Show don't tell! by VLT

2024-08-05 01:29:48 UTC

When she said his canines, she meant his adoring teeth, which glinted in the breadth of the warm sunlight. She wondered for a second if that was a flower crown that he was wearing--if it was, she had no regrets not trimming the weed flowers that she had assembled. She realised with a laugh that he was by no means wearing a flower crown; those were just the overgrown weeds. "SMILE!" she said, Polaroid held up to her cheek. Canaan grit his teeth so much he could be chewing on a bone. Annie sighed. She had not intended for him to look like a rockstar post-metal concert.

2024-08-05 01:45:20 UTC

The hot, wet breath of the panting white dog smelled like fish and meat, mushed into a disgusting odour. I didn't mind though; it was worth it to see the toothy grin radiating happiness from the dog's shining, black lips.

2024-08-05 01:46:34 UTC

He beamed so big that he accidently closed his eyes. He was going to the park! There would be other dogs and trees to sniff and birds to chase. Oh gosh! just thinking about it made his tale go all waggy and his tongue loll out.

His Licorish nose snuffled the delectable sent of his verry own biodegradable crown. He could just imagine the look on Ms Diddles face as he would bound elegantly by her gate, she would surely scrunch up her poodle nose and glower! Quickly, he slurped back a stray strand of saliva just in time for his picture to be taken. Snape!

Max was ready to go!