Examiner's report by Neil Hussey https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4 en-us 2024-11-02 10:51:38 UTC 2024-11-04 10:43:20 UTC hello@padlet.com read the extract carefully https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200262783 2024-11-04 10:29:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200262783 Texts nhussey1973 https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200263980 Students who did not know the texts well did not perform as well as those who did


]]> 2024-11-04 10:30:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200263980 see the extract as a whole rather than tracking through it line by line https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200264838 2024-11-04 10:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200264838 Good https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200265580 -select relevant poems by blake and compared over the two collections

-set up a clear debate and arrive at a conclusion

-doll's house: engaging with dramatic methods and dynamic characters

]]> 2024-11-04 10:32:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200265580 students should respond to the extract in front of them rather than approaching it with preconceived ideas https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200265966 2024-11-04 10:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200265966 look at bigger methods, setting, rhyme scheme etc https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200266096 2024-11-04 10:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200266096 good stuff https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200266870

  • students were able to successfully adapt the what the question was asking of them and they were able to do well when explaining political constructs and criticising society

  • really good comparison of texts

    • ]]>     2024-11-04 10:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200266870     https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200268874 writing about 'authorial methods that engage with voice, structure, setting and form ' are more important than writing about individual words and phrases

    ]]>     2024-11-04 10:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200268874     bad https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200268884 -over complicating the question/debate

    -not answering question directly as they only memorised certian ideas/themes

    -taking quotations out of context or with no understanding of narrative

    -piking the wrong poems for blake



    ]]>     2024-11-04 10:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200268884     not good stuff https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200271363

  • students were not clearly and explicitly engaging with the task

  • students need to make more sensible choices in this part of the exam - Blake was not interested in gender or did not write about women (ultimately unhelpful)

    • ]]>     2024-11-04 10:36:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200271363     avoid generalising about the historical period in which the extract was set https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200272449 2024-11-04 10:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200272449 https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200272891 ''students acheived less well when they simply tracked through the poem, verse by verse rather than seeing the text more holistically'

    ]]>     2024-11-04 10:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200272891     https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200273333 use the texts that are in front of you if you need

    ]]>     2024-11-04 10:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200273333     https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200273876 no need for context, there was a lot of generalisation or false information about context


    ]]>     2024-11-04 10:38:34 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200273876     https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200275159 "superb...responses were written by students who saw the trajectory of the extract and engaged in how the author shaped meanings with a sharp focus on the extract itself and with a clear sense of how methods were being used unimpeded by preconceptions."

    ]]>     2024-11-04 10:39:39 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200275159     https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200275510 don't talk a lot about context and focus on methods instead

    ]]>     2024-11-04 10:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200275510     focus on bigger and more different methods rather than merely on individual words and phrases https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200277906 2024-11-04 10:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nhussey1973/ju5j1mq21odc76a4/wish/3200277906