mathematics.I hope I can study accounting and finance in university. UCL is my first choice,also Manchester is a good choice.]]> 2018-10-04 08:30:09 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007612 Our topic is globalization. https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007747 2018-10-04 08:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007747 https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007911 Susie

]]> 2018-10-04 08:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289007911 c https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289008132 Our topic is globalization. It’s a good topic but it is a little difficult for us to have a very clear explain to that. It is easy for us to have our own ideas and say something about it but it is not very easy to combined with the actual events. Next time, I really want to prepare something interesting to combine with the topic and make it more easier to understand. ]]> 2018-10-04 08:31:50 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289008132 Susie https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289008183 The topic of our group was accent, because my team members proposed this idea, and we thought that after coming to the UK, we found many different accents, so we chose this topic.
In the group cooperation, the difficulty we encountered was to choose a topic.In the early stage, we were indeed difficult to make a choice and had some differences. However, after thorough discussion, we decided on the topic and made great progress in the process of searching materials and writing
In this presentation, I think my advantage is that I have clearly planned what I want to talk about, and I have fully discussed with the members of the group, and worked with them to improve my teamwork ability. However, many shortcomings were also revealed in the first presentation, such as little eye contact with the audience, some nervousness, and the speech was not very natural.
The first thing I want to improve on the next presentation is not to bring electronics, but to write some keywords on the CARDS so that I can communicate more with the audience.]]> 2018-10-04 08:31:59 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289008183 Our topic is globalization. Because we are all students studying business, we feel that globalization is an important part of business.Teamwork can provide more opinions and make ppt more complete and more efficient. But because everyone’s personal time is different, sometimes it is difficult to communicate.We also got a lot of feedback on this show.We should have a deeper understanding of the topic and should be more proficient. In addition, my English pronunciation should be strengthened and more standard.The next time I want to be more standard in our own pronunciation, I need to know more about our topic. https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289009064 2018-10-04 08:34:10 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289009064 Rollyn https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289010088 On the first of October, we did a presentation in the class. Although we choose a very difficult topic which is “SMOKING”, We also express the point clearly through the data and research. The reason why we choose this topic is that smoking is a serious problem in the temperary. Many people clearly know that smoking is bad for health, but they still smoking. Through this group collaboration, i realized that working as a term was much more better that work by oneself. Each of the group members was knew about their division of labor and finish their part. This made the content Informativly and organized.  Nonetheless, we still have a lot of shortcomings, for example, my part of research is not that academically. Reading on the board show the nervous and unprofessional. 
 Next time, I will do the research from more dependable aspects , such as BBC news, newspapers. Instead of search from the google. Trying to look at the audience more. Be more academically. ]]> 2018-10-04 08:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289010088 https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289010136 First of all,all the groups have a interesting topic and successes presentations.From my opinion,the obvious difference of the presentation is that some groups have speech draft but some groups did not have it.So when they have presentation,the person who did not have draft will look to audiences directly.Also,it is interesting that every groups had a person who speak more confident and fluent like a leader to lead their people finish the presentation.What’more,there are some problems when they do a presentation.For example,the time is too long or too short.]]> 2018-10-04 08:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289010136 Olivia https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289012320 1. The first idea of choosing accent as a topic is from a picture sent by my friend on the social media. The picture shows that nowadays’ young people in China has a decreasing ability in speaking local languages. But when I communicated with my group member,we found out that there is no correct concept of ‘local language’ in the UK. So we changed the topic into ‘accent’.
2. The difficulty of working as a group is that we cannot gather together anytime we want. In addition, the final plan and PowerPoint was made on Sunday evening, because we had a lot of discussion before we finally made the plan. And because Zhao’s computer has a old version and he cannot make the PowerPoint,so actually I did the PowerPoint eventually.
3. For next time’s presentation,I won’t read the slides directly and will remember the points. Also will make my voice louder so that everyone in the classroom can hear me clearly. Also I ‘ll behave better when listening to others’ topics.]]> 2018-10-04 08:43:17 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289012320 Becky https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289012745 The various and diverse topics made the lesson more interesting and academic , such as Smoking and globalization which are the main problem around the world currently. All Group mates chose great topics and share all the details to audiences enhancing people’s knowledge. 

There are two main positive reasons working as a group. First of all.people exchange and share various perspectives trying to make the group work succeeded. 
Secondly. Menbers allocate the tasks equally to simplize the work. 

Regarding to the performance of other goups. Several things I really appreciate are their confident speaking and logical analysis. And also. Some people are born with leaderships who carry forward the process.
]]> 2018-10-04 08:44:38 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289012745 Simon https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289013692 2018-10-04 08:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289013692 Catherine https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289014104
Our topic is globalization. Because we are all students studying business, we feel that globalization is an important part of business.Teamwork can provide more opinions and make ppt more complete and more efficient. But because everyone’s personal time is different, sometimes it is difficult to communicate.

]]> 2018-10-04 08:48:47 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289014104 Susie https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289016816 The topic of our group was accent, because my team members proposed this idea, and we thought that after coming to the UK, we found many different accents, so we chose this topic.
In the group cooperation, the difficulty we encountered was to choose a topic.In the early stage, we were indeed difficult to make a choice and had some differences. However, after thorough discussion, we decided on the topic and made great progress in the process of searching materials and writing
In this presentation, I think my advantage is that I have clearly planned what I want to talk about, and I have fully discussed with the members of the group, and worked with them to improve my teamwork ability. However, many shortcomings were also revealed in the first presentation, such as little eye contact with the audience, some nervousness, and the speech was not very natural.
The first thing I want to improve on the next presentation is not to bring electronics, but to write some keywords on the CARDS so that I can communicate more with the audience.]]> 2018-10-04 08:57:07 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289016816 Mia https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289017043 Our topic is globalization.Because we are all students studying business, we feel that globalization is an important part of business.Teamwork can provide more opinions and make ppt more complete and more efficient. But because everyone’s personal time is different, sometimes it is difficult to communicate.We also got a lot of feedback on this show.We should have a deeper understanding of the topic and should be more proficient. In addition, my English pronunciation should be strengthened and more standard.The next time I want to be more standard in our own pronunciation, I need to know more about our topic.]]> 2018-10-04 08:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/katrina_harrington1988/Burnage/wish/289017043