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      <title>Comparative Essays - Find the Mistake by Stephanie Thomas</title>
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      <description>Watch the video. Find the grammar error. </description>
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      <pubDate>2017-11-11 02:07:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Watch the Comparative Essay Video.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Now that you have learned about combining independent clauses with coordinating conjunctions and comma rules, can you find the error in the essay at the end of the video? (Hint, look at the 2nd paragraph.) <a href="https://youtu.be/Fg1-ZpjYolo">To view a larger version of the video, click here</a>.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-11 02:09:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Click anywhere on the red poster. Write  your name and your idea about what the grammar error in the video is.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>(Hint, look at the 2nd paragraph in the video.)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-11 02:11:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hana</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the paragraph 2, "," before "but" is missed. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-13 22:45:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sara</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In paragraph 2 we need to put comma before but.<br>Because those are two&nbsp; independent clauses.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-15 01:28:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Well done, Sara and Hana.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Stephanie</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-15 22:40:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>In paragraph 2 you missed a comma before but .</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Loubna.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-16 06:13:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>In 2nd paragraph , 2nd line we need a coma before but.</title>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-17 04:03:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>in paragraph 2 weneed to put comma before but</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>amer</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-20 04:47:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lucy</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In paragraph 2 that I found two mistakes. First one: Lala hats swimming(<strong>, )</strong>but she loves to .....Second is: Since she loves grooming herself , (so) she always pristine.<br>In two brackets are my answer.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-22 20:08:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>needs comma after tiny, tan, and white dog:swimming, but: ,so</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;Erika D.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-23 00:03:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hyunju</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.Lola is tiny,tan and white dog with short fur.<br>2.Lola hates swimming, but she loves to groom herself.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-27 08:01:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Antonio</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In paragraph 2 you need to put comma before but. Lola hates swimming, but she loves to groom herself.<br>Because those are two&nbsp; independent clauses.<br>Second is: Since she loves grooming herself, so she always pristine.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-27 22:44:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Raja</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>We need to put comma before but.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-12-19 06:23:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Teruyoshi</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>A comma is required before "but she loves to groom herself" because this conjunction, but connects two clauses.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-02 13:22:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Claudia</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>A comma in the second paragraph, before "but".<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-03 20:41:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lin</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>A comma is required before the word "but" in paragraph 2.<br>Lola hates swimming, but she loves to groom herself.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-08 21:48:40 UTC</pubDate>
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