-punishment like canning,fine

-army camp

-can change offender to be more discipline

-mentally strong

POINT 2

-learning lifeskills

-survival lifeskills

-self defending

POINT 3

-opportunity to change

-stil young

crime rate increasing

mostly young offenders

Point 1

canning, fine

have to discipline, mentally strong

Point 2

survival life skill

Point 3

opportunity to change

contrubate to out our country

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-I think it's a good idea

Point 1:

-punishment: canning, fine

-army camp: chance to discipline, mentally strong

Point 2:

Learning life skills

-survival lifeskills

-communicating

-survival training

Point 3:

-opportunity to change

-contribute to our country

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offinders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment :coming ,fine

-army camp :chame to decepline , mentallty strong

point 2

learning life skills

-survival lifeskill

• -

• -

  point 3

• opportunity to change

• -

  contribute to our country

• -

  conclusion

- crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment canning,fine

-army camp;change to disipline,mentally strong

point 2

-learning the skills such as survival life skill

point3

-opportunity to change

conclusion

intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think its is a good

point 1

-punishment:canning,fine

-army camp:discipline,mentaly strong

point2

-learning lifeskill

-survival skill

point 3

-opportunity to change

-contribute to our country

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment: canning,fine

-army camp:chance to discipline mentally strong

point 2

Learning life skills

-survival lifeskills

-communicating

-working in a team

point 3

-opportunity to chance

-contribute to our country

intro :

• crime rate increasing

• mostly young offenders

• i think it is a good idea

point 1 :

• punishment : canning,fine

• army crime : chance to discapline,mentally strong

point 2 :

• learning life skills

• survival life skills

point 3 :

• opportunity to change

• contribute to our country

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

POINT 1

-punishIment such as canning ,fine

-have to discipline

POINT 2

-learning life skills

-survival life skill

POINT 3

-opportunity to change

-contribute to our country

CONCLUSION

- this is the best way to treat the young offenders

Intro :

• Crime rate increasing

• Mostly young offenders

• I think it is a good idea

Point 1 :

• Punishment : canning , fine

• Chance to discipline

• Mentally strong

• Physically strong

Point 2 :

• Survival life skill

• Deal with people

• Sense of responsibility

Point 3 :

• Opportunity to change

• Repent themselves to become a better person

• know what is right and wrong

intro :

• crime rate increasing

• mostly young affind

• i think it is a good idea

  
  

  point 1 :

• chame to discapline

• mentally strong

• punishment like canning

  
  

  point 2:

• learning lifeskills

• survival lifeskills

• self defending

  
  

  point3:

• stil young

• opportunity to change

• know what is right and wrong

  
  

intro:

• crime rate increasing

• mostly young offenders

• i think it is a good idea

point 1:

• punishment: canning, fine

• army camp: chance discipline, mentally strong

point 2:

• learning life skills

• survival skills

point 3:

• opportunity to change

• contribute to our country

intro

• crime rate increasing

• mostly young offenders

• i think it is a good idea

point 1

• punisment : canning,fine

• army camp : chance to discipline, mentally strong

point 2

• survival life skills

• deal with people

• working in team

point 3

• opportunity to change

• contribute to our country

conclusion

• it is the best way to sent them to army camp besides to prison

intro :

• crime rate increasing

• mostly young offenders

• i think it is a good idea

point 1 :

• punishment : canning , fine

• army camp : chance offenders

• to discipline

• mentally strong

point 2 :

• learning life skills

• survival life skills

• learn work skills

point 3 :

• opportunity to change

• to become better person

conclusion :

• should be given chance to improve themselves

• ensure their future is on actual way

intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly you offenders

-i think is a good

point 1

punishment like canning ,fine

-army camp: chance to discipline,,mentally strong

point 2

learning life skill

-survival lifeskills

-communicating

-survival training

point 3

opportunity to change

-contribute our country

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-I think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment: canning,fine

-army camp: chance to discipline, mentally strong

point 2

-survival life skills

-learning life skills

-self defending

point 3

-oppurtunity to change

-contribute to our country

Intro

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

-i think this a good idea

Point 1

-punishment : canning,fine

-armmy camp : chance to discipline,mentally strong

Point 2

-learning life skills

-survival skills

-defends skills

Point 3

-opportunity to change

-learn rensposibility

Conclusion

-take a lesson

- will not repeat the same mistake

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young affenders

POINT 1

-punishment : canning,fine

-army camp : chance to discipline

-mentallity strong

POINT 2

-survial life skills

• defends ownself

POINT 3

• oppurtunity to change

• contribute to our country

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offenders

point 1

-canning,fine

-have to discipline,mentally strong

point 2

-survival life skill

point 3

oppotunity to change

-contribute to our camp

-A lot of crime rate is reported nowadays in Malaysia

-Mostly are from those young offenders

POINT 1

-Army camp can teach those young offenders to have a well discipline

-Army camp also can make their mentality be strong and better than before

POINT 2

-learning life skills

-Mostly army camp will focus on working in a team and dealing with other people

POINT 3

-opportunity to change theirself to be a better person

-they will feel proud on theirself because they can contribute to their own country

CONCLUSION

-

-crime rate increasing

-mostly young offinders

-i think it is a good idea

point 1

-punishment :coming, fine

-army camp :chame to decepline, mentallity strong

point 2

Learning life skills

-survival life skills

-cammunicating

-survival training

point 3

-oppurtunity to change

-contribute to our country