https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls Commentary/Suggestions en-us 2017-05-19 13:36:40 UTC 2026-01-15 13:43:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416426 starting with a question was intriguing 
telling a story was powerful
metaphor "kingdom with my queen" beautiful ]]> 2017-05-23 15:08:35 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416426 mcneal_alison97 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416542 Good rhetorical questions
Good rhythm]]> 2017-05-23 15:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416542 thoren_emily04 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416663 Great repetition, very personal. ]]> 2017-05-23 15:09:25 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416663 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416959 I love the repetition, very meaningful and personal]]> 2017-05-23 15:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416959 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416975 Extremely moving and beautiful. Your language was smooth and flowed well. Good job!]]> 2017-05-23 15:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173416975 bardwe_jordan24 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417210 Your rhetorical questions really make the audience think ]]> 2017-05-23 15:11:17 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417210 mccart_kierna27 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417215 I like how you connected to the audience while also making the topic personal
The tone was good 
Well written & interesting]]> 2017-05-23 15:11:18 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417215 recksi_matthe16 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417246 Well done, it was read slowly and that added to the power]]> 2017-05-23 15:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417246 maisie_berger22 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417252 I love the imagery you portrayed like the "sunset" image and I love how honest you were and told us a story]]> 2017-05-23 15:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417252 spielm_delane16 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417320 The question answer, question answer, question answer was really cool]]> 2017-05-23 15:11:44 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417320 https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417339 It was beautiful and made the audience think about the rhetorical questions you said at the beginning. ]]> 2017-05-23 15:11:47 UTC https://padlet.com/johnso_ethan25/kcvkyvn7zuls/wish/173417339