- Hafiz Maulana

- Zahra Sukma

- Difa Syahwal

SWEET MOCHI

This is a pamflet, entitled sweet mochi, the first sheet is about the description of mochi, the second sheet is about customer ratings, the Pamflet pam third sheet is about the types of mochi in the . On the opposite page, it is about how he started selling mochi, and on the last page is about contact information that can be contacted. The color of the pamphlet is interesting because the soft colors don't clash. And the font is very clear to read and we are interested in taking this pamfletbecause the pictures of the food are very delicious and the colors emotions

#B29E95 (silver pink), pink is the color of compassion, love, feminity, and playfullness.

#AFBEB9 (broken white) often associated with purity, clean, and simplicity.

#AF9E96 (rose blud) symbolized youthful love, purity, honest beauty and innocence.

ICHIHO FESTIVAL

This pamphlet is about ICHIGO FESTIVAL 2023.

Pamphlet type.

The person who made this pamphlet is Morisa.

On the first page of this pamphlet there is a title.

The implementation schedule is August 1 2023 and the names of the stars appearing on stage are Neck Deep & Kali Uchis.

On the next sheet there are the previously mentioned guest stars, marketing events (who sell food), food and drinks such as tea, soda, juice, etc.

And the next sheet contains text. Get to know more about the Ichigo Festival, which is a music festival that is held every 2 years and this music festival is a festival that takes place throughout Ichigo throughout the world and on the page there is also the name of the founder of the Ichigo Festival.

The next sheet contains the ticket prices for each seat. And then the address and contact information is carried out at the Ichigo Festival.

For color, vintage & interesting. We chose this pamphlet because we were interested in using it as a reference so that we would be inspired to learn to be a music concert committee.

Color emotions

#800000(maroon) symbolized with control, responsibility, and thoughtfullness.

#FFFDD0(cream) symbolized with comfort, and humility

font: helvetica world,arial

infomation: too much empty space,lack of clear explanation,contact person is too small and less visible,the font is too small

Leaflet

sandi color:#F0458C,#1D1814,#D60E62

font:arial,helvetica world,bukhari script,nAFfvgyNuzs

information:the font is messy,the colors are messy ,the product being sold is not attractive

Pamphlet

Nama kelompok:-Mochammad marsya

-Rafa raaida

-Salwa putri kania

•Title: Running Shoes SPC 2.0

•Content: Information about running shoes

•Contact person: +123-456-789-0,

www.runningshoes.com

•Languages feature:

Marketing message: Disc 20%, Special Sale

Persuasive: -

Simple present tense: available in 6 colors

Simple and direct languages:

Emotive languages: -

Positive languages: All of this content in this leaflet is using a positive language.

Imperative languages: Order Now

Pronoun "you" and "your": -

Singular and plural: Colors, shoes

•Color emotions: #48586A. In our opinion, the color is too thick and the main colour is not contrass with the content.

The comparison of leaflet 1 and 2: In our opinion the first leaflet is better than the second leaflet because the first leaflet is contrass and more informative. And the first leaflet's material is good than the second.

1. Arya K. V.

2. Athareta S.

3. Rafie S.

A. SMAN 6 Kota Bogor Brochure

1. Title: SMAN 6 Kota Bogor

2. Contents: This brochure tells about SMAN 6 Kota Bogor. It started with the brief explanation about the school and continued with the facilities there like mosque and the outdoor field area. There's one page on the brochure which lacking some texts and leave the text template on it. Some of the elements are rather dull and empty, but overall we think that the brochure is a great way to promote our school.

• Marketing messages: Best School

• Persuassive language: Let's joun together SMAN 6 Kota Bogor, in order to create a more dignified, modern, and outstanding education system.

• Simple present tense: ✅️ ex: Contact us

• Simple and Direct language: ✅️ ex: Let's join together

• Emotive language: ❎️

• Positive: ✅️ ex: Best school

• Imperative: Let's join together

• Pronoun: ❎️

• Singular noun: school, mosque, field, and education

• Plural noun: facilities, students, and teachers.

• Color:

- White: means clean, honest, and it expresses simplicity (#DAEODC).

- Brown: expresses simplicity and friendliness (#83776B).

- Cream: flexibility (#COC2AC).

- Orange: success, courage, confidence, and friendliness (#D49FS9).

