Year8DD by UNA MC GRATH

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mcgrathu — 2016-10-24 09:59:06 UTC

RANIA AND KIYARA'S WATER FRAME PROPOSAL

2016-10-24 10:01:43 UTC

History project!

Ward And Imaan

imaanmovania — 2016-10-24 10:03:11 UTC

The Spinning Jenny 24/10/2016

Maygol and Ananya

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-24 10:03:19 UTC

24/10/16
https://www.powtoon.com/m/g97seRFDUkO/1/m

mcgrathu — 2016-10-24 10:03:53 UTC

Arthur & Ashkan

akshansh and matei

akshanshryadav — 2016-10-24 10:05:19 UTC

smauel crompton video

Karim, Mao and Jad Video

mcgrathu — 2016-10-24 10:06:25 UTC

Mustafa and Davide

otto88dav — 2016-10-24 10:07:06 UTC

water frame

mcgrathu — 2016-10-24 10:07:35 UTC

Riya, Piya

Christa & Jana

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-24 10:07:43 UTC

Momo, Khaled

2016-10-24 10:08:07 UTC

We'll win (power loom)

Monica, Gunce Su

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-24 10:08:53 UTC

Ward and Imaan

otto88dav — 2016-10-24 10:16:29 UTC

by Mustafa, Davide, Akshansh, Matei
projecting there voices, eye contact hand gesture

Ward and Imaan

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-24 10:17:09 UTC

By:Maygol and Ananya
They investigated a lot of information and gave a lot of detail.They could improve on reading less off the board and have eye contact with the audience

Ward and Imaan

2016-10-24 10:17:37 UTC

By Momo and Khaled

They have detailed most of the informaions,but not enough gestures,and ward should of talked louder.

Karim, Jad, Mao

2016-10-24 10:17:53 UTC

On Ward and Imaan
Was very informative.
Improve voice projection to back of room.

Imaan,Ward

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-24 10:18:06 UTC

-They were extremely informative
-They had good eye contact
-One thing they can improve on is that their volume can go higher

Ward and iman

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-24 10:18:09 UTC

I think that the wire very confident and knew all of their information however they were very quite and didn't do many hand jesters by Arthur and ashkan

Ward and Imaan

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-24 10:18:16 UTC

By Riya and Piya Ward and Imaan did really well, thier presentation was very informative but they could have been a little louder.

Ward and imaan

2016-10-24 10:18:25 UTC

You guys did wondeful, amazing eye contact and even the use of gestures and you were doing really well but i would love if there was more voice modulation.

Gunce Su

guncesudu — 2016-10-24 10:18:52 UTC

Ward and Imaan
They had variety of information
They could raise their voices

Karim, Jad and Mao

imaanmovania — 2016-10-24 10:21:46 UTC

It's really good how they made a video, and how they distributed their amount of information with each other. One thing they could add is that they could more line distributions and they could project their voices louder.
By: Ward and Imaan

MAO KARIM AND JAD

2016-10-24 10:22:01 UTC

I LIKE HOW THIS GROUP WAS CREATIVE AND DECIDED TO DO AN INTERVIEW. THE BEST THING WAS THAT THEY COMPARED THE SPINNING JENNY TO THE OTHER MACHINES. I LOVED IT AND IT WAS VERY GOOD!

Kiyara and Rania

Karim, jade and mao

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-24 10:23:04 UTC

They were very knowledge able and were aware of what they were saying and were clear but they didn't distribute the work as only Karim was talking. By Arthur and Ashkan.

Karim, Mao, Jad

otto88dav — 2016-10-24 10:23:08 UTC

by Mustafa Davide Akshansh Matei
only 1 at of 3 was knowledgeable and concentrating

Jad, Karim and Mao

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-24 10:24:32 UTC

thought outside the box and did a video/interview.
need to project voice better.

