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      <title>TOK - Student Sample A Commentary by AAMNA AHAMED</title>
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         <title>The Commentary</title>
         <author>aam33</author>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-23 08:34:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>asstdpctmz</author>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-23 08:35:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Madumitha</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/aam33/jy541brk2kx68a30/wish/2931968515</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>9/10</p><p>The commentary is very well explained with convincing evidences and explainations that has been linked very well with the IA prompt.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-25 03:46:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Solai</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>8/10</p><p>it identifies three objects and their real-world contexts. Links between each of the three objects and the selected IA prompt are</p><p>explained. there is a justification for all the objects and evidence supporting it</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-25 04:17:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aamnah&#39;s response</title>
         <author>aam33</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>9/10</p><p>The commentary is lucid and coherent. </p><p>The three distinct objects are strongly connected to the IA prompt and are associated with the knower's real world context.</p><p>Appropriate supporting points but could have been more precise.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-25 04:18:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lasya</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>8/ 10</p><p><br/></p><p>The exhibition displays three objects and connections are made to the IA prompt and between the objects clearly.</p><p> The students lacks clarity and does not connect some of the references with the IA prompt</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-25 05:33:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Vaishnavi</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>8/10</p><p>-The objects very well suit the IA prompt</p><p>-The content of first two objects is  convincing and coherent</p><p>-The commentary of the third object feels vague. </p><p>- The justification is quite similar and repeated for all the objects. </p><p>-TOK concepts have been used </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-26 04:49:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Divesh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>8/10</p><p>A clear link between the prompt and the three objects can be seen as all the objects represent a certain culture. The student explains the link between the prompt and the objects to some extent. Valid RLEs have been used and there is a clear justification for choosing those RLEs. Overall, it was a convincing response.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-26 04:49:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kim Ji Hyeok</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>8/10</p><p><br/></p><p>all three object are well connected with the IA prompt. Knower's knowledge on each objects were different from a person from different culture. In some objects, real world text is not well defined</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-03-26 04:51:33 UTC</pubDate>
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