3. Contact Person: There's the contact number (02518331732), school's email (sman6bogor@smansixbo.sch.id), and the adress (Jl. Walet No. 13, RT.02/RW.06, Tanah Sareal, Kec. Tanah Sareal, Kota Bogor, Jawa Barat, 16161.

B. Stadium Tour Brochure

Is a leaflet Created by Fikri. It contains about tour guide on old trafford stadium. The purpose of the tour guide is that provides an insight into the story of this old Trafford. The creator also include to contact's about more information. The creator use color grey #45423D to tell us about: Elegance, Authority, Knowledge, Dignity

Language features:

MM: Make the most out of your (Pronoun you,your) city escape with our excellent tours

Persuasive: I Highly recommend stadium tours and watching football at this stadium for Manchester United fans.

Once done, had the opportunity to buy Manchester United merchandise at the spacious mega store

Simple present tense: ❎️

Simple direct language:Understable

Emotive language: ❎️

Positive language: Showing the seats of football player,showing trophies/awards, to showing the difference between the home and away dressing room

Imperative Language: ❎️

Use singular and plural noun: ❎️

1️⃣

💥 Title : Heaven Cake

💥 Content : The writer write a leaflet about new variant cake

💥 Who to contact : @heaven.cake (on instagram)

                                     @cake.heaven (on twitter)

💥 Why we interest to this content? Because the new variant cake have a good design and it makes us want to buy

💥 Code color : #838B7C #B3B4AC #828278

💥 Language Features:

1. Marketing message : if you wanna feelin’ the one heaven, new

2. Persuasive : cmon on contact us

3. Simple present tense : if you wanna feelin the one heaven cmon contact us

4. Emotive language : silent

5. Positive language : if you wanna feelin the one heaven cmon contact us

6. Imperative language : contact us

7. Use pronoun “you, your” : when YOUR cake has been closed

8. Use singular and plural noun: cake

2️⃣

💥 Title : New Jeans

💥 Content : The writer write a phamplet about cookies collaboration with new jeans

💥 Who to contact : + 123-456-7890

                                     nazkia366@gmail.com

                                     www.newjeans.com

💥 Why we interest to this content? Because they sell cookies with many kinds of variant and collab with new jeans

💥 Code color : #231642 #88938F #FFFFF

💥 Language Features:

1. Marketing message : free photocard new jeans, promo necoo x new jeans,

2. Persuasive : take it don’t break it, I wanna see you taste it

3. Simple present tense : all the content use a simple present tense

4. Emotive language : taste

5. Positive language : promo necoo x new jeans, free photocard new jeans, I wanna see you taste it

6. Imperative language : contact us, don’t miss it

7. Use pronoun “you, your” : ❌

8. Use singular and plural noun: cookies, photocard

1️⃣ Content : The author writes about steaks from the best menu & favorite menu.

1️⃣ Who to contact :

• hello@happysteakkugrill.com

• www.steakkugrill.com

1️⃣ Why we are interested and choose this pamphlet?

• Because, the picture of the steak on the pamphlet is very eye-catching and looks very delicious.

1️⃣ Language features :

• Marketing message : "Happy grill and make your life meaty!"

• Persuasive : "Enjoy your beefy tomahawk and have fun!"

• Simple present tense :

• Emotive language :

  1. Every bite will have a great unforgettable sensation.

  2. This is pleasurity.

  3. Unvelievable food so taste and very crazy.

• Positive language : "Happy grill and make your life meaty!"

• Pronoun "you, your" :

  1. enjoy "your" beefy tomahawk and have fun.

  2. every part so scrumptious with a richy flavour that will make "you" crazy.

  3. make "you" done.

• Singular & Plural : Foods, rings,

• (-) The colors used are unattractive and the fonts do not match.

• Colour : #A83235, #24231E, #ADC5C6, #6E390, #A09D5C

2️⃣ Title : Batik Festival

2️⃣ Content : Explained that the annual batik festival consists of a batik festival, art exhibition, carnival, and music.

2️⃣ Who to contact :

• +123-456-7890

• /wipcreamfes

• www.wipcreamfes.com

• hello@wipcreamfess.com

2️⃣ Why we are interested and choose this pamphlet? because the information is interesting and the brochure's theme.

2️⃣ Language features :

• Plural : arts

(-) Many of the language structures are missing.

