https://padlet.com/23inunziata/jwsdt9k1udbi Hi! Welcome to my padlet. Thank you for stopping by to read my writing piece! Please make sure you leave nice feedback on my writing. en-us 2018-02-01 13:36:41 UTC 2018-03-02 15:52:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=https%3A%2F%2Fs3.amazonaws.com%2Fuser-media.venngage.com%2F54e71781fcd84abb946c8863745ca2e6.png&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Finfograph.venngage.com%2Fp%2F11391%2Fintroduce-emojis-to-the-classroom&docid=F40ISHhnMkRU5M&tbnid=S_2J5_EPIksQXM%3A&vet=10ahUKEwizw8OJ7ITZAhUip1kKHbxSBzkQMwjHASgIMAg..i&w=256&h=256&safe=active&bih=629&biw=1366&q=write%20emoji&ved=0ahUKEwizw8OJ7ITZAhUip1kKHbxSBzkQMwjHASgIMAg&iact=mrc&uact=8 23mmcardle https://padlet.com/23inunziata/jwsdt9k1udbi/wish/236891301 For my first star I think your intro was really good and it was pretty clear to the reader what the article is going to be about. It is good for the reader to know what they are reading about in the beginning of the writing piece because if you don't introduce it by the end of your story, then the reader will be very confused. Furthermore, for my second star I think you did your warrants really well. I believe this because they really explained your data and that helps the reader understand more about the text and the topic. Also it is good to have a strong warrant because it explains to the reader more about the topic and if they didn't understand it than it helps them understand. One wish that I will give to you is that I think you should have more creative claims but overall I really liked you piece!]]> 2018-03-01 13:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/23inunziata/jwsdt9k1udbi/wish/236891301 23ebianco https://padlet.com/23inunziata/jwsdt9k1udbi/wish/237429393 To begin, I really liked your piece because I'm gymnast and know what it feels like to get a new skill.
My first star is that I really liked how you used words like exhilarating that was a really good choice of wording and can really boost the strength.My next star is that I commend you for beginning your piece with setting I liked the way you set the scene with air and breeze it was very good. My wish for you is that you would have elaborated a bit about how you feel and maybe use that word choice like you did. It became kind of flat towards the end so just focus on keeping it strong. 
Elisa B]]> 2018-03-02 15:11:08 UTC https://padlet.com/23inunziata/jwsdt9k1udbi/wish/237429393 23jmayer https://padlet.com/23inunziata/jwsdt9k1udbi/wish/237450824 One thing I really enjoyed about your piece is how you formatted the dialogue. Another thing I really enjoyed with your piece was all the big words you used throughout the narrative. In the future, I would suggest shortening the intro.

Julianna C. Mayer]]> 2018-03-02 15:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/23inunziata/jwsdt9k1udbi/wish/237450824