FEEDBACK - FOR SHAH by Mr Andre

Melissa

melissa_loh_xin_ru — 2025-04-18 14:33:25 UTC

The audios are so pleasing to the ears and used so aptly! Love the concept and the message, your video encapsulated them well. Felt like I was going backwards in time and reliving memories. Perhaps the text can have a shadow or outline rather than just the yellow for easier read, though they are still readable and doesn't affect much! Awesome :D

Cheryl Wong

cheryl_wong_fernandez — 2025-04-18 15:59:53 UTC

The themes in your website and video are very interconnected and I love how closely knit your inspiration and research was to your video. I felt the emotions you put in with the plethora of photos and video capturing all the moments in your life, I wish you could have put more videos or maybe a recording of your own voice at the end! Ultimately it is a job well done!

Lary

dianaprinceho99 — 2025-04-19 03:36:39 UTC

First look at your website and theme it gave a very black & white vibe like horror and I can see the sentimental value you were trying to bring in the video and website as well. However, I do thing you could have added a little more "life" to it like adding videos. Other than that, good job man!

Marcus

nie23lphm — 2025-04-19 08:23:52 UTC

The digitial portfolio depicts a very strong minimalist approach that is also reflected in your artefact. What I enjoyed even more was the interstellar music so its gets an A+ for me! One small change to consider would be to incorporate a progress bar in the digital artfeact to allow users to back track on certain segments or implement a full screen mode.