Colour : #B6B5B5, #97958F, #756A60, #322726, #B08D58

colors code :

#9A7263

#36322B

Struktur formnya

- title = cute cupcake

- conten = products sold, about the shop, history of the shop

- contact person = 082246515590

The color combination used is good, the information written is easy to understand, the design is attractive, but the font used is not appropriate, it is a bit difficult for readers to read

Language features

- marketing message = dessert with love

- persuasive = lets buy sweet and beautiful...

- simple present tense = -

- simple and direct language = yes, because the information is simple and clear

- emotive language = sweet and beautiful bread,

- positive language = yes

- imperatif language = contact us

- use pronoun " you, your" = so what are you waiting for,

- use singular and plural noun = cupcakes, desserts, strawberries.

Structure

Title: CAMT (campur aduk motor team)

Content: facility of the package, new provide, workshop

Contact person: +123-456-7890

the color combination is quite suitable, but the packages provided are too few,

Language features

- marketing massage: harga mulai Rp. 50.000

- persuasive:

- simple present tense: now provide

- simple and direct language:yes, because the information is simple

- emotive language: -

- positive languange: yes

- imperative language: booking

- use pronoun " you, your ": -

- use singular and plural noun: -

bailey nails

content: containing about nail salon ‘bailey nails’ russian menicure and pedicure

contact person: call (+628362920237) & email (Everest@Adventure.sch.id)

marketing message: discount 20%, free gel color.

persuasive: is your answer to get a pretty and healthy nails

simple present tense: is your answer to get a pretty and healthy nails

simple and direct language: ✅

emotive language: we don't think we find the emotive on this printed text.

positive language: ✅

imperative: make your appointment now! , follow us for more! , life is not perfect but your nails can be!

use pronoun “you” “your”: is “your” answer, but “your” nails, make “your” appointment

use singular and plural noun: singular (a) & plural (nails)

Pastel

- #9A4873

- #94809C

Retro

- #3E5F54

- #A23145

- #7B7634

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the content is very interesting, where the service provided is very good, so it can attract the attention of girls.

-

The pastel color combination is suitable, but in some parts it is less harmonious because it uses retro colors.

The jane, everest and adventure

Content: containing about experience adventurous activities on the everest mountain

contact person: call (021 678999), Instagram (@bailey.nails), website (www.baileynails.co.id)

marketing message: get 25% off

persuasive: the adventures are calling for you, let the adventures begin

simple present tense: this climbing activity requires more knowledge and a long time to do it.

simple and direct language:✅

emotive language: adrenaline

positive language: ✅

imperative language: get your adrenaline pumping up!, book your adventure now

use pronoun “you, your” : calling for “you”, get “your” adrenaline, pump up “your” adrenaline.

use singular and plural noun: singular (a, mountain) & plural (days, activities)

The color combination used in this brochure is very suitable, where the use of brown and blue here depicts nature, so it is in harmony with the contents of this brochure which discusses "Everest & Adventure".

Blue

- #464459

- #7B8497

Brown

- #7A4E3F

- #97705A

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This brochure explains in detail what activities will be carried out on an adventure on Mount Everest

-

The printing process for this brochure is not HD enough, and the images presented are less attractive and don't describe the activities that will be carried out in this adventure, so it doesn't attract the audience's attention.

Language features

Marketing message:

Persuasive: Sex education in adolescents is very important to teach.

Simple present tense: Sex education is high quality teaching and learning about a broad variety of topics related to sex and Sexuality.

Simple and Direct Language: The language in this brochure is not the simplest however it is informative.

Emotive:

Positive language: Sex education is high quality teaching and learning about a broad variety of topics related to sex and Sexuality

Imperative language: Don't let anyone take it from you

You and Your pronouns: You are you.

Singular and Plural nouns: Sex Education, Topics

though the brochure is rather confusing though, without that amount of text it would actually lack information, though it does have interesting pictures and rather relevant ones too.

Colour pallate:

#B6B6AC, #9D594D, #A39376, #92716, #5E5A5A

Football Leaflet

Language features

marketing massage : come on join us

persuasive: come on join us

simple present tense: come, join, register

simple and direct language: the language in this leaflet simple and effective

emotive language: discipline, committed

positive language: immediately register yourself to join pca fc

imperative language: come, immediately

use pronoun: yourself

use singular and plural noun: photo, instructions

description: the leaflet has a good colour palet, and in addition to that has art that captures the eye it may lack much variety but it conveys the message clearly enough.

Colour Pallete:

#B5B6AF

#989389

#2C2F31

#988039

#823731