https://padlet.com/27dmakras/jxintrzta6z8udw7 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 21:05:09 UTC 2021-06-18 14:46:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png https://padlet.com/27dmakras/jxintrzta6z8udw7/wish/1066968211 Small moment snap shot

Hi Bella i liked how your used the onamona paia when you said the car door slammed or when you stomped your foot it just made me imagine how excited you were. I also like how when you described the man as a man in all camouflage and that it was unlikely for him to work there and with the bunny when you held out the carrot 🥕 so he slowly cam onto you lap and he felt like heaven. I wish that you could have talked a bit more about snickers and how he looked how his ears looked,etc]]> 2021-01-08 13:54:31 UTC https://padlet.com/27dmakras/jxintrzta6z8udw7/wish/1066968211 27pboyle https://padlet.com/27dmakras/jxintrzta6z8udw7/wish/1513045966 hi Bella i liked how you describe how it takes away the passion of the kids in the first paragraph, so that the parents, teachers, and school district, etc know. I like how you explain in the beginning how music can open up new jobs and if you get rid of them they wont have the opportunity of a music filled job. I wish sometimes when you said arts you would have said musical arts the first time because at first I thought you meant arts like paint 🎨]]> 2021-05-11 12:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/27dmakras/jxintrzta6z8udw7/wish/1513045966 27kvelizacuna https://padlet.com/27dmakras/jxintrzta6z8udw7/wish/1614450665 Hi Bella, I really enjoyed reading your story. I liked that you began with a question and I also liked that you used a lot of dialogue. I don’t have a wish for you, your story is really great.]]> 2021-06-18 14:44:18 UTC https://padlet.com/27dmakras/jxintrzta6z8udw7/wish/1614450665