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      <title>Gamma lesson 36  by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-10-13 12:54:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Celine Chee corrected</title>
         <author>carolynwsy07</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   It's monsoon season, it has been raining perpetually since last week. My family and I had been worried sick about the impending flash flood since the water level rose dramatically that it flooded the low- lying areas. </p><p>   As the water surged the whole village started evacuated, carrying their belongings. The flood relief center tragically was dealing with other problems while numerous houses and livestock were swept away. We're stranded on a rooftop and trying to not get engulfed by the water. With no means of escape, we anxiously awaited the arrival of the flood relief center. </p><p>    After an eternity, the flood relief center finally came to our aid, while guiding us to a safer place. We're in great despair because we suffered a great loss. Despite our sorrow, we're grateful for them to help us in that situation.</p><p>corrected</p><p>     It <strong>was</strong> monsoon season, and it <strong>had</strong> been raining perpetually since last week. My family and I <strong>were</strong> worried sick about the impending flash flood as the water level <strong>rose so dramatically that</strong> it flooded the <strong>low-lying</strong> areas.</p><p>    As the water surged, the whole village <strong>began to evacuate</strong>, carrying their belongings. The flood relief centre <strong>was tragically dealing</strong> with other problems while numerous houses and livestock were swept away. We <strong>were</strong> stranded on a rooftop, <strong>trying not to get</strong> engulfed by the water. With no means of escape, we anxiously awaited the arrival of the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>     After what seemed like an eternity, the <strong>rescue team</strong> finally came to our aid and <strong>guided us</strong> to a safer place. We <strong>were</strong> in great despair because we had suffered a huge loss. Despite our sorrow, we <strong>were grateful to them for helping us</strong> in that situation.</p><p> </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-10-13 13:04:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>kean lim corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>        It was the monsoon season and it has been raining perpetually recently. Ben and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>        As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief center for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the roof top. They scared to death as the water rapidly engulfed their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the rescue teams.</p><p>          After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally come to their aid, they carefully guided the victims onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair because they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they are grateful that they are safe and sound.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>       It was the monsoon season and it <strong>had</strong> been raining perpetually recently. Ben and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief <strong>centre</strong> for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the <strong>rooftop</strong>. They <strong>were scared to death</strong> as the water rapidly engulfed their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally <strong>came</strong> to their aid <strong>and carefully guided</strong> the victims onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair because they <strong>had suffered</strong> a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they <strong>were</strong> grateful that they <strong>were</strong> safe and sound.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-10-13 13:06:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cheong Wai Lok  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  It was monsoon season, it had been raining perpetually for 3 days. John and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas. </p><p>  as the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief center for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the roof top. They were scared to death as the water rapidly engulfed their houses. With no means of escape, they could only anxiously wait for the arrival of the rescue team.  </p><p>   After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally came to their aid, they carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help. </p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>      It was monsoon season, <strong>and it</strong> had been raining perpetually for <strong>three</strong> days. John and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p><strong>      As</strong> the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief <strong>centre</strong> for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the <strong>rooftop</strong>. They were scared to death as the water rapidly engulfed their houses. With no means of escape, they could only anxiously <strong>await</strong> the rescue team.</p><p>        After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally came to their aid <strong>and</strong> carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they <strong>had suffered</strong> a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>~ Angelique Tang ~corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       It was monsoon season and it had been raining perpetually for three days. My family and I were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas. </p><p><br></p><p>     As the water surged, the villagers were evacuated to a flood relief centre which was just a stone’s throw away from them for shelter. Tragically, a numerous house and livestock were swept way by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the roof top. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their house. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival for the rescue teams.</p><p><br></p><p>       After what seems like an eternity, the rescue team finally came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>         It was monsoon season and it had been raining perpetually for three days. My family and I were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>         As the water surged, the villagers were evacuated to a flood relief centre <strong>which was just a stone’s throw away for shelter.