Paraphrasing with APA Citations by Nik Mastura https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101 ELC590 Persuasive Speech en-us 2019-05-05 09:37:19 UTC 2019-05-06 07:35:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://imgglb.padletcdn.com/v13/image?t=g_auto&url=https%3A%2F%2Fpadlet.net%2Ficons%2Fpng%2F1f4af.png Nik Mastura https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357014328 1) original sentence
2) cited and paraphrased version]]> 2019-05-06 01:17:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357014328 Ijat https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357014467 1. (Reuters,Aprill 22, 2019). The unprecedented global destruction and rapid reduction of plant and wildlife populations are directly linked to causes driven by human activity.

2. Based on Reuters, Aprill 22, 2019, it stated that the impacts driven by human activity are immediately linked to the unusual global demolition and rapid depletion of flora and fauna.]]> 2019-05-06 01:18:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357014467 Amir Izuddin https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357014673 1)  Lauren Berger, CEO of InternQueen.com and author of All Work, No Pay puts it this way: “If the intern is contributing to your revenue, he or she needs to be paid.” 
2) Smith (2019) quoted that the intership worker need to get salary when they involve and commit with their jobs.  ]]> 2019-05-06 01:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357014673 Ezra https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357017204 1) Research also shows that when people are talking on the phone, crash risk quadruples. 
2) According to Holzwarth (2018) , research shows that the risk of car accidents multiplies when drivers are engaged with their phones.]]> 2019-05-06 01:35:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357017204 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357017301 KARTINI MOHAMMAD
1)ORIGINAL SENTENCE
Drinking before or after taking common painkillers like ibuprofen or acetaminophen can also be dangerous.
2)CITED AND PARAPHRASED VERSION
According to Sophia Mitrokostas(2019) stated that taking common painkillers like ibuprofen or acetaminophen before or after taking liquor can also be harmful.

]]> 2019-05-06 01:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357017301 Shafiqah https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357017832 1) Most recipes suggest using the juice from half a lemon mixed with a glass of water to make lemon water detox.
2) According to Leech (2017), by blending the juice from half a lemon and a glass of water is the most advice method to make lemon water detox.]]> 2019-05-06 01:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357017832 Aina Shahfiza https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357018033 1) The punishment for cyberbullies can include being suspended from school or kicked off of sports teams. 
2) According to Larissa Hirsch (2014), she stated that being suspended from school or kicked off sports teams was involved the disciplining for cyberbullies. ]]> 2019-05-06 01:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357018033 Faiz https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357018517 1) Original Sentence

She said the authorities were seriously considering a curfew for children under 18, as records show that glue sniffing is serious among the young.

2) Cited and Paraphrased version

According to Deputy Prime Minister Wan Azizah Wan Ismail(2017), she conclude that glue sniffing  is critical among the teenagers and it makes authorities seriously considering a curfew for youth under 18.



]]> 2019-05-06 01:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357018517 Noor Syafina https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357018704 1. If you pay attention to mainstream Western media, you'll no doubt see that the media sends a strong message that thin, white and able bodies are the most desirable, and that all other bodies have less value. (By Susan Cowden, 2018)
2. According to Cowden(2018), the media sends a strong message that skinny, white and able bodies are more appealing and that all other bodies have less value if you pay attention to mainstream Western media. ]]> 2019-05-06 01:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357018704 Elc paraphrase https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357019108 Ikmal

1) a 22-year-old private university student died while his friend suffered multiple injuries after the car they were travelling in hit a water barrier.

2) According to Farik(2019), the car that drove by 22-year-old private university student hit the water barrier kill himself and causes double injuries for his friend.]]> 2019-05-06 01:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357019108 Nik mastura https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357030611 Original sentence:

Cited and paraphrased version:]]> 2019-05-06 02:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357030611 Victor https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357031004 Original Sentence:
Obesity can lead to serious and potentially life-threatening conditions like cardiovascular diseases, diabetes, stroke, gall stones, and some cancers like breast, uterine and colon cancer. 

Cited and paraphased version:
According to Lum(2018), obesity can cause fatal conditions such as chronic diseases and cancers. ]]> 2019-05-06 02:55:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357031004 Andy Chris https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357031591 1) Children who are involved with the arts make greater achievements in their education.

2) According to Corrine (2018), children who participate in arts do better in their studies.]]> 2019-05-06 02:59:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357031591 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032429 Hasif

Original: 
You can’t miss commitments very often and still be successful

According Tim Berry(2015) to be success you cant frequently loss your commitment ]]> 2019-05-06 03:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032429 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032536 Azree

1)“Prices have gone up, but the quality has come down,” he says.

