P3 Plot Development - Part 1 by Nazima S Mohammed https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl What makes a successful climax en-us 2018-09-27 07:30:52 UTC 2023-07-07 07:13:52 UTC hello@padlet.com Instructions nazima_shaik_mo https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286374147 1.Read the 2 climatic scene of the same story
2.Work in groups and discuss which of the 2 scenes (Text A or Text B) is better and why.
3Type your group number before you type your discussion points
]]> 2018-09-27 07:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286374147 Text A nazima_shaik_mo https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785918 Tom and Alison were walking along the corridor. The whole corridor was quiet and empty
Suddenly they heard a shout. It was Dan, the big fat bully. He stormed over. It was so loud because of the quietness. Dan and his gang clenched his fist and punched us. Alison avoided it but Tom got hit. There was blood. Tom started to cry
]]> 2018-09-28 01:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785918 Text B nazima_shaik_mo https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785938  
Tom and Alison walked along the quiet and empty corridor to go to the canteen for recess 
Suddenly they heard shuffling noises. They turned and their jaws dropped. It was Dan and his gang of bullies. Dan sneered at Tom and Alison. 
The two friends turned to run but Dan shouted as he stormed over to them, “Hey, stop right there!” He glared at them and said, “Hand over your wallet.” When Alison and Tom did not, Dan clenched and raised his fist, ready to punch Tom. Smack! His fist landed on Tom’s nose. Blood dripped from Tom’s nose. Alison ducked in time to avoid the fist from one of Dan’s friend. Tom wailed and pleaded, “Please, stop.” Dan sniggered, “What a cry baby!” His friends laughed as they turned to leave. 
That was when they saw the headmaster glaring at them. 
]]> 2018-09-28 01:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785938 Group 3 https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785963 Text B is better because elaborates more on the story and have more details than Text A.Text b fullfils "show not tell".Text B is more interesting and has a clearer description.]]> 2018-09-28 01:22:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785963 Group 6 https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785982 ARMAAN,Nathanael.
We like text B because  it has more details and it describes the characters feeling and the plot. It also has a dramatic scene.]]> 2018-09-28 01:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286785982 Group 7 https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786013 We think Text B is better.Because there are more precise verbs , has more details and it is more interesting.When we read Text A, we feel bored,but when we read Text B, we feel more alive.
Meredith, Claryn, Kai Jun and Derron.]]> 2018-09-28 01:22:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786013 Group 9 Myint Myat, Lorraine,Lemuel, Xu Meng https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786016 i would prefer text B as there is more elaboration while text A is merely talking about what happened without elaborating. When i read text A, i feel bored as there is no further elaboration.  I ask a lot of questions,who shouted?what is it was so loud because of the quietness?  When i read text B, i get extremely interested as they describe further information.It can describe their feeling and  emotions. :P
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                      ]]> 2018-09-28 01:22:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786016 group 10 https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786034 We think text B is better because it has more elaborate  details and uses the show not tell technique it also has a better and  clearer description of what is happening than text A.I could feel the feeling of the characters clearly without any questions in
 my mind so it makes the reader understand the text well.It also has very advanced vocabulary. 

]]> 2018-09-28 01:22:52 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786034 Group 8 https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786128 Text B .It has a better and clearer description. It has more details of what happened in the scene, has more dialogues, feelings and more elaboration than Text A . 
Noah, Adam, Mabel and Roxanne : )]]> 2018-09-28 01:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786128 Group 5 Asher Lee,Tiffany,Jia Le,Grace https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786156 We like text B better because it has more details in the text like the actions,feelings,vocabulary,good phrases,sound words and the writer elaborated.]]> 2018-09-28 01:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786156 Group 1 https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786269 Sarah,Elise,Ephraim,Sherwayn and Chloe.
Text B because it has better vocabulary , better details and good phrases to describe the story.There was also more speeches in the story. They also told us what happened in between the speech and when Dan hit Tom and Alison. They also told us the enviroment around them.]]> 2018-09-28 01:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786269 Group 2 https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786489 Text B because it has more details , information and it is more exciting Plus it is interesting by the actions because of the punching and kicking and allows the reader to understand the story more and also describes the characters feelings.It also describes how the bullies told us to stop.Dan walked towards us for example the bullies  stomped towards them and clenched their fist getting ready to punch them.Then Dan]]> 2018-09-28 01:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786489 Group 4 MIKA AIDAN, Ab https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786980 We choose text B because there is more details and dialogues and is more elaborate than text A.]]> 2018-09-28 01:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286786980 Success Criteria Link nazima_shaik_mo https://padlet.com/nazima_shaik_mo/jwgcn8lmqxl/wish/286791674  
https://tinyurl.com/P3-PlotDevt-Success-Criteria2 
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