One thing I Can Use: Bulletin board by Gretchen Monroe

Cade

2023-12-04 16:23:08 UTC

Using signal phrases/ transitions to make my writing flow more smoothly and have a better overall look to the paper.

Caden

2023-12-04 16:23:08 UTC

Use signal phrases to help my writing look better and flow better when people are reading it.

Cason

2023-12-04 16:23:38 UTC

using warrants / commentary to explain it and keep the flow so when people read it they can understand it

Levi

2023-12-04 16:24:11 UTC

just how to organize it and make it flow better with transitiom phrases as well as the commentary at the end

Luke

2023-12-04 16:24:22 UTC

Adding signal phrases to help my thoughts flow smoother and connect evidence

Peter

2023-12-04 16:24:23 UTC

It will help me be able to explain evidence better, without just stating a bunch of evidence and letting the reader try to understand it.

Max

2023-12-04 16:24:26 UTC

Use a personal response to show my views on the topic and why I'm right.

Arisyn

arisynbratt — 2023-12-04 16:24:30 UTC

After you have had a couple paragraphs about evidence and other views you can add in your own response.

DoMiNiC

dominiclambert — 2023-12-04 16:24:30 UTC

Using warrants and personal responses within the argument can add to the flow of the story

Sam

2023-12-04 16:24:41 UTC

Knowing how to use signal phrases and transitions help your paper flow easier from sentence to sentence. And overall help support your topic.

Alayna

2023-12-04 16:25:32 UTC

briefly labeling my paragraphs to see if the flow is good or if it's choppy. Also using commentary and personal response to saide evidence.

tricia

triciaschuerman — 2023-12-04 16:25:43 UTC

using different types of topic sentences (agreeing disagreeing, comparing etc.) to give my paper more depth

Grace

gracelanka — 2023-12-04 16:26:32 UTC

using warrants can help make stronger flowing papers and explain evidence better.

Joy

2023-12-04 16:27:14 UTC

Adding a personal response in the easy would show where I stand. Putting in an intro to a phares would be a great transition or indecater to some supporting evidence.

grace

gracelichti — 2023-12-04 16:27:18 UTC

I could definitely focus on having a strong warrant and focusing on the commentary to go with that. I struggle to develop a good warrant after I find evidence so this helped a lot.

Jacob

2023-12-04 16:27:23 UTC

Understanding signal phrases, and how to use them to transition into my evidence to provided better support and sentence flow.

Mercy

2023-12-04 16:28:01 UTC

showed how helpful signal phrases can be and make sure your evidence flows with the rest of your paper

Carter

2023-12-04 16:28:11 UTC

adding signal phrases to writing to smoothly transition into new thoughts / ideas and connecting other evidence

Olivia Leitner

olivialeitner — 2023-12-04 18:40:17 UTC

Signal phrases help connect ideas and help my paper flow better. They connect the evidence to the warrant or commentary.

Jasmine

jasminegrace — 2023-12-04 18:40:49 UTC

Breaking down the pieces of the argument (ex: the use of signal phrases to introduce what's next) will help when putting the pieces together to build my own argument

Sydney

sydneytrucke — 2023-12-04 18:41:08 UTC

I can make sure to use the order of signal phrases, evidence, warrant to make my paper have a good, logical, flow.

Elisabeth Berrier

2023-12-04 18:41:27 UTC

This activity showed me how to use a warrant to extend evidence. I now understand that extending evidence is part of the warrant and I need to change to first person in order to make a personal response to the evidence.

Jenna

2023-12-04 18:41:35 UTC

Analyzing the evidence in a warrant/commentary before stating your own ideas an opinions can be helpful for the reader to understand the idea better.

Mya Vest

2023-12-04 18:42:01 UTC

It is important to write an intro to your evidence before stating it so that there is more of a natural flow from the topic sentence to the evidence. Having fluidity in my writing will allow others to understand my argument better and will help improve the overall quality of my essay.

Eva

2023-12-04 18:42:08 UTC

I think it is important to use signal phrases to prepare the reader to read your opinion on the topic. I also liked how it prefaced the evidence with your opinion and expand on the evidence after.

Sarah Van Ostrand

2023-12-04 18:42:26 UTC

Signal Phrases help keep the paper organized and keep each part connected to the other which allows for a nice flow.

Zoe

2023-12-04 18:42:33 UTC

It helps by breaking up the paragraph making it easier to write and understand, and also makes it easier to see my thoughts vs the facts and evidence in the paragraph.

Olivia Lovegrove

2023-12-04 18:42:41 UTC

One thing I can take from this exercise is the use of signal phrases. This author did a good job introducing their evidence and moving into warrants using signal phrases to show the change.

Abram Nelson

abramnelson — 2023-12-04 18:43:01 UTC

Warrants ensure that my argument or claim in my paper has a purpose and that that purpose is dictated clearly to the reader. Using signal phrases allows a smooth, clear transition between these ideas and further pushes ideas to the reader.

Annie

2023-12-04 18:43:02 UTC

One thins I can use: This exercise helped me understand how each piece/part flows into another (which I can apply to my writing).

Gannon

2023-12-04 18:44:06 UTC

This lesson taught me about how you also have to include your response. It is important to respond to the evidence and the topic and not just present warrants and other peoples' evidence. It also taught me how to make everything flow smoothly by having a certain order.

Silas Ritzema

2023-12-04 18:44:06 UTC

I learned that all claims and arguments can have a very organized, directional structure. There is a topic sentence, then evidence, then a personal interpretation of the evidence. It will make it easier for me to make claims.

Audrey Winkels

2023-12-04 18:46:28 UTC

Using signal phrases to introduce my topics better, and warrants/commentary to connect my evidence more clearly and to explain what I am using the evidence for.

Elizabeth Sauberan

2023-12-04 18:48:40 UTC

This exercised help me to better understand what a warrant is. A warrant is commentary on evidence, and I don't think I thought of it that way before. In addition, it is good to use transition phrases as you carry an idea through to completion.