7th Grade Writing Feedback by Aiden Jasul https://padlet.com/24ajasul/jpv0frkyl2oy Thank you for leaving your feedback! en-us 2018-12-05 17:54:34 UTC 2025-11-19 19:50:42 UTC hello@padlet.com VINGETTE 24eryan https://padlet.com/24ajasul/jpv0frkyl2oy/wish/312342881 I think it was great that you described how you felt with SOOO much detail and still made it a short read.

I admire how you slowed town a 2 second interval into 2 whole paragraphs.

I WISH you would have revised it first.  There were some easy mistakes that you must have missed.

AMAZING JOB!!!]]> 2018-12-07 17:54:10 UTC https://padlet.com/24ajasul/jpv0frkyl2oy/wish/312342881