</strong> Tragically, numerous houses and livestock <strong>were swept away</strong> by  the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the rooftop. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously <strong>awaited the arrival of the rescue teams.</strong></p><p>          After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-10-13 13:13:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jia Ying corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>        It was a monsoon <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://season.It">season. It had been raining perpetually for three days. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</a></p><p>        As the water surged , the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for safety. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the roof top. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their house. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue teams.</p><p>        After what seemed like an eternity, rescue team finally came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue teams for their help.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>       It was <strong>the monsoon season</strong>. It <strong>had been raining perpetually for three days</strong>. Ivan and his family were <strong>worried sick</strong> about the <strong>impending flash flood</strong>. The next day, the <strong>water level rose dramatically</strong> and <strong>flooded the low-lying areas</strong>.</p><p>      As the water surged, the villagers <strong>evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for safety</strong>. Tragically, numerous <strong>houses and livestock were swept away</strong> by the merciless flood. The victims were <strong>stranded on the rooftops</strong>. They were <strong>scared to death</strong> as the water <strong>rapidly inundated their houses</strong>. With no means of escape, they <strong>anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue team</strong>.</p><p>      After what seemed like an eternity, the <strong>rescue team finally came to their aid</strong> and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in <strong>great despair</strong> as they <strong>suffered a huge loss</strong>. <strong>Despite their sorrow</strong>, they were <strong>grateful to the rescue team</strong> for their help.</p><p><strong>corrected </strong></p><p>          It was <strong>the monsoon season</strong>. It had been raining perpetually for three days. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>       As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for safety. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the <strong>rooftops</strong>. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their <strong>houses</strong>. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>      After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Zachary corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   It was a monsoon <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://season.It">season.It</a> has been raining <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://perpetually.My">perpetually.My</a> family and I were worried sick about the impending flash flood.The next day, the water level rose dramaticlly and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p><br/></p><p>    As the water surges, the villager evacuated to a nearby flood felief centre for shelter. Tragically numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The villagers were stranded on the roof top. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated there houses.With no means of escaped, they could only anxiously awaited the arrival as the rescue teams.</p><p><br/></p><p>      After what seem like enternity, the rescue teams finally came to their aid as they carefully guided them on to the boat.E Verne was  in great despair as they suffered a huge loss.Despite their loss, they were. still grateful to be safe.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>         It was <strong>monsoon season</strong>. It <strong>had</strong> been raining perpetually. My family and I were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose <strong>dramatically</strong> and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>As the water <strong>surged</strong>, the <strong>villagers</strong> evacuated to a nearby flood <strong>relief</strong> centre for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The villagers were stranded on the <strong>rooftop</strong>. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated <strong>their</strong> houses. With no means of <strong>escape</strong>, they could only anxiously <strong>await</strong> the arrival <strong>of the rescue team</strong>.</p><p>        After what <strong>seemed</strong> like an <strong>eternity</strong>, the rescue <strong>team</strong> finally came to their aid <strong>and</strong> carefully guided them <strong>onto</strong> the <strong>boats</strong>. <strong>Everyone</strong> was in great despair as they <strong>had suffered</strong> a huge loss. Despite their <strong>sorrow</strong>, they were still gratefu<strong>l to the rescue team for saving them.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Yuan Kai corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       It was a monsoon season, it has been raining perpetually for a week. Diddy and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>       As the water surged, the villagers started evacuated to a nearby flood relief center for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the rooftop. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their house. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue team.</p><p>       After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Although they despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>         It was <strong>the monsoon season</strong>, and it <strong>had been raining perpetually for a week</strong>. Diddy and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>          As the water surged, the villagers <strong>started to evacuate</strong> to a nearby flood relief <strong>centre</strong> for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the <strong>rooftops</strong>. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their <strong>houses</strong>. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue team.