https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz What I did well and what I need to work on. en-us 2017-03-30 12:23:47 UTC 2017-03-30 13:45:24 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163687194 This is what I did well: Provided the characters actions feelings and thoughts.
This is what I need to work: work on central conflict]]> 2017-03-30 13:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163687194 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163687750 I had good vocabulary but I need to work on using less dialogue.]]> 2017-03-30 13:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163687750 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163687754 I had good setting and Time being the afternoon. 

I need to work on the amount of dialogue]]> 2017-03-30 13:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163687754 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163688350 I had good dialogue 

But I could work on giving more details about my characters like the thoughts and feelings of them all.]]> 2017-03-30 13:05:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163688350 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163689742 I did well on the theme of the story.

I need to work on more dialogue.]]> 2017-03-30 13:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163689742 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163690153 I was good at using different words instead of said, and using detailed words. 
I could work on describing settings ]]> 2017-03-30 13:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163690153 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163690157 I did a good job of showing not telling what's happening 

I need to work on describing places and things with context ]]> 2017-03-30 13:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163690157 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163691924 I had a good central conflict

I could work on showing not telling the characters actions, thoughts, and feelings.]]> 2017-03-30 13:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163691924 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692054 I had a solid descriptive words and  grammar.
I needed to work on a detailed setting and time.]]> 2017-03-30 13:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692054 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692155 Something i did well was that i  used concrete words and   sensory details to describe events. 
Something  i need to work on is grade level grammar, punctiation , spelling.capitals and, etc

]]> 2017-03-30 13:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692155 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692714 I did good on conventions and I need to work on not making my story so long.]]> 2017-03-30 13:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692714 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692894 I did good on showing not telling.

I need to work on developing dialogue.]]> 2017-03-30 13:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163692894 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163694552 i did good on the ending

i need to work on conventions

]]> 2017-03-30 13:23:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163694552 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163696436 Something I did well was I had good diologue. 

Something I have to work on was making it more like a journal entry]]> 2017-03-30 13:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163696436 https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163696727 Something I did well was I gave a good sense of time.

One thing I need to work on is including a where.]]> 2017-03-30 13:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kfumarola/jt8bv7xzxvdz/wish/163696727