https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz How would this story be different if it took place in modern day? Rewrite the scene from chapter 3 with the stranger as if it is taking place in 2016. en-us 2016-06-06 12:25:07 UTC 2025-11-21 17:03:35 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.storage.googleapis.com/portrait/baby.jpg https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113785350 Matt could have ordered pizza or gone to McDonalds ,Subway, or could order chinse food he would have to kill a poor little rabbit. If he missed his dad he could have picked up his phone on call or text him. and he wouldn't get bored because he could have been on Music.ly or Facebook wait,not Facebook no one goes on there anymore he could have gone on Instagram or Snapchat, twitter,tumbler or be on  youtube  for hours ]]> 2016-06-06 12:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113785350 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786051
like Tristan said he could  have orderd some Burger king or McdONALDS
 Big Mac ]]> 2016-06-06 12:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786051 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786057 If this was in modern day, then like Erika said, he could of gone to get a milkshake from PDQ or something from Chick-fil-a (say hi to my brother for me at Chick-fil-a)]]> 2016-06-06 12:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786057 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786213 If this story was in modern day, i probably would have had like 3 boxes of pizza to just snack on until my mom came home. If someone came to the door I would just leave it and completely ignore every living thing outside.If that chapter was in modern day it would of been REALLY short.   ]]> 2016-06-06 12:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786213 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786357  In modern day, Matt would just ride a bike to a store restaurant, or just get ramen noodles.
Now the scene.
Matt sat in his house playing mine craft.  He hears his doorbell and goes to see if its a delivery man.  It was a strange deliveryman who insisted on staying.  Matt woke up the next day to see the man gone along with his family safe.

]]> 2016-06-06 12:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786357 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786424 that was crazy with all the flower in his cabin i was thinking why does he not get a broom but i thought to m,y self they dont have brooms at the time the was back in elliotts salty days...lol

]]> 2016-06-06 12:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786424 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786449 Instead of hunting he could have orderd pizza. Instead of siting around around and doing nothing he could watch cat videos. And he could of reported his rifle stolen.]]> 2016-06-06 12:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786449 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786465 Instead of going hunting in the woods or somewhere else Matt could of gone to the Mall or Publix to get a free cookie everyday.]]> 2016-06-06 12:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786465 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786510
Matt could have ate anything like subway he could have went to Pubilx and ate the good stuff.]]> 2016-06-06 12:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113786510 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113787324 if this were normal times matt would have had neigherbors and he would not have had to stay home alone he could stay at a friends houuse and his dad would have never had to go away! And he would go to publix geting cake and food so he would not have to hunt.!.!.!.!.!.!.! sup homey nice house (stranger).what are you doing talking bout my house(matt). invite me in for dinner or ill kidnapp you (stranger/ben). ok old man(matt) im gonna take your rifle(ben)]]> 2016-06-06 12:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113787324 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113787664 One upon a long time ago, Matt was on Musical.ly making epic ones, when he hears a knock at the door, it was the UPS guy. HE was like "Here is your package sir" Matt said thanks was was kind of freaked out because the UPS guys looked weird. The UPS guy wanted to stay longer to have a cup of tea :) Late at night Matt went to bed. HE woke up in the morning with no weird UPS dude and with his family drinking coffee watching the Today Show.]]> 2016-06-06 12:53:51 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113787664 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113787836 Instead of eating stuff he hunted in the woods he could go to a food place and get something to eat and not worry about making it ]]> 2016-06-06 12:54:46 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113787836 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113791220 If this story  took place in 2016 there would probably be more action in the story.
As Matt was outside waiting for his rabbit to cook, he heard the crunching of sticks under somethings feet and out came a figure in a blue army coat with a reddish beard, Matt stands there  as the figure say's "howdy!"]]> 2016-06-06 13:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113791220 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113793539 Matt would off had a phone to call his dad he could go to a store to buy food his dad would of hired a baby sitter to watch him]]> 2016-06-06 13:30:26 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113793539 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113812943 2016-06-06 15:27:17 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113812943 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113813131 " And why had he left that city near the ocean in such a hurry? Was there a really some charge against him? Was he dangerous ~ perhaps even a murderer? At the thought, Matt sat up on his comfy bed. He'd be sensible to stay awake and on guard"
 
In the modern day, Matt was home alone, suddenly uncle Ben came and made his life a living nightmare.  Ben treats Matt to Ramen noodles, Hawaiian Bread, Chicken, and a fresh bowl of chopped fruits. Matt thinks about his past house life. Why had he left his old neighborhood in such a hurry? Was he dangerous, even perhaps a pineapple killer? At the thought, Matt sat up in his tempurpedic mattress on a pine wood frame. He'd stay awake and on guard while his Dad left to get his mother and sister from Hawaii.
Maine to hawaii]]> 2016-06-06 15:28:23 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113813131 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113813394 ''Ben was a babysitter and he was in uniform,because:he was at a event about a reenactment of the civil war and was called to take care of Matt.
A few hours later Matt got restless and went outside to doddle around and went to a tree and started to climb up and saw a beehive and broke a small piece off and ate some honey, but the bees saw him and stung him.....a lot.