</p><p>       After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. <strong>Despite their sorrow</strong>, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-10-13 13:18:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>YU XI corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  It was monsoon season. It had been raining perpetually almost a week. Mario and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p><br/></p><p>   As the water surged the villagers were evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victimes were stranded on the roof top. They scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue teams.</p><p><br/></p><p>   After what seemed like an eternity, rescue teams finally came to their aid, they guided the villagers onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow they were grateful to the rescue teams of their help. </p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>       It was monsoon season. It had been raining perpetually <strong>for almost a week</strong>. Mario and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p><strong>      As</strong> the water surged, the villagers were evacuated to a nearby flood relief <strong>centre</strong> for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The <strong>victims</strong> were stranded on the <strong>rooftop</strong>. They <strong>were scared</strong> to death as the water rapidly <strong>engulfed</strong> their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>      After what seemed like an eternity, the <strong>rescue team</strong> finally came to their aid <strong>and</strong> guided the villagers onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they <strong>had suffered</strong> a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team <strong>for their help</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Cheng Tze Tzian corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     It was the monsoon season of the year. It has been raining perpetually for 3 weeks at Ivan's house. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas at Ivan's house.</p><p>    As the waster surged, the whole neighborhood evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre, including Ivan's family. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the terrifying flood. The victims were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue teams. </p><p>      After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally arrived at our neighborhood. all of us hop on to the boat as fast as possible. Everyone was in great despair because we all suffered a huge loss in terms of our house, money, and many more valuable stuff for ourselves. Despite their sorrow, we were still grateful to the rescue teams for their help.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>        It was <strong>the monsoon season</strong>. It <strong>had</strong> been raining perpetually for <strong>three</strong> weeks <strong>in Ivan’s area</strong>. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas <strong>near Ivan’s house</strong>.</p><p>         As the <strong>water</strong> surged, the whole neighborhood evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre, including Ivan’s family. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the <strong>raging</strong> flood. The victims were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>      After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally arrived at <strong>their</strong> neighborhood. <strong>All of them hopped onto</strong> the <strong>boats</strong> as fast as possible. Everyone was in great despair because they <strong>had suffered</strong> a huge loss, including their homes, money, and other valuable belongings. Despite their sorrow, they were still grateful to the <strong>rescue team</strong> for their help.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Ivan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>        It was monsoon season and it had been raining perpetually for four days. My family and I were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>        As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the roof top. The were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue teams.</p><p>        After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue teams finally came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue teams for their help.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>         It was monsoon season and it had been raining perpetually for four days. My family and I were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>         As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. The victims were stranded on the <strong>rooftop</strong>. <strong>They were</strong> scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>       After what seemed like an eternity, the <strong>rescue team</strong> finally came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they <strong>had suffered</strong> a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the <strong>rescue team</strong> for their help.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>zende corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    It was monsoon season and it had been raining perpetually lot of days. My family was worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose fastly, and rise until the low lying areas.</p><p>   As the water surged, the villagers were evacuted to a nearby flood relief centre. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood. Some of the victims were stranded on the roof top. They were scared to death as the water rapidly engulfed their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue teams.</p><p>     After the flooded, the rescue team finally come to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Beside that, they were grateful to the rescue team for their help.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>       It was <strong>the monsoon season</strong>, and it <strong>had been raining perpetually for many days</strong>. My family was <strong>worried sick</strong> about the <strong>impending flash flood</strong>. The next day, the <strong>water level rose rapidly</strong> and <strong>flooded the low-lying areas</strong>.</p><p>As the water surged, the villagers <strong>were evacuated</strong> to a nearby <strong>flood relief centre</strong>. Tragically, numerous <strong>houses and livestock were swept away</strong> by the merciless flood. Some of the victims were <strong>stranded on the rooftops</strong>. They were <strong>scared to death</strong> as the water <strong>rapidly engulfed their houses</strong>. With no means of escape, they <strong>anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue team</strong>.