DO NOW: One Part of the Assessment You Did Well, One Part Where You Could Improve by Dario Sulzman

Sydney

2024-01-02 12:52:34 UTC

I could’ve improved my writing by restating my claim. I wrote “ This demonstrates my claim because…”.

I did a good job explaining evidence that supports my claim. “This demonstrates my claim because a sane person would be able to rationalize and think before their actions.

Harrison

11008212 — 2024-01-02 12:54:26 UTC

Strong: Choosing my evidence was pretty strong. Both quotes heavily support each of the 2 claims. However, the credibility was before the quote, when it should've been after.

"(II. II. 364-365) Hamlet says, "I'm only crazy sometimes. At other times, I know what's what."

Improve on: Elaborating my supporting reason. I should've given examples when I claimed that Hamlet is going insane because if his "abusive motives to others." (Word choice was also weird.)

Valeria Perez

1050364 — 2024-01-02 12:54:27 UTC

Strong

Hamlet is going insane by being aggresive in Act 1 to his friends.

Weak

Hamlet is faking his madness by telling Horatio no matter how crazy he'll act he must never tell any one.

Ny’Aisia

2024-01-02 12:56:05 UTC

One of part of the assessment i did well was stating how hamlet reveals his madness “ hamlet appears to reveal his madness when hears the truth about his father’s murder. Hamlet shows excessive anger when his father’s tells him what really happen”

I can’t really get into details because i didn’t finish everything.

Yaviel Cabrera

215048_ — 2024-01-02 12:58:42 UTC

I did well in my claim. “I think Hamlet is going insane because he was acting creepy when he was in Ophelia’s room.”

Improve: I need to improve how my piece of evidence support my answer “in this quote Ophelia state how sexual was Hamlet acting toward her. A normal person will never make an act like that unless they a lovely relationship”

Israel

2024-01-02 12:59:11 UTC

Strong

I think i was pretty strong gathering my evidence

“It’s true that am these things “seem” like a grief, since a person would use them to fake if he wanted to. But i’ve got more real grief inside me that you could ever see on the surface”- Hamlet

Improvement

I need to improve on connecting my ideas more to what i have present and be more organized

Josh

2024-01-02 12:59:39 UTC

strong:

When I identified a piece of evidence I specifically found the text of when hamlet said something “not my friend but my servant but my friend. I’ll change that name for you”

Improve on:

What I could’ve improved on was when I was using evidence from the text. I didn’t have a supporting reason for inciting because when I added hamlet was going insane he say a ghost only he can see.