-Christa N

Karim,Mao,Jad

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-24 10:24:33 UTC

-The interview is very good
-It was quite informative
-Next time more people could speak as there was only 1 person talking

Jad Mao and Karim

2016-10-24 10:24:55 UTC

k haled and Momo Karim
was wonderful,but unfortunately Jad and Mao didnt Participate as much as Karim did,Anyways the work was detailed

Karim and jad and Mao

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-24 10:25:20 UTC

We think that they were good and informative, but they could have collaborated more and split the information

By Piya and riya

Maygol and anan

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-24 10:27:22 UTC

Maygol and ananya were both very confident and knowledgeable about their invention and the creator. But they were not giving us any eye contact towards our table. By Arthur and Ashkan

Maygol and Ananya

imaanmovania — 2016-10-24 10:27:49 UTC

We really like the way you decided to create the presentation. The powtoon
idea was really creative. However we think that you could improve your eye contact. Overall we think that your presentation was phenomenal.
By: Ward and Imaan

Maygol and Ananya

2016-10-24 10:28:00 UTC

I loved this creative powtoon. The music only makes it livelier! It was a wonderful project but would appreciate if maygol looked at the audience more. Otherwise, well done both of you!!

Kiyara and Rania

By Momo and Khaled

2016-10-24 10:30:30 UTC

Perfect,Nice presentation,but Magol should do more gestures,However wonderful K&M

akshansh, matei davide, mustafa

otto88dav — 2016-10-24 10:31:47 UTC

very knowledgeable, but can improve by editing the video properly as some information was blocked, thus the video can be improved and so can your presentation.

Maygol, Ananya

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-24 10:32:20 UTC

-Their video was extremely interesting and I really enjoyed it
-Their video had a lot of information
-Next time maybe they could have more eyecontact

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-24 10:34:07 UTC

On Maygol and Ananya
They could improve eye contact with the audience
The good thing about their presentation was that they were confident

Ananya and maygol

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-24 10:34:22 UTC

They were pretty informative and they used a different media which was interesting, they could work on eye contact

Gunce and Monica

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-24 10:35:33 UTC

Monica was very confident and their eye contact okay their presentation skills were good as Monica used gestures and they both wore costumes but Monica said all the information. By Arthur and ashkan

gunce and monica by akshansh matei davide and mustafa

otto88dav — 2016-10-24 10:35:39 UTC

amazing piece of work. We understand that as you created on keynotes and you have showed it on power point, but next time please

Gunce and Monica

imaanmovania — 2016-10-24 10:35:42 UTC

We like the way they presented, using mini costumes which made it more enjoyable, the powerpoint and how informative it is. They could project their voices. However, we believe that they could improve on their line distribution. However, this whole presentation was really superlative.
By: Imaan and Ward

For Monica and Gunce

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-24 10:36:53 UTC

They were good and gave us a lot of detail and they were creative for using props but it would be better if Gunce spoke louder
Maygol and Ananya

Monica and Gunce

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-24 10:37:28 UTC

- very factual
- convincing
- info wasn't split equally
By Christa N.

Monica and gunce

2016-10-24 10:40:08 UTC

I think both of you did wonderful and that you presented really well, but it would have been much better if roles were evenly distributed

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-24 10:40:21 UTC

On Monica and
Gunce
I like the fact that Monica used hand motions and projected her voice
Something they can improve on is every one talking around the same amount. Gunce only spoke once while Monica spoke the rest of the project

Matei and Akshansh

imaanmovania — 2016-10-24 10:40:50 UTC

Another prodigious presentation, they can raise their voices really loud. The voices they made, made the presentation more amusing. Also the line distribution could've been a little better.
By: Ward and Imaan

By Khaled and Momo

2016-10-24 10:40:57 UTC

Nice,Detailed,Interessting,Funny,

Akshansh and Matei

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-24 10:40:57 UTC

they were good with the information but Matei could speak louder and they could give more eye contact and use less notes
Ananya and Maygol

Akshansh and Matie

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-24 10:41:33 UTC

They had good information and collaborated well toghhether as well as collected very intresting information also they ch aged their voices to help their presentation skills however again eye contact was minimal as they looked only at the other side of the room and at their notes by Arthur and Ashkan .