</p><p>After <strong>the flood</strong>, the <strong>rescue team finally came to their aid</strong> and carefully guided them onto the boats. Everyone was in <strong>great despair</strong> as they <strong>suffered a huge loss</strong>. <strong>Despite their sorrow</strong>, they were <strong>grateful to the rescue team</strong> for their help.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Lam Yi Tong corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  It was a monsoon season because it had been raining perpetually for three days.Micheal &nbsp;and her family were worried sick about the impending flash flood .The next day,the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying ares.<br>&nbsp;   As the water surged,the villagers evacuated to a just a stone's throw away flood relief centre for safety .Tragically,numerous houses and live stock were swept away by the merciless flood.The victims was stranded in a house.They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses .With no means escape ,they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue teams.</p><p>    After what seemed like an eternity,the rescue team finally came to their aid,they carefully guided them in the boats.Everyone was in great despair as they suffered a huge loss.Despite their sorrow,they were grateful to the rescue team for the help.</p><p><strong> corrected</strong></p><p>        It was <strong>monsoon season</strong> because it had been raining perpetually for three days. <strong>Michael and his family</strong> were worried sick about the impending flash flood. <strong>The</strong> next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying <strong>areas</strong>.</p><p>       As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to <strong>a flood relief centre just a stone’s throw away</strong> for safety. Tragically, numerous houses and <strong>livestock</strong> were swept away by the merciless flood. The <strong>victims were</strong> stranded <strong>in their houses</strong>. They were scared to death as the water rapidly inundated their houses. With no means <strong>of escape</strong>, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>       After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally came to their aid <strong>and</strong> carefully guided them <strong>onto the boats</strong>. Everyone was in great despair as they <strong>had suffered</strong> a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the rescue team for <strong>their help</strong>.<br>&nbsp; </p>]]></description>
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         <title>Lee Jing Heng corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    It was moonsoon season. It has been raining perpetually for 3 day. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day,the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>    As the water surged,the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for shelter. Tragically numerous houses and livestock. They were stranded on the roof top. They were scared to death as the water rapidly engulfed their houses. Withno means of escape,they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue team.</p><p>    After what seemed like an eternity,rescue team came to their aid and carefully guided them. Everyone was in great despain when they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to rescue them.</p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>         It was <strong>monsoon</strong> season. It <strong>had</strong> been raining perpetually for <strong>three days</strong>. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the water level rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>        As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for shelter. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock <strong>were swept away, and the villagers were stranded on the rooftops</strong>. They were scared to death as the water rapidly engulfed their houses. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue team.</p><p>       After what seemed like an eternity, <strong>the rescue team</strong> came to their aid and carefully guided them <strong>to safety</strong>. Everyone was in great <strong>despair</strong> as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful <strong>to the rescue team for their help</strong>.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Toby corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p> It was a monsoon <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://season.It">season. It</a> had been raining perpetually for two days. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day the water rose dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>As the water surged the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for shutter for safety. Tragically numerous houses and livestock were swept away by the merciless flood the victims were stranded on the roof top their houses. They were scared to death as the water inundated. With no means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the rescue teams.</p><p><br/></p><p>  After what seemed like an eternity, the rescue team finally came to their aid and carefully guided them onto the boat. In great despair as they suffered a huge loss. Everyone was despite their sorrow, but they were grateful to the redcue teams for their help. </p><p><strong>corrected </strong></p><p>         It was <strong>monsoon season</strong>. It <strong>had</strong> been raining perpetually for <strong>three days</strong>. Ivan and his family were worried sick about the impending flash flood. The next day, the <strong>water level rose</strong> dramatically and flooded the low-lying areas.</p><p>         As the water surged, the villagers evacuated to a nearby flood relief centre for <strong>shelter</strong> and safety. Tragically, numerous houses and livestock <strong>were swept away, and the victims were stranded on the rooftops</strong>. They were scared to death as the water rapidly <strong>inundated their houses</strong>. With <strong>no</strong> means of escape, they anxiously awaited the arrival of the <strong>rescue team</strong>.</p><p>       After what seemed like an eternity, the <strong>rescue team</strong> finally came to their aid and carefully guided them <strong>onto the boats</strong>. Everyone was in great <strong>despair</strong> as they suffered a huge loss. Despite their sorrow, they were grateful to the <strong>rescue team</strong> for their help.</p>]]></description>
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