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         <title>Loves not forever</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Edgar Allan Poe</p><p>The Raven</p><p><br></p><p><strong>They say love last forever</strong></p><p><strong>Though I say it does not</strong></p><p><strong>I thought she Loved me</strong></p><p><strong>But indeed she did not</strong></p><p><strong>People say i'm mad</strong></p><p><strong>But I say I am not</strong></p><p><br></p><p><strong>She said our love would last forever</strong></p><p><strong>But it did not</strong></p><p><strong>I thought she was one the one</strong></p><p><strong>But indeed she was not</strong></p><p><strong>And&nbsp; as she hanged from the rope</strong></p><p><strong>She proved she was not</strong></p><p><br></p><p><strong>On the day I met her</strong></p><p><strong>As her blonde hair danced in the wind</strong></p><p><strong>And after our marriage</strong></p><p><strong>We said we would have many kids</strong></p><p><strong>We said our love would last forever</strong></p><p><strong>But sadly it did not</strong></p><p><br></p><p><strong>She said she was doing fine</strong></p><p><strong>But indeed she was not</strong></p><p><strong>Why do people say love last forever</strong></p><p><strong>When it cleary does not</strong></p><p><strong>I wish love lasted forever</strong></p><p><strong>But sadly it does not</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>BASKETBALL IS THE DREAM</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>ROBERT FROST</p><p>KOBE BRYANT</p><p><br></p><p>Basketball is the dream</p><p><br></p><p>Even though it may not seem</p><p><br></p><p>You stay up thinking all night</p><p><br></p><p>Thinking how you would make the team right</p><p><br></p><p>You practice outdoors</p><p><br></p><p>Then show who you are on the gym floors</p><p><br></p><p>You go from losing by ten</p><p><br></p><p>Then you come to reality and get the WIN!!!</p>]]></description>
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         <title>I&#39;m drenched in my shadows</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Robert Louis Stevenson</p><p>My Shadow</p><p><br/></p><p>The water is dense</p><p>I'm drenched with it</p><p>I lost my courage</p><p>Where is it</p><p><br/></p><p>There might be my shadow</p><p>Crawling up like flooding indigo</p><p>That made this liquid</p><p>That washed away the inferno</p><p><br/></p><p>That fire I once kept</p><p>Dearly in my heart</p><p>Burned away to cinder</p><p><br/></p><p>Where did the shadow come</p><p>If fire doesn't emit it</p><p>Was it the shadow of my dread</p><p>That I have created?</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>The sun rises and the morning winds blow;</p><p>Leaves of bushes and trees dance in the breeze.</p><p>Honey bees and deer emerge as the sun rays glow.</p><p>Colors of the flower petals shimmer in the light.</p><p><br/></p><p>The sun retreats from glory to let the moon shine;</p><p>One of the clever cycles of time.</p><p>Fireflies flutter in the calm night, nature's design.</p><p>Clouds hide stars to kindly bring rain to the plants.</p><p><br/></p><p>Isn’t this all amazing?</p><p>The graceful mannerisms of the outside world,</p><p>It needs well deserved praising.</p><p>I love nature and everything in it, pure beauty.</p><p><br/></p><p>Inspired by Marjorie Pickthall, specifically her poem Daisy Time. </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Christina Rossetti</p><p>Who has seen the wind?</p><p><br/></p><p>The grass is green</p><p>The birds sing</p><p><br/></p><p>Leaves fall,</p><p>fall,and fall</p><p><br/></p><p>Sun is bright </p><p>Clouds are clear</p><p><br/></p><p>Cold is here </p><p>And snow is near</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>My bike's like, a time machine, Showing me stuff I haven't seen! Pedal hard, and zoom ahead, No time for being scared or dread. Handlebars tight, gotta steer right, Future's coming, super bright! Wind in my face, like a total rush, Life's a race, gotta crush! Hills are hard, like, seriously steep, But I can do it, gotta keep, Pushing on, with all my might, Reaching the top, what a sight! Down the other side, super fast, Leaving all the worries in the past. Sun's shining down, it's gonna be great. </p><p>inspiration: My shadow by Robert Louis Stevenson </p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Edgar Allan Poe</p><p>The Raven</p><p>ignore the v2 btw</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>They say love last forever</strong></p><p><strong>Though I love does not</strong></p><p><strong>I thought she Loved me</strong></p><p><strong>But indeed she did not</strong></p><p><strong>They say i'm mad</strong></p><p><strong>But I say I am not</strong></p><p><br></p><p><strong>We promised our love would last forever</strong></p><p><strong>But of course&nbsp; it did not</strong></p><p><strong>I thought she was one the one</strong></p><p><strong>But indeed she was not</strong></p><p><strong>And&nbsp; as she hanged from the rope</strong></p><p><strong>She proved she was not</strong></p><p><br></p><p><strong>On the day I met her</strong></p><p><strong>I thought our love would last forever</strong></p><p><strong>I wish that was true</strong></p><p><strong>But sadly it was not</strong></p><p><strong>We said our love would last forever</strong></p><p><strong>But sadly it did not</strong></p><p><br></p><p><strong>She said she was doing fine</strong></p><p><strong>But indeed she was not</strong></p><p><strong>Why do people say love last forever</strong></p><p><strong>When it cleary does not</strong></p><p><strong>I wish love lasted forever</strong></p><p><strong>But sadly it does not</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>How we say I love you</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>My family loves me and I love them. but we don't use words to say "I love you." instead, my mom stirs her love into a pot of steaming rice porridge A chorus of good morning Hana" welcomes me to the table and we start the day together, our bellies and hearts full. Ah Gong shows me the love he feels when he walks me to school As I hop over cracks, his steps shuffle next to mine, and we dance to the rhythm of our feet. how do I show my family my love? I do my best in school so they can feel proud. when the teacher asks a question, I raise my hand. And at recess, I run as fast as I can. As I catch my breath, I imagine how bright their eyes will shine when I tell them how hard I tried. my tummy Rumbles. I find Ah ma's dry noodle dish steaming inside my lunch. she sprinkles her love onto the noodles she makes for me. (and sometimes I find a sweet surprise,too!)  at the game, my dad's love Echoes In His cheers: "Jia you, Hana Go,go,go!" my legs pump faster and faster- I miss as I sniffed by the sidelines, my dad holds my hand and Whispers in my ear. with his every word, my bravery grows, and I Dash right back onto the field to try again. the moment I get home, I want to find the rest of my family. stories from our day spill from our lips, and we settle into the sweetness of being together again. then, as the smell of dinner I fill our home, I rest my head on the belly that holds someone precious and new. I tell it about things like ice cream and swings and rain and the love that waiting when it joined us. dad calls us to the table: it's time to eat! we show Ah ma and Ah gong our love when we let them fill their bowls first. they pick the best pieces that will keep them strong (yet those pieces end up in my bowls!) finally, as night takes over day, we say "i love you" with the last thing we do i rub the knots out of Ah ma's feet and pour Ah Gong the tea that helps him sleep. well my dad and I read side by side, my mom tucks my sheet in tight. with their good-night kisses still soft and against my cheek, I whisper at last "wan an."  in my family,our love lives in all the things we do for one another. that is how we say "I love you."</p>]]></description>
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