- cool photo angle—in a tree?

- really like the the movement of the the red lights

- still a little dark

- action movie vibe

- like the way it plays with light—beautiful

- interesting, fun perspective

- prefer this one over "tree"—the angle adds more to the photo

- really like this one

- the black and white makes the images stronger—emphasizes water texture

- love the graininess of the film

- love how the different colors work as shadowing and light

- love the different pencil textures

- like how the colors lend emotions/characters to each person—person in the bottom right looks sad, and their color is blue

- seems like Inside Out 0.5 characters!

- the image is really strong in the small details—eyebrows, lines around mouths, lips

- directional strokes lend to the shape to the faces and how the light plays off their skin—artist did a great job conveying form and movement

- possible interpretation: almost feels like the different people represent the different stages of his life—childhood, covid, etc

- wish more of the bottle was included so it was more clear that the liquid is pouring into their mouths

- really like this picture

- beautiful

- ethereal

- like how each silhouette has a different color, and then they mix in the center

- wish the darkness at the bottom was cropped out

- on the contrary, like the way the darkness frames the photo

- figure on the left is more visceral than the one on the left

- love the buildings in the background

- on the contrary, don’t love the unsymmetrical 

- love the whimsical feel, but the buildings take away from that

- on the contrary, the buildings make it feel like everyday magic

- possible edit: crop out of darkness of the bottom

- pretty

- love the focus of the rocks in the foreground

- love how the sun plays on the rocks—pretty orange streaks

- wish the sun wasn’t so starkly white

- on the contrary, like it—feels like the centerpiece

- colors are nice 

- like the addition of the shoes—adds to the photo

- really like the reflection

- black and white adds to the mood

- colors are gorgeous

- tree stump? fence post? painted?

- the colors almost look like reflected light

- the blue at the top adds context, but also leads to more questions—blue ground? ocean? snow?

- very strange composition, but works well

- such a cool angle

- turns something small into a massive, dramatic landscape

- perspective makes the rocks look huge and the seaweed look like mountains

- at first, looks kind of like a stock photo, and then you look closer and it's really interesting

- looks like a path in the water leading to the sky

- like that you can't really tell how deep the water is

- love the texture

- like that the photograph is not focused on the hand but on the wall

- perspective is really interesting

- feels like the person is reading the letters through their hand

- would go really well with the roses photo

- beautiful

- hogwarts express!

- "100/10"

- nostalgic

- like the landscape and architecture and composition

- love the arches

- colors are so vivid

- the steam add so much to the photo

- love how mysterious the sky is—you don’t know where the sea ends and sky begins

- wonder why there aren’t more of the rocks—but like it that way

- mostly empty space

- looks like it’s sinking

- just slightly off center—bothersome, so could crop a tiny bit from the side

- sky and sea blend together almost seamlessly

- mountains are so cool

- the light at the top of the picture is inviting—feels interesting

- the sky is what stands out the most, especially the tiny hint of blue

- the blue here works really well, but the train made the other one stand out and added movement

- really cool

- minimal information which adds to the mystery

- intriguing

- the blue light illuminating the tree is the only hint that it’s a forest

- looks like a zombie apocalypse 

- the fog coming down from the light is a really cool effect

- like the decoration on the street lamp—proof of humanity in a place devoid of people

- cool that there are rainbow spec of light through the frame

- trees look like phantom limbs

- double light feature—blue light from the stoplight, but then also a streetlight behind it—really cool effect

- love this idea

- feels like slam poetry

- love the way it changes over time and increases in intensity

- the questions feel like a lot, but that’s the point

- calling out the contradictory nature of the beauty industry

- incredibly relevant to women today

- like how the tone changes throughout the story

- feels like it’s smacking you in the face with all these beauty tips in a really effective way

- feels like the reader is growing with the character

- very carefully considered progression of intensity

- love the last line

- like the indented lines—feels like a to do list

- weird metaphor but like it

- don’t love when poems directly tell us the metaphor

- on the contrary, like the “we are the frogs”

- wish there was a different start

- enjambment is off at times

- possible edit: cut the last stanza

- on the contrary, like what the last stanza brings

- or bring the last stanza to the very beginning! 

- don’t love the part about growing apart—too tell not show

- “the distance between us” is confusing

- get rid of the word “so” in the second to last line, this keeps it all consistent

- re-word third to last stanza- it doesn’t roll off the tongue as well

- possible edit: re-name poem “I think” because that would be more about the author rather than a didactic message to the reader

- could move ‘so I skulk’ section to the end

- relation of the poem to thinking isn’t quite consistent because it goes back to relating to happiness.

- could remove section about happiness or relate it to the rest of the poem

- part of nature in the city

- like the background details

- feels like there’s comparison or contrast between the bird and the plane

- “it’s a good painting”

- the scene is an inherent contradiction because passenger pigeons are extinct