https://padlet.com/max361/jz8r4u65p5xr Made by Max en-us 2018-09-10 01:51:21 UTC 2018-09-10 02:09:03 UTC hello@padlet.com max361 https://padlet.com/max361/jz8r4u65p5xr/wish/279233926 Three pages per scene is to short because you can't fit enough interesting movement/action or dialogue  into that little amount of text to keep the audience interested. It also would look odd on stage as it would be way to short to be good. I think all our scenes fit in except scene two and four because although I like them and think we need them in the play the need some changing such as a reason for grandpa john to ask about his grandchild remembering things in scene four, that's just my opinion though. We could improve our play by adding in more movement when its just talking around a table like in scene one because that's really boring for the audience to watch. 

Technically Mr Quayle "wrote" the script but as he said he just weaved all the separate parts that we wrote into one draft of our script. I think most peoples voices have been heard although if people didn't think their ideas where good enough they might not have contributed them, therefore their ideas not getting put into the final play. I think that if you said your ideas at the start of the play process they would be way more likely to get put in then now because we already have the shape of the play written out, like at the start I got heaps of my ideas put in the play but now most big ones get rejected.

I would like to play Dante because I created him to my style so hes the person I like the most and he has quite a big roll in the play which I haven't really had in past performances. Dante is a very adventurous but cautious person and is rejected by most other people in society because of how he has to dress and look, always dirty, ruined clothes, smells odd.

]]> 2018-09-10 01:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/max361/jz8r4u65p5xr/wish/279233926 max361 https://padlet.com/max361/jz8r4u65p5xr/wish/279234091 In our play we have just received our second draft and are working on editing/changing it into our final script that we will use to preform. We have chosen the actors for the minor parts in our play and are intending on choosing the main parts soon. Our play is pretty lengthy but I think It would be better if it was bit longer although I dont think we can make anymore significant changes to our play.]]> 2018-09-10 01:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/max361/jz8r4u65p5xr/wish/279234091