https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv en-us 2018-08-22 00:53:08 UTC 2025-10-22 13:08:30 UTC hello@padlet.com owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274460992 2018-08-22 00:55:05 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274460992 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274460994 2018-08-22 00:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274460994 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461121 Revision is the stage in the writing process where the author reviews, alters, and amends her or his message, according to what has been written in the draft. Revision follows drafting and precedes editing. Drafting and revising often form a loop as a work moves back and forth between the two stages.]]> 2018-08-22 00:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461121 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461450 Regie Routman Says: Assess Ss understanding of revision by charting WHAT WE KNOW ABOUT REVISION as a class. (Date it!) Revisit  after demonstrations  and shared experiences and ask them to redefine revision. (Date it!) Keep revisiting!]]> 2018-08-22 00:59:42 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461450 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461648 Modelled writing, Save drafts and show Ss how they change over time. Let them see your messy work so they know their own messy work is expected. ]]> 2018-08-22 01:01:32 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461648 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461769 Revise a piece of work together under the doc camera or the on chart paper.

]]> 2018-08-22 01:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461769 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461863 Revising is where the most of your time will be. Make sure Ss know it matters. ]]> 2018-08-22 01:03:27 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461863 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461953 Emphasise the work of authors as you read. Be intentional in looking out for authors who write well. Ask: What did this author do to help you make meaning? Maybe you can do it too?

]]> 2018-08-22 01:04:11 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274461953 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462045 Read out loud for rythm and flow. IF we read out loud we can see where our reader might trip and we can see how the words flow on the page. It is often about the SOUND of writing rather than the appearance.]]> 2018-08-22 01:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462045 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462197 Substituting one word for a more complex or different word isn't the point. It's about meaning making and choice of words rather than complexity or just substituting for new words]]> 2018-08-22 01:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462197 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462487 Read aloud, Think aloud and conferences - focus in on author craft and encourage Ss to go back to their work to 'have a go!']]> 2018-08-22 01:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462487 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462711 Regie Routmann advises you save and date all drafts. This is a history of the writing, process and efforts. ]]> 2018-08-22 01:07:51 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462711 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462879 Cross out - don't erase. We want to see your mistakes.
Write on every other line so revision can be done above
"Lassoo" sentences with arrows to show movement 
Add revision Symbols 

]]> 2018-08-22 01:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274462879 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274463077 Short peices mean you go round the writing cycle quicker... more opportunies to visit each section 

]]> 2018-08-22 01:10:04 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274463077 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274463273 Lots of writing (in the real world) never gets revised. So students can choose pieces they don't want to carry on. ie - text messages, musing, reflections, emails]]> 2018-08-22 01:11:26 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274463273 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274463841 Revising is the place we work the most! ]]> 2018-08-22 01:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274463841 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274464145 2018-08-22 01:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274464145 owh2 https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274464212 2018-08-22 01:18:52 UTC https://padlet.com/owh2/k1frou1prtbv/wish/274464212