Email Oopsies- LMS 6 by usamimi74 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02 Make a list of what you think is wrong with the email en-us 2013-09-04 16:15:11 UTC 2015-09-10 17:46:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.storage.googleapis.com/portrait/sticky.jpg Makenna, and Kale https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331068 Mr's Newton is not Capitalized

No Closing

Bossy Very rude

Some Mistakes in Grammar

]]> 2015-09-09 17:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331068 Dalton and Thompson and Caden https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331082 It was a mean and improper way to send a email No closing

]]> 2015-09-09 17:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331082 Logan and Justin https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331175 Bossy, not the right way to talk to the teacher, not polite, selfish, no closing, no capitalization.

]]> 2015-09-09 17:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331175 Brennen bcrowley64068 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331339 2015-09-09 17:50:53 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331339 ALEX  Alex   bcrowley64068 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331347 Bossy

mean

grammer

her face ond tone with the techer

]]> 2015-09-09 17:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331347 Bryson and Andru https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331418 The email is missing a closing, and has some grammar errors, it is not the right too talk too a teacher.

]]> 2015-09-09 17:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331418 Aireanna and Emma emcd6059 https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331444 Rude, no closing, Mrs. Newton needs to be capitalized, grammatical errors, The subject has no purpose

]]> 2015-09-09 17:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331444 Preston & JOEY ZEEEE https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331742 Threatening and no closing, Mrs. Newton's also not capitalized.

]]> 2015-09-09 17:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331742 ClaireAnd Heaven https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331826 Not a proper closing,rude,improper subject line,capitaization errors,

]]> 2015-09-09 17:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69331826 Alexis and Emma S https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69332479 The subject

rude

mrs newton should be like this Mrs. Newton

no closing

]]> 2015-09-09 17:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69332479 Blayton,Blake https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69334012 Use better grammer,Need a closing,Need more information in the subject

]]> 2015-09-09 17:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69334012 Cali and Lexi M. https://padlet.com/usamimi74/jlquhpon02/wish/69335191 She didn't sound very nice, not a proper closing or opening, body errors

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