This texts shows Warren Fellows as being the victim lacking basic health and safety or human rights. It used first person throughout the text so readers could understand his situation, Quotes like “Stinking room” and “Mass of bodies” makes readers almost feel sorry for Fellows. The character being in a dark room portrays the character vs environment, this is also emotive language. By using first person and emotive language, the text portrays Warren Fellows to be the victim. 

Callum Dolan

In this excerpt, Warren Fellows is strongly perceived as being a victim as a result from the lack of basic health and safety, and human rights, and his specific use of language features such as emotive language and first person further emphasises this. The use of the emotive language ‘Desperate with fear, I begged’, conveys how scared he really was and realising his human rights aren’t available to him. Fellows’ goes on to repeatably contribute the personal pronoun ‘I’, which is used to enhance the perception on who this was happening too and that he is a victim to this prison. 

Warren Fellows is portrayed as a victim lacking basic human rights this is shown through a range of language features. The usage of first person and the personal pronoun ‘I’ is used throughout to enhance the perception that fellows is a victim. Descriptive language such as “we were all wearing chains” is used to show the reader that his basic human rights within the prison are being taken away from him, therefore showing the textural structure of character Vs environment making the reader emphasis the situation that he is in. 

- Bella M

Warren Fellows was portrayed a victim by using descriptive language such as 'mass bodies' and 'we were all wearing chains' to show a lack of basic health and safety. Fellows also used personal pronouns and emotive language like 'Desperate with fear I begged'  to influence the reader to see him as a victim. 
- Lily