A mysterious night by nikos papadopoulos

Νίκος Παπαδόπουλος

nikmyk — 2015-03-02 19:35:45 UTC

Κάνε διπλό κλικ πάνω στην εικόνα με το σπίτι για να δημιουργήσεις το χώρο σου.

Γράψε το όνομα σου.

Διάβασε τι έγραψαν οι προηγούμενοι συμμαθητές σου και συνέχισε την ιστορία.Χρησιμοποιήστε φαντασία και τους Past Simple και Past Continuous!Πρώτος ξεκινάει ο Ιωάννης.

Περιμένω να διαβάσω μία ιστορία μυστηρίου που συμβαίνει μέσα σε μία μόνο βραδιά!Η ιστορία ξεκινάει στις 7 που βραδιάζει και τελειώνει στις 6 που ξημερώνει.

Δημιουργείστε τους ήρωες σας με τα ονόματά τους,γράψτε τα πραγματικά τους λόγια-διαλόγους.

Μπορείτε να ξαναγράψετε και κάποιες μέρες αργότερα αφού γράψουν αρκετοί συμμαθητές σας.

Για να διορθώσεις κάτι που έγραψες κάνε κλικ στο μολυβάκι κάτω δεξιά στο χώρο που γράφεις!

The begining of our mysterious story

nikmyk — 2015-03-02 19:49:45 UTC

It was a cold night of March.There was a strange silence in the house.At seven o'clock Mr.........

John Mario K <3 ! --Xanthi

2015-03-03 11:56:13 UTC

Mr. Smith went into the kitchen to drink some water . Suddenly the bell rang ! Mr. Smith went to open the door and he saw a mysterious creature .

2015-03-03 18:40:31 UTC

MARIA K. --Xanthi

2015-03-04 19:47:13 UTC

The creature was green with ten eyes,two noses and twenty legs. It was very frightening!Mr Smith was afraid of this creature and he began to scream: Help!Help! But nobody listened to him.

NIKH S. --Xanthi

2015-03-05 12:20:35 UTC

Suddenly his daughter, Katherine,who was playing with her toys in her room , heard him and she went to help him.When she saw the creature, she asked its name but, it didn't answer.So, Katherine called Alex, her cousin, to help them.

GEORGIA I.--Xanthi

2015-03-05 13:31:36 UTC

When Alex went to his cousin's house he met the monster which was eating nuttela.Alex was happy because Kathrine wasn't in danger.But while he was talking with Kathrine the bell rang again.

IRENE K. ! ! ! (: --Xanthi

2015-03-05 15:11:07 UTC

Then a second monster entered the house. It was the monster's mummy. She asked her son:''Why are you here without my permission?I'm going to punish you!''After that she took her son back to their house.It was half past ten.

ADAM E.--Xanthi

2015-03-07 10:11:16 UTC

At eleven o'clock, Mr Smith, his daughter Kathrine and Alex were having their dinner. Suddenly, they heard a strange noise in their garden! They ran outside and saw two trees fighting!!! Mr Smith called the police because he was really afraid of that!

ARGYRIS Z.--English teacher in Kozani

2015-03-07 16:49:16 UTC

"Tree fights can be really nasty, especially, in the middle of the night", he thought.

ARGYRIS Z.--English teacher in Kozani

2015-03-07 17:16:42 UTC

Soon a police siren interrupted the silence of the night and a patrol car arrived. It was strange. The back seat of the police car was full with bushes. Probably, they were in a fight, too

Evi K.--Xanthi

2015-03-08 09:03:23 UTC

When the police arrived they asked them: ''What's wrong?'' and they all answered:''Two trees are fighting in the garden!!!'' as they were afraid.The police didn't believe them and left . The family was very scared and they decided

Aris S.--Kozani

2015-03-09 13:22:50 UTC

to watch out of their window during the night. At midnight while they were drinking coffee

Mario k.--Xanthi

2015-03-09 13:47:00 UTC

they saw a thing moving in the yard.Mrs Smith went out to the yard but the others did not follow her.