2)According to Rabkin, the value of the product increase but the standards of the product has gone down low. ]]> 2019-05-06 03:06:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032536 Mimie Zarina https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032853 Original sentence : July 26,2018 by Crystal Ayres stated mandatory military service is a strategy used by countries to build a large and powerful military.

Cited and paraphrase version : According to Crystal Ayres (2018), compulsory military system is a plan used by countries to have a big and strong defence. ]]> 2019-05-06 03:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032853 Azizrin Azali https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032864 1) Keep in mind that some people become very itritated when parents bring babies to movie theatres 

2)According to Brown (2018)  when guardians convey infants to cinemas, they should acknowledge that a few people may become displease. ]]> 2019-05-06 03:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357032864 Jay Mac Millan https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033019 The e-waste recycling business in the US alone is worth over USD 5 billion, according to Washington-based Institute of Scrap Recycling Industries, representing more than 1,300 companies dealing with scrap commodities.

According to Washington-based Institute of Scrap Recycling Industries, in the US alone, the e-waste recycling industry is value more than USD 5 billion, representing over 1,300 companies in charges with scrap materials.]]> 2019-05-06 03:09:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033019 Syafiq https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033035 Original sentence:
Kotwal and Prabhakar (2017) reveals that financial problem was the main stressor for majority of the single mothers.

Cited and paraphrased:
Kotwal and  Prabakar (2017) shows that the crucial factor for most single parent was the monetary difficulty. ]]> 2019-05-06 03:09:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033035 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033438 Ashmam

Original :
Riatas mail(2017) - stingless bee honey is twice as nutritious as ordinary honey

Riatas mail(2017) summarized normal honey has low benefit two times compared to stingless bee honey]]> 2019-05-06 03:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033438 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033680 Marlene

 1) Original sentence 
“There is an urgent need for medical care for the people affected,” the NGO said on its Facebook page yesterday.

2) Paraphrase 
According to Mercy Malaysia (2019), the individuals affected need vital medical care.]]> 2019-05-06 03:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033680 Ali https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033700 Original: Sleep deprivation occurs when individual gets less sleep than they need to feel awake and alert

Cited and paraphrased: Kathleen (2018) stated that when people gets shorter sleep than they need to feel awake and wary, sleep disorder occured.]]> 2019-05-06 03:13:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033700 Rafaaney https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033922 Original Sentence:

Dr Hilmi said the ministry fears that there may be a rise in deaths if more babies are delivered at home.

Cited and paraphased version:

According to Datuk Seri Dr Hilmi Yahaya (2008), when the number of mom gives birth at their residence increases, the government scared the number of loss of life will also increases.]]> 2019-05-06 03:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033922 Amir amirmaliksobri https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033953 Original Sentence:

(McCloy and Schlesinger, as quoted in Haefele 2001, 66) understood that the ability to attract others and move opinion was an element of power” 

Cited and paraphrased version:

McCloy and Schelsinger (2001) concluded that the component power has the capability to influence other and change perspective.

]]> 2019-05-06 03:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357033953 Faris https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357034002 1. The world is engaged in a cynical blaming of video games which has distracted from real issue behind such a violent attack.                        
2. According Rae Johnstone ( 2018 ), The world has been divert from a main problem behind such furious assault by the full of a selfishness person who only take video game as fault.]]> 2019-05-06 03:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357034002 Wafa https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357034689 1) Original sentence:
Pedophilia is somehow more common in men than women (Seto, 2004)

2) Cite and Paraphased Version:
The research that was conducted by Seto 2004, pedophilia defines men are more often and attracted than among females.]]> 2019-05-06 03:20:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357034689 Batrisyia https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357034859 1) Original sentence
The number of waste generated had been drastically increased.

2) Citied and paraphased version
According to Saeed et al.,2009, Malaysia has stated the number of increment of municipal solid waste management that can cause a tremendous issue in the country.]]> 2019-05-06 03:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357034859 Nur Syahirah https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357068924  
1) Original
Because their bodies and minds are still developing, children are more vulnerable than adults to workplace hazards, and the consequences of hazardous work are often more devastating and lasting for them.
2) Cited and paraphased sentence
International Labour Organization (2011) notes the ramification of hazardous work are more often destructive and lifelong for children since they are more susceptible to workplace risk than adults as they are still growing physically and mentally. 


]]> 2019-05-06 07:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357068924 Aisyah https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357068957
1) Original sentence
Unfortunately, there are not enough organs to meet the needs, although the community is willing, there are too few donors in positions to give.