2016-10-24 10:43:14 UTC

I think that this project is wonderful and really creative. AKSHANSH, YOUR ACCENT WAS HILARIOUS!! The video was really educational but i wouldve appreciated if matei spoke a bit more.

By Khaled And Momo

2016-10-24 10:45:01 UTC

Excellent The voices were making it fun and i twas detailed

David and Mustafa

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-24 10:45:03 UTC

They were good with speaking loudlythey should put more information and should not rely on notes
Ananya and Mustafa

Davide and Mustafa

imaanmovania — 2016-10-24 10:45:09 UTC

They had good information, but they could've added some details and also they could've project their voices, since we could hear them a little. However it was a congenial presentation!
By: Ward and Imaan

david and mustafa by akshansh and matei

otto88dav — 2016-10-24 10:45:10 UTC

great job, great detailed information and great use of media. Both contributed a lot of information, equal amount of talking too. Can improve more on using less notes, louder speaking and more eye contact

Akshansh and matte

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-24 10:45:31 UTC

They were really good, they had good information and explained t

David and Mustafa

2016-10-24 10:45:39 UTC

Wonderful! I would have appreciated if there was more eye contact, minimal use of notes and a louder voice used when presenting for davide. I would say the samr for mustafa but would appreciate if they both were more informative.

Kiyara.

Davide and mustafa

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-24 10:45:40 UTC

They had collaborated well and had good information however their presentation was limited as they used notes only and didn't have any eye contact.

By Khaled And Momo

2016-10-24 10:46:10 UTC

Really nice unfortunately not enough gestures and eye contact,They should of used their own words,and also be a little bit louder

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-24 10:47:14 UTC

On Mustafa and Davide
They were confident and projected their voices well.
Their Presentation did not use punctuation

I AM AWESOME

2016-10-24 16:52:06 UTC

Riya piya

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 03:40:29 UTC

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 04:41:28 UTC

Riya and piyahttps://mail.google.com/mail/u/1/s/?view=att&th=157f77902dc7d7ce&attid=0.1&disp=attd&realattid=f_iuo9kppa0&safe=1&zw

Rania and Kiyara

guncesudu — 2016-10-25 04:59:25 UTC

Rania can make more eye contact with the audience
Very informative

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-25 04:59:40 UTC

On Kiyara and Rania
Very informative and speakers were confident and knew what they were saying.
No negatives. Amazing pre

Kiyara and Rania

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-25 05:01:01 UTC

Kiyara was loud but it would be better if Rania was louder too.They were very knowledgable and did not rely on notes .

Kiyara and Rania

imaanmovania — 2016-10-25 05:01:58 UTC

It was really a remarkable presentation, the line distribution was appropriate. Also, it is very informative and both Kiyara and Rania were knowledgeable. However, I think that Rania could've spoken a little louder, but overall it was enthralling. I also appreciate how many references put in. Fighting!

Kiara and rania

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-25 05:02:10 UTC

They were very informative and had alot of information also they knew it very well also they shared their work very well and collaborated plus their hand gestures were good but Raina's voice was very quite and hard to hear. Bya Arthur and Ashkan.

Rania and Kiyara

wardthabet77 — 2016-10-25 05:02:55 UTC

They both had a lot of knowledge about their invention, Their powerpoint was very informative but they could have used a different form of presentation, altogether they were amazing

Rania and kiyara

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-25 05:02:59 UTC

-very informative
-information explained well
-Next time more eyes contact and project your voice

Kiyara and Rania

akshanshryadav — 2016-10-25 05:04:04 UTC

very knowledgeable indeed, excellent use of media and good use of gestures. I think that a better eye contact with the audience would be amazing and much better for the presentation.

