https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7 en-us 2018-02-06 15:27:49 UTC 2019-11-06 02:50:10 UTC hello@padlet.com tshephard1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228652372 Bell Ringer: What areas of your draft need strengthened? 

What questions do you have about the project?]]> 2018-02-06 15:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228652372 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689242 I don't have questions]]> 2018-02-06 16:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689242 ilikecake_mj https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689273 I need to work on some of my word choices so that my draft can be powerful and less words repeating. I don't have questions.]]> 2018-02-06 16:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689273 stimitchell1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689321 none

]]> 2018-02-06 16:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689321 stteverett1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689548 working on it
how long does it have to be?👩🏾‍💻📖]]> 2018-02-06 16:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689548 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689775 I don't have any questions]]> 2018-02-06 16:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228689775 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690065 I don't have any questions ]]> 2018-02-06 16:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690065 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690643 The hook needs to be strengthened. ]]> 2018-02-06 16:20:54 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690643 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690690 I dont have any questions

]]> 2018-02-06 16:20:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690690 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690983 why are the questions worded so weird ]]> 2018-02-06 16:21:21 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228690983 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228691077 omm I bearily started it 😐😰

]]> 2018-02-06 16:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228691077 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228691422 I can't find any figurative language in my poem.]]> 2018-02-06 16:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228691422 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228691487 I don't have questions]]> 2018-02-06 16:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228691487 ahhahahah https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228834758 I need to strengthen the body of my essay and the conclusion paragraph. How long should the paragraphs be?]]> 2018-02-06 20:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228834758 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835140 I died not really start it but I know what I want to do and I do not have any questions.]]> 2018-02-06 20:04:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835140 stnsuhrbier1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835164 I need to strengthen my intro and finish the rest of the outline.]]> 2018-02-06 20:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835164 stbcampbell1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835339 I need to work on the strength my paragraphs. I don't really have any questions. ]]> 2018-02-06 20:04:51 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835339 stlannegarn12 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835364 I want everything better than it already is. no question.]]> 2018-02-06 20:04:54 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835364 stlbaldwin2 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835401 I need to strengthen how I word my paragraphs. ]]> 2018-02-06 20:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835401 stkedmomds1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835409 I dont need help]]> 2018-02-06 20:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835409 stnficca https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835468 I have to finish my outline and I have no questions


]]> 2018-02-06 20:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835468 stodeviine1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835499 I just need to finish it and I have no questions]]> 2018-02-06 20:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835499 starollins1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835541 I need to strengthen my whole thing]]> 2018-02-06 20:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835541 stksheawood1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835628 I need to strengthen a lot of my draft and I don't have any questions.]]> 2018-02-06 20:05:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835628 sthwinters1 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835699 Im not sure what parts need strengthened. I have no questions.]]> 2018-02-06 20:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835699 kittykittenface https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835917 I don't know what parts need strengthened. I don't have any questions

]]> 2018-02-06 20:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835917 gummy_bear https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835923 I am currently revising my draft to see where I could make it better. I found that I could put a bit more detail in them concerning "The human experience". 

Actually I don't fully understand "the human experience"]]> 2018-02-06 20:05:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835923 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835944 I think mine is good and I have no questions]]> 2018-02-06 20:06:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228835944 stakline2 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836172 my body paragraphs]]> 2018-02-06 20:06:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836172 ddemus https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836230 I mean I didn't finish my draft but I need help with like some facts. ]]> 2018-02-06 20:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836230 heyhey https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836464 I need to start all over]]> 2018-02-06 20:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836464 kittykittenface https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836524 qwertyuiop key-board]]> 2018-02-06 20:07:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836524 oxo_salem https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836616 intro

]]> 2018-02-06 20:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228836616 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228838955 2018-02-06 20:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228838955 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228840474 2018-02-06 20:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228840474 stlannegarn12 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228840600 2018-02-06 20:09:30 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228840600 kittykittenface https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228841089 2018-02-06 20:10:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/jo8zih4ls0w7/wish/228841089