https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz Made with a wink and a smile en-us 2020-10-07 23:58:11 UTC 2020-10-09 16:18:34 UTC hello@padlet.com kfort1591 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/812154996 Step 1- Click the link, click "open new window" and go to slide 4.
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Your paper was great! I would recommend adding more transitions at the beginning of your paragraphs. I liked your lead.


]]> 2020-10-08 00:03:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/812155149 s27staa3083 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814354821 Anie Stanek
I loved how you put in detail and the sound the four wheeler made. One thing you could improve on is if someone talks maybe say Kaylee said after she spoke. But I loved you story!]]> 2020-10-08 15:58:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814354821 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814355094 CM
I think that you need to add more punctuation and fix the dialogue. Because there is a little spot at the beginning. ]]> 2020-10-08 15:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814355094 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814361076 you did amazing job and i loved the story]]> 2020-10-08 15:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814361076 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814363163 Lily Wehmer, I loved the story! I can’t believe that happened. But Mabel  add some dialogue. Great story!]]> 2020-10-08 16:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814363163 s27andm4367 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814380164 CM
I love it. But how about you go through and check your punctuation, and your dialogue ]]> 2020-10-08 16:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814380164 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814385077 Samantha Dennis, I loved your story because you had a lot of internal thinking and tension. One thing I think you should add is dialog so then you can show and not just tell.]]> 2020-10-08 16:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814385077 s27harm1726 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814388186 CM
Micah Harlan 
I think you should a bit more punctuation other than that your story’s great!]]> 2020-10-08 16:06:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814388186 s27andm4367 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814388820 LM
You did amazing! Maybe add some dialogue so we know more of what is going on, but other wise else you did great]]> 2020-10-08 16:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814388820 s27staa3083 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814390354 Anie Stanek
I loved how you put in detail like “We were so excited that we ripped the supplies out of her hands.” One thing you could add is maybe more dialogue. But I love you story a lot!]]> 2020-10-08 16:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814390354 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814391402 you did a great job ! i would add a little more dialogue but otherwise it was amazing!!!!!!]]> 2020-10-08 16:07:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814391402 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814403676 Alyssa Kelley
I really liked your story, but something you could work on is your capitalization and punctuation. You could also work on adding in some dialogue. Other than that you story was great!]]> 2020-10-08 16:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814403676 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814414104 Km

I loved you story it had a lot of excitement and a lot of different people talking I love how you did not just have the person talk you tould there names]]> 2020-10-08 16:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814414104 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814417439
I think you did a great job on your story. I love how much dialogue and detail you had in your story. And overall your story was awesome!!!

]]> 2020-10-08 16:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814417439 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814419681 Lily Wehmer, the story was great. You should try to matey explain more of what you are saying in some places. Except for that it was good.]]> 2020-10-08 16:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814419681 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814422761 Samantha Dennis, I liked the transition words but I think you should work on punctuation because I seen a couple sentences with no periods. I think you could also work on organization because you didn’t separate your story into paragraphs.]]> 2020-10-08 16:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814422761 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814432820 JM

Your story was very good I love how you had a lot of detail and and talking]]> 2020-10-08 16:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/814432820 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/817039341 I liked how you wrote a lot in your story! But next time can you make some paragraphs smaller..? I kinda couldn’t read.]]> 2020-10-09 15:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/817039341 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/817207856 I liked your story Eli just put some more thoughts 

]]> 2020-10-09 16:04:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/817207856 https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/817242121 Wow Kennedy your story was amazing but sad we should definitely turn it into a movie🤗highly recommend to read]]> 2020-10-09 16:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kfort1591/k2wn53gmk14qw4iz/wish/817242121