Contemporary Feedback Padlet by Matthew Harrison-Lord https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary We work with love and light en-us 2018-11-26 18:19:39 UTC 2025-12-23 09:29:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Moderncam.png Ideas to develop https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308699701
Using ideas to inform, devise, shape- you've resources well and developed different research into your piece. Using technology also. By using the lighting I think there needs to be more structure with people controlling this. I think the lighting took away the message when people were playing to much with this. 70
Selection- by using lighting and using mirrors, the inner reflection, refined well and developed within this. I would say use a mirror with no bars to create a bigger impact. 70
Creativity- a very well developed thought process but work on an ending with this in mind and the attention to detail to this will make your piece whole. 65
Reliability- not been working together so cannot analyse this.
Implementation of feedback- worked well with the feed back given and worked with it. 80
Aesthetic- 70
Apply theory- engaged well within class and added some good technology for the piece and worked within the practitioners we looked at. 70
Performance- worked within good timing and got a finished product 75
Engagement with audience- I think you need to figure out exactly what your saying to them and how your responding to the audiences reaction. None at all or speaking... 6]]> 2018-11-28 10:44:20 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308699701 Using ideas to inform, devise and shape material https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308699935 It’s clear to see where you’re ideas developed from (eg. Having the audience sit with you has been influenced by The Artist is Present). We can also see how you’ve stuck with your initial idea and developed it into the piece you currently have. ]]> 2018-11-28 10:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308699935 Ideas to in inform material: look into more material that connects to my performance idea https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308700246 2018-11-28 10:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308700246 Development of ideas: changed location to mirrors for inner reflection https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308700834 2018-11-28 10:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308700834 Creativity originality and attention to detail: where the lights are shining, what colour the lights are and what they represent https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701071 2018-11-28 10:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701071 Reliability and colab working: using Amy and saffron in my piece, Amy on sound, saffron on lights https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701537 2018-11-28 10:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701537 Implementation of feedback: moving the location to the mirror, engaging with audience or not https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701834 2018-11-28 10:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701834 Selection, development, refining of mat https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701905 You’re selection of materials is appropriate to your idea and performance. ]]> 2018-11-28 10:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308701905 Aesthetic quality of material: lights and sound creating 'on edge' atmosphere https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308702349 2018-11-28 10:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308702349 Creativity, originality and attention to detail https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308702474 You’ve created an original idea and stuck with it throughout development. You’ve made sure the details are appropriate and relevant to your work. ]]> 2018-11-28 10:53:51 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308702474 Theory to practice: influenced by marina abromavic, invited audience to sit with her https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308702687 2018-11-28 10:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308702687 Performativity: sat not communicating with audience, will tell them to get out on performance https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703137 2018-11-28 10:56:18 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703137 Reliability/ collaborative working https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703191 You work well collaboratively however it can sometimes be difficult when you’re not here. ]]> 2018-11-28 10:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703191 Engagement with audience: did greet them however will now have no communication with audience https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703687 2018-11-28 10:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703687 Implement https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703712 It is clear that you have considered feedback you have received and used it to further develop your piece. ]]> 2018-11-28 10:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308703712 Aesthetic quality https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308704066 Your piece has a great aesthetic quality especially now you’re using the mi]]> 2018-11-28 10:59:24 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308704066 Theory to practice https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308704307 In places it’s clear where you’ve used theory into practice such as Marina Abramović and digital performance but maybe try and back up your ideas more. ]]> 2018-11-28 11:00:27 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308704307 Performativity https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308704633 There’s a nice performativity about you being sat looking in the mirror but as yet I’m still not sure how your performance ends. ]]> 2018-11-28 11:01:54 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308704633 Engagement with audience https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308705011 It’s clear from your draft that the audience engaged with you and your performance. And in your own way you engage with the audience just by looking in the mirror ]]> 2018-11-28 11:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308705011 Using ideas to inform decide and shape material: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722126 The idea of sight loss which stemmed from isolation is carry affective ]]> 2018-11-28 12:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722126 Using ideas- you have used creative performance ideas from marina which have been noticed throughout your work. I like the material you have put alot of thought into feedback and made it known you have done your research https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722138 2018-11-28 12:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722138 Selection- I think there needs more details and more variety when using the different things and also think you need to use the computer or sounds feelings are limited. Also use