COIL: LinkedIn Reviews F23 by Stefanie Chen

Instructions

slchen2 — 2023-04-05 14:52:42 UTC

Please post the hyperlink to your LinkedIn profile along with your name and anything you particularly want feedback on. Your reviewer will leave comments as responses below.

Here is my linkedin link （from Yinhua JIN）

2023-11-21 15:14:59 UTC

linkedin.com/in/崟华-金-982857294

2023-11-21 23:38:26 UTC

This is my linkedin link (Eka Rastiyanto Amrullah)

www.linkedin.com/in/eka-rastiyanto-amrullah-15ba36a7

My Linkdin link (朱梓烨ZHU Ziye）

2023-11-22 09:06:20 UTC

This is my LinkedIn profile link (Than Kutay Soe).

2023-11-22 11:15:17 UTC

This is my linkedin link (Hiiragi Katsuura)

2023-11-22 13:06:50 UTC

www.linkedin.com/in/hiiragik-17516129b

Lauren Turrentine Linkedin Link

2023-11-23 17:08:50 UTC

www.linkedin.com/in/lauren-turrentine-02a689207

Here is my LinkedIn link! (Isabel Green)

2023-11-26 09:30:23 UTC

https://www.linkedin.com/in/isabel-green-0b5b22162/

Here is my LinkedIn Link - Diya Ganesh

dganesh3 — 2023-11-26 16:52:54 UTC

http://www.linkedin.com/in/diyaganesh

Ellen White linkedin

2023-11-27 03:33:09 UTC

https://www.linkedin.com/in/ellen-white-74223a227/

Here is my LinkedIn link (Banessa Santoyo-Lemus)

2023-11-28 04:57:06 UTC

LinkedIn Link (Skylar Ashforth):

2023-11-28 15:19:09 UTC

My Linkdin Link- Preya Patel

2023-11-28 20:39:03 UTC

www.linkedin.com/in/preya-patel-65901624a

Dwijaa Patel

2023-11-28 23:36:24 UTC

Here is my LinkedIn Profile!

LinkedIn Link- Porter Richardson

pgricha3 — 2023-11-28 23:37:34 UTC

www.linkedin.com/in/porter-richardson-942859244

LinkedIn Simran Vadgama

2023-11-29 14:26:36 UTC

www.linkedin.com/in/simran-vadgama-5339bb232

Group One Feedback

2023-12-03 21:47:01 UTC

Sorry I didn't know how to comment on each post:

Yinhua: This is a great start! I suggest expanding your "about" section as well as adding a background and a bio but the rest looks good.

Lauren: Everything is so well done!

Group 4 Feedback

2023-12-03 22:41:18 UTC

Simran Vadgama: Everything looks really great: each section is filled out and extensive, and also paints you very nicely. Your picture is very clear and I like that you have posts, too. The only small thing I would change is your summary; it just mentions that you're a college student twice, maybe you could edit it to only have this once. Great job!

Hiiragi Katsuura: This is a good start. For your summary, I would recommend using action words to describe yourself, such as "Motivated and enthusiastic PhD Student". Additionally, for your experiences, I would recommend adding more information, similar to what would be on a resume. I like that you have a post, posting is good and shows that you are active!

My LinkedIn link (Hoang Anh Tung)

hoangtung2 — 2023-12-04 06:18:43 UTC

Group 2 Feedback

2023-12-04 18:10:49 UTC

Zhu Ziye: The profile is very well done! it gives all the necessary information an employer may need.

Porter Richardson: The profile is very well done! I would recommend adding more to the "about" section but other than that it is a great profile!

LinkedIn - Aarcha Mulakkal

2023-12-04 20:30:49 UTC

www.linkedin.com/in/aarchamulakkal1

Group 4

2023-12-04 22:12:17 UTC

Skylar- Your profile is really nicely set up. I like how you really go into depth about what you did/about each job/opportunity. Only thing I would recommend would be maybe adding in the summary what type of job you are looking for.

Hiragi- I think that you have all the essentials but it would be nice to add more info from your resume, and even elaborate about certain endevours.

Group 1 Feedback

2023-12-05 01:50:25 UTC

Yinhua: I think your linkedin is off to a great start! I like that you included a skills section. I would consider adding a banner to your profile and adding more information to your "About" section.

Ellen: I think your linkedin looks great! I love that you include numbers for how long your commitments were per week!

Group 8

2023-12-05 12:54:09 UTC

> Dwijaa Patel: I think that it would be nice to add some information from your resume such as skills and we both should add some information in summary section.

