https://padlet.com/24aeggert/jzyb09q38qaf Thanks for reading my writing pieces! Please keep your comments appropriate and positive. en-us 2018-12-05 15:18:09 UTC 2018-12-07 15:10:21 UTC hello@padlet.com 24ili https://padlet.com/24aeggert/jzyb09q38qaf/wish/312252428 I loved your writing piece, it had great description and the plot was well formatted.
Isabelle Li]]> 2018-12-07 14:56:59 UTC https://padlet.com/24aeggert/jzyb09q38qaf/wish/312252428 24ili https://padlet.com/24aeggert/jzyb09q38qaf/wish/312258619 Maybe you could not say "so" as much in your story because it repeats a lot in the story.]]> 2018-12-07 15:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/24aeggert/jzyb09q38qaf/wish/312258619