Rania and Kiyara

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 05:05:05 UTC

Firstly they were very knowledgable and informative . Both of them projected their voices very well .For improvement I feel they could have added more pictures to make it more interactive

By Momo and Khaled

mohaned_mur1 — 2016-10-25 05:05:53 UTC

Rania didnt know what to say and wasnt loud,but she's done a lot of gestures and eye contacts.Kiyara too she didnt really know what to say but a lot of gestures and eye contact

Christa & Jana

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-25 05:06:11 UTC

Spinning Jenny

mustafahassan_2004 — 2016-10-25 05:07:54 UTC

You had good information and have eye contact with hand gesture

Riya and Piya

imaanmovania — 2016-10-25 05:08:21 UTC

A gripping presentation, Riya and Piya both were very knowledgeable and they knew what they were saying. Their presentation was as informative as them also they had good eye contact too, also they used hand gestures but not too much. I think that the presentation was well produced. Overall I think everything was pretty good.

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-25 05:08:24 UTC

Riya and Piya

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 05:08:33 UTC

I feel Riya could project her voice more and they could have better eye contact with the audience but there source of media was excellent and colorful and they were knowledgable too .

Riya piya

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-25 05:08:40 UTC

The had a lot of information with a large bibliography also they shared their work well but they were quite and they had no eye contact by Arthur and ashkan

Piya and Riya

guncesudu — 2016-10-25 05:09:11 UTC

They can raise there voices
They distributed it very well
Very informative

Piya & Riya

wardthabet77 — 2016-10-25 05:10:00 UTC

They had a lot of description in their information, I would like it better if they had more eye contact

Piya and Riya

akshanshryadav — 2016-10-25 05:10:00 UTC

Good use of media and good amount of information. Projection of voice has to increase because it was hard to hear, large increase of eye contact is needed and there should be a minimal use of notes.

Kiyara and Rania

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-25 05:10:05 UTC

- need to project voice more
- shouldn't rely on notes

On riya and piya, I would have prefered if they were louder and if they made more eye contact with the audience. Overall very good! I am impressed!

2016-10-25 05:10:22 UTC

Kiyara

Riya and piya

mustafahassan_2004 — 2016-10-25 05:10:30 UTC

Eye contact not only reliang on notes to help

Riya and Piya

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-25 05:12:54 UTC

-lot of information
-Hand gestures
-Next time you could make your voice louder and also have more eye contact

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-25 05:13:02 UTC

On Riya and Piya
Informative and speakers were confident.
Very little eye contact

By Khaled and Momo

mohaned_mur1 — 2016-10-25 05:13:09 UTC

Really detailed,gestures everywhere,loud,but eye contact missing.However Perfect!!

Arthur and Ashkan

imaanmovania — 2016-10-25 05:13:59 UTC

I think that there project was factual, but I also think they could make their voices louder.They also knew what they were talking about. A really captivating project!

Arthu and Ashkan

guncesudu — 2016-10-25 05:14:05 UTC

They could make more eye contact with all the audience
They had a lot of references and a lot of information

Aurthur and Ashkan

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 05:14:08 UTC

I feel they could speak louder and have more eye contact with the audience,but there presentation was very factual and informative

Ashkan and Arthur

akshanshryadav — 2016-10-25 05:14:11 UTC

Good use of media, but better editing of presentation is needed. There was too much reading of the presentation. So minimal use of notes is needed. More visual imagery is needed, but on the other hand there was a good amount of information and excellent use of words.

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-25 05:14:18 UTC

On Arthur and Ashkan
Very informative, use eye contact well and speakers were confident.
Excellent presentation. No drawbacks.

Arthur.collignon@gmail.com And Ashkan

mustafahassan_2004 — 2016-10-25 05:14:46 UTC

Give eye contact don't only look at the board only arthur was giving eye contact when he was talking and should project there voice

Arthur and Ashkan

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-25 05:14:50 UTC

They were really good and they were loud but they could improve on being even louder

Ashkan and Arthur

2016-10-25 05:14:52 UTC

I liked the presentation but wouldve prefered if they didnt read directly off the board and made more eye contact especially for arthur. I liked the concept of comparing as well. Overall a very good job

Arthur and Ashkan

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-25 05:15:59 UTC

-Extremely knowledgeable about invention ad creator
-Well understood
-Next time you can have more eye contact

Arthur &

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-25 05:16:29 UTC

Ashkan & Arthur

wardthabet77 — 2016-10-25 05:16:33 UTC

Ashkan and Arthur did a great job on collaborating their work and they did not rely on the power point that was behind them, they could have been more confident, but altogether it was amazing

By Khaled and Momo

mohaned_mur1 — 2016-10-25 05:17:29 UTC

No eye contact and no gestures,however loud and detailed work ,Good Job!

