Short Response Peer Review.When stars Explode R.I5.2 by SARA ABDELAAL https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova Made with the best of intentions en-us 2020-05-22 02:27:21 UTC 2020-06-04 11:19:51 UTC hello@padlet.com https://media3.giphy.com/media/9PyUrkqAQEzXxuaxfo/giphy.gif Include one glow and grow. I like how you......... Next time,.......by............... sabdelaal2 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/588220884 The authors main idea about paragraphs 6 through 8 is about how the stars are in trouble by the sun. For example on paragraph six it states “ the sun will rake up the stars fuel witch makes it have less hydrogen. Another example is on paragraph 8 it states “the star cant make energy by holding itself up the sun is trying to pull the star inward. This shows the authors main idea of paragraph 6-8



]]> 2020-05-22 02:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/588220884 Glows and Grows giselleh22 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589046995 Glows:I like how he/she restated the question and how he/she added details from the text.

Grows:Next he/she should make their answer a little more clear.]]> 2020-05-22 14:11:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589046995 Skylyn Jorge Glows & grows https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589060194 Glows:  i like how they gave a clear ''Rap''  Strategy and where they stated there details  and how she proved 
grows: give a better prove next time and a better answer ]]> 2020-05-22 14:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589060194 Glows and Grows! elliannieg https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589064386 Glows: i like how they gave a clear "rap" strategy.

Grow: maybe next time they should check for any mistakes and make their answer more clear.]]> 2020-05-22 14:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589064386 Glows and grows with Naomi Moran ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) darlene625 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589074522
  • A glow I would give this person is that I love how they restated gave a answer and a concluding sentence!magnificent!!!

  • A grow is that maybe you could explain your details further???Other than that great job!!!!!!           ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
    • ]]>     2020-05-22 14:24:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589074522     Glow and Grow aracelyc9 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589090813 Glow: I how this person used the rap strategy.                                    Grow : maybe next time make sure your writing sounds clear.]]> 2020-05-22 14:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589090813 Yahir yahirc11 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589097048 A glow would be is I like how he or she gave good details and a very good answer. 

    Grow mabey next time he or she can put a little punctuation and fix it a lttle.]]>     2020-05-22 14:34:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589097048     GLOW AND GROW : https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589098718 GLOW : I like how this person used rap strategy.

    GROW " Maybe next time the writer should put stronger details.]]>     2020-05-22 14:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589098718     Edward Almonte edwarda114_1_1 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589113459 I like how you have strong evidence from the text.

    Next time you should maybe explain the answer in the ending part.]]>     2020-05-22 14:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589113459     kevin https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589123802 glows : i  like how they gave a rap and how they proved it

    grow is togive a better example]]>     2020-05-22 14:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589123802     Jeremy Murillo https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589170675 Grow. Maybe have a little better details.

    Glow.   I like how you restated]]>     2020-05-22 15:09:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589170675     Antonela jara🌻.glows (I like how he /she used the rap strategy and added details from the text.🍬)grow (next time the answer should be more clear 🌼 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589192707 2020-05-22 15:19:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589192707 natalief72 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589209512 Natalie Florencio 
        glow and grow 
                       glow
             I like that they RAP .
                           grow
             They need a better answer.]]>     2020-05-22 15:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589209512     Lizbeth Huerta lizbethh24 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589221963 Glow:I like how this person included the rap strategy and restated .Grow:Maybe next time give an explanation with your details and make your answer more clear.]]> 2020-05-22 15:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589221963 Glow: I like how you used R.A.P to support your answer. https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589222087

    Grow: Next time you should make your details more clear for the reader - Jazzmin]]>     2020-05-22 15:33:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589222087     Glow & Grows naomis99 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589237307 I like how they put details that support their answer
    Maybe next time they can make their writing more clear]]>     2020-05-22 15:40:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589237307     Joseph M https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589250236
    •  A grow i  would give this person is that to give a little more details on your short response.
    • A glow for this persons writing is they should keep on writing the paragraph number for evidence.


     
    ]]>     2020-05-22 15:45:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589250236     Glows and Grows briannym12 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589334262

    Glow  *  A glow i would give this person is how they RAP and gave a concluding sentence . 

    Grow  * A grow i would give this person is make your answer clear and to explain your details further . 


    ]]>     2020-05-22 16:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589334262     Nicholas https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589335668 Glow ; I like that detail with the hydrogen.

    Grow ; Next time make a full ending]]>     2020-05-22 16:29:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589335668     Aiden Hernandez https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589368623 glow i like how you added a ending and you showed us the paragraph.

    grow next time you should write a more clear answer ]]>     2020-05-22 16:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589368623     jeremys201 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589377054 Glow: I like how he or she used the RAP strategy
    Grow: Next time make sure your writing sound clear and check if there are any mistake in your writing]]>     2020-05-22 16:51:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589377054     Robert Rojas https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589412255 Glow: You used great details to prove
    Grow: Make it a little more clearer

    ]]>     2020-05-22 17:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589412255     Glows and Grows https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589421717 Glows:like how you used rap stratege .grows : maybe make your answer more clear ]]> 2020-05-22 17:16:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589421717 Abriella Alegria https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589531866       
         Glow~ I like how you used the paragraph  numbers for your amazing details

         Grow~Next time make sure your reasons are clear ]]>     2020-05-22 18:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589531866     i like how they used the rap strategy marwaa27 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589753472 2020-05-22 21:12:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589753472 Glow: i like how they used the rap strategy . marwaa27 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589754135 Grow: make sure your response sounds clear

    ]]>     2020-05-22 21:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589754135     glow the strategy they used to state the problem.. https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589805882 grow making sense when they do things.
    Damian Otero]]>     2020-05-22 22:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589805882     jaiden Hoffman https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589806805 glow i like how you gave us a paragraphs to find the details . grow next time reread your answer]]> 2020-05-22 22:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589806805 Glows and grows violetl251 https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589870649 Grow:They needed better vocabulary and punctuation.
    Glow:I like how they restated and used the RAP strategy.]]>     2020-05-22 23:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589870649     LIZET DOLORES https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589949319 Glow: I like how you gave really supportive details/ strong 
    Grow: you should explain or check over her last part of the answer ]]>     2020-05-23 02:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/589949319     Haziel Tenorio https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/610765758
    Glow: I like how you used rap
    Grow: maybe next time your answer more clear]]>     2020-06-04 11:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sabdelaal2/supernova/wish/610765758