Lefteris Ts.--Xanthi

2015-03-09 14:18:57 UTC

When Mrs Smith approached the creature she was scared because of its face!It was a tall, creepy,slim creature!Then she started running until he fell in

Olina--Kozani

2015-03-09 16:08:15 UTC

a deep and dark well. "Oοοοοοοοοοοοο" she cried and BLOOM....she fell in like a rock in the sea.

Thanasis--Xanthi

2015-03-09 17:37:35 UTC

Mr. Smith heard his wife who was calling him for help.So he went to his wife,helped her come out of the well and brought her back to their house.Suddenly Kathrine heard a sound.She opened the door and saw a monster who had twenty eyes and nineteen noses !!!The monster was kindhearted and Kathrine told him to enter the house.The monster saw the merenda with oreo on the hob and ate it.

Evi L.--Xanthi

2015-03-09 19:29:40 UTC

The monster said:''I like merenda with oreo!Yummy,yummy!!!''.Suddenly Mr.Smith's wife woke up.She said to the monster:

George B--Xanthi

2015-03-09 20:04:29 UTC

''Stay up during the night and watch out of their window''.They were drinking their third cup of coffee at half past two.

ERVA--Xanthi

2015-03-09 20:50:15 UTC

As long as they were having coffee they could hear the wolves howling...Suddenly someone knocked on the door. Mr. Smith opened the door and looked through. No one was there.

Aleco Ts.--Kozani

2015-03-10 05:27:57 UTC

But he saw footsteps on the ground, brown like mud.But it was merenda. Someοne was plunging feet in merenda,knocked the door and disappeared. Naughty kids!

John G--Xanthi

2015-03-11 15:35:06 UTC

Then the naughty kids ran very quickly and seemed startled.After that, Mr. Smith thought that the kids might have knocked on the door and he was very scared!!!

ANI--Xanthi

2015-03-11 18:48:46 UTC

It was ten to four.He decided to close his eyes and his ears,because he wanted to sleep and he didn't want to hear anything, but he couldn't...

Evelina L.--Kozani

2015-03-14 09:39:43 UTC

Meranda pots interrupted his sleeping. Maybe his belly was empty! His decision was slices of tsoureki with merenda and butter.

Angelos (o Mero eimai kyrie)--Kozani

2015-03-14 13:11:32 UTC

After that,he opened the fridge and ate fruit ,some feta,a jar of honey,some chicken with potatoes and a birthday cake. Then he felt thirsty and drank a carton of juice and coke.It was five past five.

Cathrine--Kozani

2015-03-15 09:15:05 UTC

So,Mr.Smith went to bed with his stomach full. While he was sleeping he dreamt of forests with flowers,trees and beautiful birds singing .Suddenly he heard a driiiiiiiiiiiin sound!Was it a man cutting a tree down or his alarm clock?

Rosoula Th. - Kozani

2015-03-17 17:38:31 UTC

It was his alarm clock. ''What's the time?'' he asked himself. It was ten to six . It was strange!Mr. Smith was so tired!He walked out of his room. Then he saw a fat elf and a little fairy with a blue dress.

Παπαδόπουλος Νίκος-- THE END OF THE STORY

nikmyk — 2015-03-19 20:13:40 UTC

Both the elf and the fairy smiled to Mr.Smith and told him not to worry.They assured him that everything was going to be fine!A strong wind took them away as if they had never existed!So strange!

I woke up all in sweat!''What a strange night!What a mysterious dream!'' I said to myself!Just then the alarm clock rang.It was twenty to eight.I had to get up and be prepared for the seminar about storywriting.

Παπαδόπουλος Νίκος

nikmyk — 2015-03-19 20:29:41 UTC

Special thanks to Mr. Argiris Zimaras,his pupils and of course my pupils for their participation in writing this mysterious story.