Karin Jad and Mao

2016-10-25 05:19:23 UTC

On Arthur and Ashkan
Very knowledgeable
Lots of information
But their voice projection was a bit low

Mohaned and khaled

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-25 05:20:06 UTC

They were confident and knew what they were saying but they were quite had no references and no eye contact by Arthur and ashkan

Mohaned and Khaled

akshanshryadav — 2016-10-25 05:20:13 UTC

Substantial amount of information, more projection of voices is needed for both, no eye contact big con. Less amount of use of notes and references are required as this will not prove that all information is theirs.

Mohanad and Khaled

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-25 05:20:23 UTC

-You had factual information
-Make the presentation more information
-Don't rely on notes too much and show eye contact

I think that mohammed khaled should have spoken way louder and that they didnt read of the board. It would have been much better if both of them practiced on their powerloom

2016-10-25 05:20:29 UTC

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Mohanad and Khaled

guncesudu — 2016-10-25 05:20:30 UTC

They read from the presentation and made no eye contact with the audience

Mohaned and Khaled

imaanmovania — 2016-10-25 05:20:40 UTC

A competent presentation, however they could've added some details here and there, and they could've spoken louder and not rely on the board too much. All together it was good.

Mohaned & Khaled

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-25 05:20:43 UTC

- momo needs to project voice more.
- both need to stop relying on their note.
- little amount of work.

Mohaned and Khaled

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-25 05:20:59 UTC

They had good information but they can improve on relying less on the notes and correct spellings

Mohaned and khaled

mustafahassan_2004 — 2016-10-25 05:21:06 UTC

Have more eye contact not loud where is your references and it was short

Mohaned and Khaled

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 05:21:11 UTC

I feel they should have had more eye contact and spoken louder but the source of media was good

Khaled & Mohaned

wardthabet77 — 2016-10-25 05:22:15 UTC

They did well in their presentation but they relied on their notes

On Khaled and momo

2016-10-25 05:22:31 UTC

Karin Jad and Mao
No eye contact low voice projection relied to much to the notes and no bibliography

Yusup and malak (kiyara)

2016-10-25 05:24:29 UTC

I think that they were very informative but i could not here malak at all!!! I wouldve appreciated if there was accurate information and more images but also more eye contact as well, but i think they were very brave and put effort!

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mustafahassan_2004 — 2016-10-25 05:24:30 UTC

Abdullah & Malak

christanassour_19 — 2016-10-25 05:24:38 UTC

they didn't project their voices and were relying on their notre

By Matei

gamingboy575 — 2016-10-25 05:25:18 UTC

Rania could have made more eye contact , their information was very good tho.

Yusup and Malak

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-25 05:25:20 UTC

By matei

gamingboy575 — 2016-10-25 05:27:20 UTC

Arthur spoke way more then Ashkan and a little bit more eye contact could have been good, but the information was amazing.

Christa and jana

mustafahassan_2004 — 2016-10-25 05:27:23 UTC

Eye contact by christa jana reliang on notesb

Christa and Jana

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-25 05:27:33 UTC

They had alot of information and christa did have hand gestures and knew what she was saying but Janna was reading on the notes and they didn't know when to say what as they were giving each other ques to speak. By Arthur and Ashkan.

Christa and Jana

imaanmovania — 2016-10-25 05:27:36 UTC

An exquisite presentation, the only word document, however it was didactic (Means it teaches others) however I feel that they could speak louder. Also, convert their references into Harvard style. Overall, it was superlative.