]]> 2016-06-06 15:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113813394 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113814165 If chapter 3 was in a modern day scene then instead of killing animals you could go to Publix or go to a fast food place and order something. ]]> 2016-06-06 15:35:04 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113814165 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113814289 Instead of being in a cabin like Matt he would be in a house and if there was a stranger in 2016 i would call the cops and have the stranger go to jail .]]> 2016-06-06 15:36:01 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113814289 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113815521 2016-06-06 15:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113815521 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113815627 Instead of the old days, Matt would of lived in a mansion in Hawaii, the man that stole the gun would of stole the Superbowl trophy from Matt's house. Then Matt would fly around in his private jet searching for the man who stole the Superbowl trophy. :::-)]]> 2016-06-06 15:43:49 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113815627 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113816193
If chapter 3 took place in modern day, the man who stole Matt's gun will get a special RKO and go to jail, Matt would probably give him the death sentence and live in a mansion somewhere near California. Matt would eat McDonalds after.]]> 2016-06-06 15:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113816193 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113816320
He could have just ordered pizza instead of having to kill food with his gun he could have just ordered food from a fast food place]

]]> 2016-06-06 15:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113816320 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113816893 Instead of living in a cabin like Matt he would live in an apartment and if there was a stranger i would call the cops then the stranger would go to jail...

]]> 2016-06-06 15:53:13 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113816893 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113817327 Matt would live in an apartment and if there was a stranger i would call the cops and the stranger would be in jail...]]> 2016-06-06 15:56:30 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113817327 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113817514 Instead of the old days, Matt would live in Honolulu with a helicopter and land it on the man who stole  the gun and eat the cheesy -  cake with Elmo.]]> 2016-06-06 15:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113817514 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113818609 If this modern day he will have money to buy a new gun .he can tell the  some one .]]> 2016-06-06 16:06:11 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113818609 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113818700 Matt would live in a house and have not have a gun because he is to young and call the police if the stranger would have came in.]]> 2016-06-06 16:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113818700 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113832795 Matt could have been going to Starbucks and would not have or need a gun because well hes not in the woods like he is now.It would be much easier for Matt.]]> 2016-06-06 17:41:14 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113832795 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113832801 it be david]]> 2016-06-06 17:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113832801 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113832887  In the modern day the man could have been arrest and thrown in jail and Matt's father would have also been thrown in jail for leveing him at home for 7 week 7 WEEK! i mean if it was me i would be eating cupcakes and whatching tv but noo the dad left him all alone in the wooding house that may have smelled bad gave him a gun and say"here Matt have a gun its not like your going to shoot yourseft  in the eye oh and by the way you have to hunt for food all alone hope a bear does not eat you well got to go bye now!' in the modern day Matt should have goting pizza and a soda and punch the man in the face for ting the last slice of cake well he would have ]]> 2016-06-06 17:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113832887 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833025 if chapter 3 was made in 2016 then matt could had called his dad to see if that was his dad that was coming and matt could have order some starbucks and mcdonalds]]> 2016-06-06 17:43:09 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833025 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833199 in the moden day the man could have been thrown into to jail.Matt's father left him alone for 7 weeks.if my father left me alone for ]]> 2016-06-06 17:44:36 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833199 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833263 If this story was taken place in 2016, the the man who walked into Matt 's house would be arrested and go to jail. Also the man probably wouldn't be able to get into Matt's house because now we have alarm systems and locks to keep insane people who steal guns like Ben  out of your house. Plus Matt's father would be thrown in jail because he thought that he could leave his son in a house for SEVEN WEEKS alone with a dangerous gun.For all I know    Matt could of  hurt himself siverly ]]> 2016-06-06 17:45:04 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833263 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833405  if it was in 2016 than , he could go to the store and get food, and he would have a big house and he would have  people close to him so the stranger ben would not be so scary, and he could call the Police on ben.]]> 2016-06-06 17:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113833405 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834622 If the  story took place in 2016  Ben would have been arested because Matt would have called th police because of the man would have freackied Matt]]> 2016-06-06 17:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834622 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834634 In modern day ,]]> 2016-06-06 17:54:17 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834634 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834655 2016-06-06 17:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834655 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834678 matt would have gone to bed and the gun would have stolen and he would use facial recadition]]> 2016-06-06 17:54:38 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834678 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834894 If ]]> 2016-06-06 17:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834894 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834923 2016-06-06 17:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113834923 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835151 They would have a better]]> 2016-06-06 17:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835151 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835251

]]> 2016-06-06 17:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835251 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835475 if it took place in this time period Ben would be put in jail f]]> 2016-06-06 17:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835475 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835580 it would be so wierd ]]> 2016-06-06 18:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835580 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835690 2016-06-06 18:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835690 https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835882 2016-06-06 18:02:35 UTC https://padlet.com/recrow/jplg5so9o1rz/wish/113835882