2) Cited and paraphased version 
According to Brazier (2016), there is a lack of organs and organ donor who make organs transplantation possible.]]> 2019-05-06 07:11:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357068957 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357068977 Ruwaida

1) Original sentence
Free speech relies on honesty, peacefulness and respect.

2) Cite and Paraphrase
According to Samm Stein (2017), integrity, calmness and honour are should be considered in free speech.

]]> 2019-05-06 07:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357068977 Siti Solehah soleyha10 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069220 1)Original sentence
In his 1993 article, Andrew Bell - Fialkoff writes that the aim of the Siberian campaign was"the expulsion of an 'undesirable' population from a given territory due to religious and ethnic discrimination and political consideration."

2)Cited and paraphrased sentence
According to Andrew Bell - Fialkoff (1993),religious and ethnic intolerance and political orientation are the reason to remove the unwanted population in territory.]]> 2019-05-06 07:12:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069220 https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069559 Alysha

1) Original sentence
Common forms of violence in the home are perpetrated by males who are in positions of trust, intimacy and power over the female partner, like husbands, boyfriends, fathers and stepfathers.

2) Parapharase
According to Elena Koshy (2018), men such as husbands, boyfriends, fathers and stepfathers who are in places of trust, closeness and control over the women often perform common forms of brutality at homes to these woman.]]> 2019-05-06 07:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069559 Syakirah https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069580
1) Original sentence

Malaysia is ranked 49th out of some 70 countries for reading and neighboring Singapore is right on top of the leaderboard, scoring 535

2) Cited and paraphrased version

According to The Star Online (2007), out of some 70 nations, Malaysia is ranked 49th for reading while neighboring Singapore led the leaderboard with 535 scores]]> 2019-05-06 07:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069580 Iffah Azman https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069894 1.Original sentence
 “They do not have an access to a healthy and sufficient diet because they live on the streets.” Humanian (2011)

2.Cite and paraphrase
 Humanian (2011), state that since they live on the roads, they do not have an entrance to a good and enough food and drink. 



]]> 2019-05-06 07:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357069894 Nur Afiqah Roslan https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357070188 We have experienced numerous flash floods and landslides and yet the lessons of previous disasters have not been learnt and applied.(Lee, 2 May 2018)

Lee (2018) stated that we had encountered countless flash floods and landslides, but no applications and lessons were learnt from the incident before.]]> 2019-05-06 07:16:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357070188 Ain https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357070423 1) Original Sentence
In 2010, Australia took Japan to the International Court of Justice, accusing it of illegal commercial whaling.

2) Cite and Paraphrase
According to Tacey Rychter (2018), Australia bring Japan to the International Court of Justice in 2010 to put trial on their illegal whale hunt.]]> 2019-05-06 07:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357070423 azfaerah https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357070514 1.original sentence
Being bilingual can help delay the onset of dementia and other symptoms of Alzheimer’s disease. 
2.cite and paraphrase
According to Steven(2013), being bilingual can help defer the beginning of dementia and other signs of Alzheimer's infection.

]]> 2019-05-06 07:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357070514 Saufia Alias https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357071181 1. original sentences
Surveys conducted in 2004 by HUTAN and the Sabah Wildlife Department revealed that there were 11,000 orang-utans in Sabah but an amazing 62% were found outside of Protected Areas in non-protected forests mostly exploited for timber.

2. cite and paraphrase
According to Mongabay (2010) , the precious 6,820 from the total 11,000 orangutans in Sabah are not in secured woodland area which has a large activity of wood logging.]]> 2019-05-06 07:21:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357071181 Alif https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357072651 1) Original

Research shows that the growing popularity of computer, video games and television makes the children very inactive in their lifestyles.

2) Paraphrase 

According to Nelson Mwesigye (2015) stated that computer, video games and television becoming increasingly popular, making the children lifestyles very passive.]]> 2019-05-06 07:27:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357072651 Lionel https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357073870 1) Original
Donating blood is a really minor procedure that takes about an hour.

2) Paraphrase
According to Callum (2017), blood donating is a small procedure which only takes a short time to perform.]]> 2019-05-06 07:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357073870 FAIZ ARIFF https://padlet.com/nikmastura13/paraphrasing101/wish/357074416 1) ORIGINAL
If you’re starting a business in college, you can easily seek mentorship from a business professor or business student with entrepreneurial experience

2) PARAPHRASE 

According to Nelson(2017) stated that if you start a university business , you can easily seek guidance and support from professor of business or business student with business experience 



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