Christa and jana _kiyara

2016-10-25 05:27:49 UTC

I liked the loud volume from both of them but would have been better if there was much more eye contact and that they faced the audience instead of showing their backs to other sides. BUT I LOVED THE PRESENTATION. lovely and informative, nice and neat!!

Christa and Jana

guncesudu — 2016-10-25 05:27:53 UTC

They did not know who was saying what part of the presentation so there were pauses
They had very little references and they could also put more information

Christa and

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-25 05:28:36 UTC

-Good pictures
-A good amount of references
-Add more information, speak more confidently, have eye contact and speak louder

power loom

yusupeism — 2016-10-25 05:28:39 UTC

By matei mohaned and khaled

gamingboy575 — 2016-10-25 05:29:07 UTC

Their information was ok they could have spoken louder and they had not references so we don't know if they did their own work

Christa and Jana

akshanshryadav — 2016-10-25 05:29:55 UTC

Adequate amount of information, a good and different use of media. More refernces will show that you have re-searched, more collaboration and jana did not speak at all and they were reading off the board this showed me that they were not prepared.

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-25 05:30:09 UTC

On Akshansh and Matei
This group had excellent presentation skills and knew what they were doing
Matei did not speak as much as Akshansh

Christa and Janna

yusupeism — 2016-10-25 05:30:23 UTC

there presentation was good but i feel that

Karim, Jad and Mao

2016-10-25 05:30:37 UTC

On Christa and Jana
Somewhat informative
Little eye contact and Jana does not project her voice

Christa and jana

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 05:30:38 UTC

There presentation was very factual and informative and their source of media was very good but I feel that Jana could speak louder and could have disturbuted the information more evenly .but overall there presentation was enetrtaing

Christa & JAna

wardthabet77 — 2016-10-25 05:30:50 UTC

Christa and Jana had eye contact most of the time but they could have added more information

By matei

gamingboy575 — 2016-10-25 05:31:28 UTC

Christa and janainformation was good they relied on their notes most of the times and they bearly were loud.

Yusup & Malak

wardthabet77 — 2016-10-25 05:32:10 UTC

they had a lot of knowledge about their invention, they didn't have a lot of eye contact and relied on their notes, however the presentation was good

Yusup and Malak

lilinaraghi — 2016-10-25 05:32:14 UTC

They had really good information but they could improve by Malak speaking louder and relying less on the notes

Abdullah and malak

mustafahassan_2004 — 2016-10-25 05:32:26 UTC

Higher your voice have eye contact maybe add some gesture

Yusuf and Mala

guncesudu — 2016-10-25 05:32:32 UTC

Very informative and factual
Mallak can project her voice a little more

Yusup and Malak

imaanmovania — 2016-10-25 05:32:37 UTC

It was really educational and straightforward but I think that Malak shouldn't rely on her phone too much and given some eye contact. They both could've spoken louder. However it was pretty good.

Jad Karin and mao

2016-10-25 05:32:50 UTC

On Yusup and malak
Rely less on notes, voice projection and eye contact

Yusup and Malak

akshanshryadav — 2016-10-25 05:33:04 UTC

Good use of media and a good amount of information. There should be minimal use of notes so the presentation is interactive. To make the presentation more interactive more eye contact is required and more gestures and more references

Yusup and malak

arthur_collignon — 2016-10-25 05:33:08 UTC

They were informative and knew when to speak that shows that they collaborated but they had minimal eye contact and they were quite. By Arthur and Ashkan

Abdullah and Malak

ananyasalecha — 2016-10-25 05:33:19 UTC

I feel they could have projected their voices more and have more hand gestures to make it more interactive ,but tehir source of media was good and they'd had good facts about there information

Malak and

monicaeism2015 — 2016-10-25 05:34:15 UTC

-Goood information
-Well said
-Add more information, eye contact, speak louder

Yusup and Malak(by Matei)

gamingboy575 — 2016-10-25 05:35:34 UTC

I didn't hear Enything they should have projected their voices way more but the information was ok.

Riya piya

riyarallan2003 — 2016-10-25 08:33:09 UTC

hello

mcgrathu — 2016-11-29 11:32:40 UTC