https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 18:17:35 UTC 2021-06-22 11:26:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f431.png 27mbickford https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1074539020 Hey Caitlin I loved your writing piece the word choices you used made the piece so fun to read. I liked how you talked about how long it touch the riding instructor to take. I feel like next time you should add a hook that pulls the reader in.
Your Bffil Max :)]]> 2021-01-11 15:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1074539020 27mbickford https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1517701924 Hey Caitlin it is meh Max and I had read your persuasive essay and here are my fabulous 2 stars and a wish. Star number 1 is the fact that you added so much punctuation and I loved all the sentence starters you used in your essay. It was amazing. My second star is I really liked the bold word choices that you used in the essay. It really made it stand out from some of the others I have seen. My wish is, There were some parts in the essay that I didn’t fully understand so maybe if you could explain it a little more I would understand it better. From your Bffil Max,

]]> 2021-05-12 14:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1517701924 Haidyn_B https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1518012634 One star 💫 that i have is i loved that way you stated thsi sentence and it has a lot of feelings: “Without a doubt, uniforms should be banned entirely because of its negative effects, including the lack of self expression.” I absolutely loved the way you worded this sentence and the feeling you put into this. I also liked the title and how men ay describing words and adjectives you pt into it. In addition to this masterpiece, I would like to say that you are great at finding useful words and phrases like this one right here: “His eyes dart back and forth like lasers as he sees his brand new outfit”. The laser metaphor reminds me of the lasers that baby Lugi has no interest in! I also liked the way you worded the sentence. Like instead of using the word looked at you used the word dart and it had a very great effect. One wish that i had was that you should try and cut down on how long the sentences are because the sentence sometimes goes on for a really long time. When you make a sentence you should make it less then 15 words. Like thsi on right here: “The pressure fills his mind as he carefully puts on layer-after layer of the uncomfortable, itchy navy-blue uniform.” That one has more then 18 words and i think its long but you can make then as long as you but i dont know if that just me. Um 😳…. ok bye! 😟 😶 ]]> 2021-05-12 15:45:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1518012634 27tsmeltzer https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1614778616 Hello Caitlin,
I love how if you don’t do homework for three days straight the teacher would turn into a monster and eat you. I also love the story about Chad Brad. But I wish you put the wings coming out of the back instead of the shoulders.

]]> 2021-06-18 18:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1614778616 https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1617790215 Hey girl heyyyyy I just read your creative writing piece, and it is so amazing! I loved the amount of detail you put into your story. I should really do my homework- I also loved the little interview you did on the people in Chades class. I thought it was super creative! I do not have a wish for you✨ -Mily😌]]> 2021-06-21 14:43:06 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1617790215 27npilgrim https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1617882291 hi Caitlin,
I loved your piece it was really fun to read I liked how you described what would happen if you didn´t do your home work.  ]]> 2021-06-21 15:35:51 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/k9r9wudnb2zyzydo/wish/1617882291