3/1 Canvas by Shankar RAJA SEGAR https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5 Improving our writing skills! en-us 2018-09-27 04:01:02 UTC 2018-09-28 05:21:24 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Send.png The DOs and DONTs sgshankarera https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286795946 1.  This is NOT play time!

2.  Only type what is relevant to the topic of discussion.

3.  Contribute to the Lesson and Discussion always.

4.  There will be no arguments with one another within the group and across groups]]> 2018-09-28 02:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286795946 INSTRUCTIONS! sgshankarera https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286803936 1.Use the following guiding questions to state your answer
a)How did the writer describe the scene?
b)What kind of words did the writer use to describe how the events happened
c)How can you tell the feeling of the character(s)?
d)What else did the writer use to make the scene come alive?
]]> 2018-09-28 03:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286803936 Group 6 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286809907 We chose text B because it is the better one. The writer made the scene very real. The writer used  emotional words, show not tell and much more. Dan and his gang  felt like they wanted to punch Tom and Alison. They used words that make it feel very real like very descriptive words.]]> 2018-09-28 04:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286809907 GROUP 5 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810012 We chose text B as it has richer contents compared to text A and much more better.]]> 2018-09-28 04:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810012 GROUP 12 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810076 we chose text B because they used show not tell and more discreption + adjetive. The writer described the scene by using the bully story. He used good words too.he can make a story book too.]]> 2018-09-28 04:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810076 GROUP 7 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810198 Q1)The writer of text B described the plan interestingly.]]> 2018-09-28 04:44:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810198 GROUP 1 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810318 WE CHOSE TEXT B AS IT IS FANTASTIC.
I LOVE THE WORDS BECAUSE IT IS POWERFUL WORDS

]]> 2018-09-28 04:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810318 Group3 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810372 We choose text B BECAUSE IT IS A BETTER ONE .THE WRITER IS MORE EXPRESSIVE IN TEXT B THAN TEXT A.THE WRITER ALSO USED SHOW NOT TELL.]]> 2018-09-28 04:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810372 GROUP 8 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810469 We choose text B as it has more descriptive words. The writer give us more information about the story. Tom feels upset that the bully keeps on punching him. Alison felt sorry for Tom and did not know what to do.]]> 2018-09-28 04:48:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810469 sgshankarera https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810741 Text A
Tom and Alison were walking along the corridor. The whole corridor was quiet and empty
Suddenly they heard a shout. It was Dan, the big fat bully. He stormed over. It was so loud because of the quietness. Dan and his gang clenched his fist and punched us. Alison avoided it but Tom got hit. There was blood. Tom started to cry
]]> 2018-09-28 04:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810741 Text BTom and Alison walked along the quiet and empty corridor to go to the canteen for recessSuddenly they heard shuffling noises. They turned and their jaws dropped. It was Dan and his gang of bullies. Dan sneered at Tom and Alison. The two friends turned to run but Dan shouted as he stormed over to them, “Hey, stop right there!” He glared at them and said, “Hand over your wallet.” When Alison and Tom did not, Dan clenched and raised his fist, ready to punch Tom. Smack! His fist landed on Tom’s nose. Blood dripped from Tom’s nose. Alison ducked in time to avoid the fist from one of Dan’s friend. Tom wailed and pleaded, “Please, stop.” Dan sniggered, “What a cry baby!” His friends laughed as they turned to leave.That was when they saw the headmaster glaring at them. sgshankarera https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810763 2018-09-28 04:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810763 GROUP 9 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810866 we chose text b because its more intresting.]]> 2018-09-28 04:55:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810866 GROUP2 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810875 Text B
The writer used violents to describe the scene.]]> 2018-09-28 04:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810875 GROUP 11 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810876 2018-09-28 04:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810876 GROUP 10 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810877 We choose text B]]> 2018-09-28 04:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810877 Group 11 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810958 We chose text B because there are more details than in text A.

]]> 2018-09-28 04:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810958 GROUP 10 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810974 We choose text B because there is a lot of powerful words. The build up is intresting as the suspence moves us into the story. ]]> 2018-09-28 04:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286810974 GROUP 13 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811026 I CHOSE TEXT B
IT IS BECAUSE THE WORDS ARE POWERFUL]]> 2018-09-28 04:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811026 Group 2 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811296 The writer used violence to describe the scene. ]]> 2018-09-28 05:03:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811296 Group 1 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811297 We choose text B, because it has more details than text A]]> 2018-09-28 05:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811297 GROUP 4 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811489 WE CHOOSE TEXT B 
BECAUSE THE WRITER DESCRIBES THE STORY VERY WELL!!!!!!!!]]> 2018-09-28 05:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811489 GROUP 10 https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811607 1)]]> 2018-09-28 05:08:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286811607 hello https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286812728 2018-09-28 05:21:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sgshankarera/jq3l7xf3qki5/wish/286812728