https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf This memoir is about a long, relaxing beach vacation with my family. en-us 2018-10-19 12:57:56 UTC 2018-10-24 12:35:24 UTC hello@padlet.com 2022bakerlisk https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/294799074 On the Ferris wheel late at night.]]> 2018-10-19 13:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/294799074 2022welchj https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295418944 loved the story has great detail and it sounds like a great experience.]]> 2018-10-22 12:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295418944 mcgrailc https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295425208 I like how the opening lines put you on the Ferris Wheel, high up in the air where you can see everything and everyone. A reader can truly sense you and your siblings' excitement when you get to the house and run straight in with the key to pick your bedrooms. It's always hard to leave a vacation when it is over.]]> 2018-10-22 13:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295425208 2022montase https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295426006 I liked how you showed your experience of going away on vacation with your family and describing what you did and where you went. I also liked how you emphasized how excited you were to get on the trip.]]> 2018-10-22 13:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295426006 2022meuniera https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295717067 your introduction was so interesting and it made me want to actually read more it was 10/10]]> 2018-10-22 22:18:05 UTC https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/295717067 2022swensonb https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/296221919 I like how you gave detail about what happened when you got there and what happened on those 4 days.]]> 2018-10-23 23:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/296221919 2022noelf https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/296395047 I think that the way you described everything was very nice it made me almost think i was in your shoes i liked the colors You used to describe how the sky looked like everything about it was on point 10/10]]> 2018-10-24 12:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/2022bakerlisk/jz4ffnrv5ctf/wish/296395047