food... https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722389 2018-11-28 12:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722389 Using ideas https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722391 I believe that I used various ideas to inform my work. I have assed when ideas haven’t worked and why and then used aspects of them to develop my current work. ]]> 2018-11-28 12:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722391 Creativity- very creative and have researched into the 'blind' state you have been very creative with these ideas https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722751 2018-11-28 12:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722751 Development and refining: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722876 Developed on objects, need to decide on finish]]> 2018-11-28 12:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308722876 Very reliable when needing help! Your a star https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723006 2018-11-28 12:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723006 Implement on feedback https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723057 I think you have worked well on developing feedback and remaining in posture ]]> 2018-11-28 12:05:44 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723057 Creativity, attention to detail: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723075 Very creative, detail on time length meaning and colour choice]]> 2018-11-28 12:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723075 Selection, development, refining https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723105 I think I have selected and developed material that was relevant to my idea and subsequently refined it to create my work ]]> 2018-11-28 12:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723105 Colab working: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723505 Good having others interacting with you ]]> 2018-11-28 12:07:37 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723505 Feedback https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723622 Taken into account the variation of sight and which objects to include ]]> 2018-11-28 12:08:09 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723622 Theory to practice: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723914 Marina abromavic rhythm 0?? ]]> 2018-11-28 12:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723914 Creativity, originality, attention to detail https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723955 I think I had a creative and original idea and paid attention to detail in the objects I chose to use in terms of their sensory val]]> 2018-11-28 12:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308723955 No engagement but no need for it https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724030 2018-11-28 12:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724030 Engagement with audience: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724088 No engagement which is powerful and portrays the impact of sight loss ]]> 2018-11-28 12:09:53 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724088 Performative https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724289 2018-11-28 12:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724289 Reliab https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724858 2018-11-28 12:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308724858 Using ideas to develop material https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308829944 Having started with lots of different ideas you have condensed them and settled on one then used it to create and develop your work]]> 2018-11-28 15:18:13 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308829944 Ideas to inform devise and shape: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308831962 Used idea of cut piece, if you feel stongly about it keep it in ]]> 2018-11-28 15:21:28 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308831962 Selection, development and refining https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308832198 You have selected material that is relevant to your work then developed this to create a good performance. ]]> 2018-11-28 15:21:49 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308832198 Creativity, originality, attention to detail https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308834578 You’ve got a creative and original idea however you could maybe pay a bit more attention to detail. E.g: ropes all the same, what will actually be in the water (cup/bottle etc). ]]> 2018-11-28 15:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308834578 Creativity originality and attention to detail: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308834799 Using rope instead of string, 4 elements as related to love]]> 2018-11-28 15:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308834799 Reliability https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308835898 Super reliable. Great collaborative worker ]]> 2018-11-28 15:27:01 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308835898 Implementation of feedback https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308836339 It’s clear that you have taken on feedback given to you and used it to further progress your piece. However don’t let feedback get on top of you! Stick to your gut instincts]]> 2018-11-28 15:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308836339 Implementation of feedback: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308837501 What the signs say which may be changed]]> 2018-11-28 15:29:22 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308837501 Aesthetic quality https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308837513 Great aesthetic quality! I love that you’re tied to the elements and how everything has a meaning to you ]]> 2018-11-28 15:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308837513 Theory to practice https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308838626 It’s obvious that your work has been founded in theory and inspired by various practitioners. ]]> 2018-11-28 15:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308838626 Performativity https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308839283 There’s a great performativity to the piece in you laying tied up to the elements. ]]> 2018-11-28 15:31:54 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308839283 Apply theory to practice: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308840014 Yoko ono cut piece]]> 2018-11-28 15:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308840014 Engagement with au https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308840178 You don’t engage with the audience in person however I feel like this isn’t necessarily needed as you communicate with your signs]]> 2018-11-28 15:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308840178 Engagement with audience: https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308841073 Little to no engagement with audience apart from when they cut your clothes or pull on the ropes ]]> 2018-11-28 15:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/contemporary/wish/308841073