https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q Made with a quick smile en-us 2018-03-12 16:26:51 UTC 2025-11-18 03:01:24 UTC hello@padlet.com conell666 https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/240972475 2018-03-12 16:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/240972475 https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/241513163 Although you did a good job with stating how you are qualified, I believe that you lacked a personal touch. I did not feel as though you tried to relate to the person, but instead stated the same information that could be found on your resume. In the future, try to show your enthusiasm and excitement by stating so, and relating to the person by your greeting and farewell. ]]> 2018-03-13 17:11:47 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/241513163 https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/242140693 A thing that most of us are probably going to have trouble with on our elevator pitches is making sure that we stand out and make an impression especially since it is not a job interview so it would be more difficult to get hired this way. I might consider being more casual but I actually am not sure that that's how its supposed to be done ]]> 2018-03-14 23:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/242140693 https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/242169466 She seems passionate about the position, but lacks an aspect that leaves an impression. It is much more of an interview type of pitch, with stating all of your qualifications and talking in a direct tone of voice. I admire your confidence and determination, but you are lacking a personal connection to your pitch. ]]> 2018-03-15 02:32:49 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/242169466 https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/242178546 She is confident and passionate and to the point. She is also well qualified and in a job that involves a lot of research and alone time she seems comfortable working by herself and I don't think she would shy away from any task if asked to do so. ]]> 2018-03-15 03:38:29 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/jp2k5lcqgi5q/wish/242178546