LinkedIn- Alexander Lopez

aclopez4_1 — 2023-12-05 17:50:26 UTC

My linkedIn

Alexander Lopez Group 6 (Green,Isabel), (Safiullah Hazim)

aclopez4_1 — 2023-12-05 17:53:45 UTC

Isabel, I loved how you have photos to go onto your page. with the experience you have, it makes it seem so real, and it gets people's attention!

I could not find Hazims linkedIn

Claiborne Isom LinkedIn

2023-12-05 19:59:00 UTC

Group 2

pgricha3 — 2023-12-05 21:27:08 UTC

Santoyo-Lemus, Banessa- I really liked your profile. I thought everything was accounted for and the information was good. One thing I might add is English in your languages section. Overall a really great profile!

Ziye Zhu- I thought your LinkedIn profile was excellent. All the information summarizing your history, education, and skills was present and succinct. Everything looked professional and well thought out. I really don't have much in the way of suggestions. One potential thing to look into is to use the skills section to list your skills rather than only the about me section.

Group 6 Feedback (Isabel Green): (Alexander Lopez & Safiullah Hazim)

2023-12-05 23:04:02 UTC

Hi Alexander! I think your LinkedIn looks really solid and professional-looking! I like how many specific skills you have listed and how you specifically link them to your education and experiences. I'd also keep in mind that, for your "about section", people will only see the first 3-4 lines unless the click "see more". So you could consider making it a bit shorter, or writing an initial section that is very attention-grabbing/punchy to prompt them to want to read more (I got the same note about mine recently). But that's a personal choice, it's up to you. Also, I think you may have misspelled "microbial" in your title!

Great work!

I couldn't find Safiullah's linkedin posted :(

Gray Isom Group 7 Feedback

cgisom1 — 2023-12-05 23:22:50 UTC

Diya Ganesh: Super solid profile. Tons of impressive experience listed complete with profile picture, and many connections. Nice!

Eka Amrullah: Also super solid. Maybe a post or two would be nice just showcasing some involvement or something interesting. Otherwise, you have an interesting profile picture, and have your positions stated clearly.

Linkedin Interview of Hoang Anh Tung

2023-12-06 01:01:08 UTC

Hoang's LinkedIn was great! It included the university he is attending, graduate program, educational experience, skills, honors and awards, test scores, and company interest. It was well-rounded! I suggest adding a bio-section to include interest career and future aspirations so that recruiters can identify Hoang better. I also recommend adding descriptions to the honors and awards section so that recruiters can understand what the awards are about, since they seem very notable! All in all, great LinkedIn profile!

I'm unable to review Annalise Fox's profile

Group 3 Feedback for Mulakkal Aarcha from Hoang Anh Tung

hoangtung2 — 2023-12-06 01:45:38 UTC

Your LinkedIn profile is truly impressive, showcasing a remarkable blend of professional achievements, expertise, and a commitment to continuous growth—truly inspiring to see your impactful contributions and dedication in your field.

Group2 feedback from Ziye ZHU

psychezhu852 — 2023-12-06 02:52:02 UTC

Banessa Santoyo:

Your profile looks great, and your hands-on lab experience is impressive. And you can add more information to your “about” part.

Porter Richardson:

Your profile is well done and I think you can put more activity parts in your profile like maybe volunteer or internship. Also Highlighting your Specific Strengths is a better way to appeal yourself.

Group 1 feedback ( from Yinhua JIN)

jy0119811_ — 2023-12-06 04:14:01 UTC

To Lauren: I like the way you show your strengths and skills. And your experiences are impressive, good job!

To Ellen: It is very clear and nice profile, but I have one curious thing, is your Japanese a native level? If it is not a small mistake, then I should say you are amazing!

Group 7 Feedback (from Eka Rastiyanto Amrullah)

2023-12-14 00:43:00 UTC

Gray Isom : An attractive profile photo and contains complete personal information. Educational information is also clearly included, overall very solid

Diya Ganesh : The content really describes a complete person, from education, skills to experience and awards. Overall very good and cool

Feedback

2023-12-14 20:58:08 UTC

Simran Vadgama: I think your LinkedIn page is very nice. I saw you have so many connections which is truly impressive. Everything on there is professional. Seems to me everything is also up to date. I wouldn't make any changes.

Alexander Lopez: Your LinkedIn looks good. I love how you have a very detailed bio/ about me. That looked very good. All I would say it continuing making new connections on there.

Group 4 Feedback from Hiiragi Katsuura

2023-12-15 10:01:55 UTC

Skylar Ashforth: Your profile is very good with lots of content. All section was filled with a lot of information. I found you have many skills!

Simran Vadgama: Your profile is very impressive with all the necessary information! I thought your work experience and qualifications section is very attractive.