I saw in the news recently the headline "A South Korean man
has died after reportedly playing an online computer game for 50 hours with few
breaks". After that news was broadcasted, many korean parents tried to
make their child stop playing computer games. But, are computer games
really bad?

One of the main advantage of computer game is relieving stress. Solving a quest,  winning to other player and becoming more powerful makes him confident. In addition to this, online game makes new relationship with new people. When they plays in a group, they cooperate for the goal, then feel close. They can make new friends through online game.

On the other hand, Some people waste time and money easily because many of games make them to be addicted to the game and lead them to pay for their charcater. And another thing, some games make people violent. For example, Some games like GTA(too violent, too similar to real world) makes them confused between real world and virtual one.

In my opinion, playing game is good thing. The disadvantage of computer game is depends on player's mind because there are many peaceful games not violent and people can control themselves. then people can relieve their stress. So, If you can control yourself, the computer games become one of the best way to relieve stress.

When was the last time you wrote a handwritten letter? You see everyday many people using emails and text messages all day long. Are advantages of using them outweigh disadvantages?

One of the advantages is that you can send and get replies faster than before. Because of this you can easily keep in touch with people who are far away. For example, you can make e-pal friends all over the world. As well as that, people can send messages conveniently without worrying about their bad handwriting. Because we use electronic devices to write emails and texts, the messages appear in clear customized fonts. Also you can change size and style of fonts.

On the other hand, emails and text messages have caused new kinds of crimes like smishing and spam. For instance, if you get a smishing text, it is difficult to distinguish those from the others. So many people lose their money or their personal information is leaked. In addition to this, emails and text messages make individualism more serious. Before emails and text messages were developed, people used to have face to face meetings and talked to each other directly. However, nowadays instead of doing what we have mentioned above, people prefer digital communication. So they have less chances to face each other.

I would say that advantages of emails and text messages stand out more than disadvantages. However, it is important not to depend too much on digital communication. You have to make sure to use them wisely and sensibly.

Do you want to own a car? If you already have a car, can you imagine your life without it? Let me explain about advantages and disadvantages of owning a car

The most important advantage is you can go wherever, whenever you want. For example, suddenly your girlfriend ask about going to seaside you can go immediatly. In addition to this, you can carry heavy stuff easily. When you going to iKEA you don't need to wait in a long que for taxi.

On the other hand, owning a car cause many problems. The worst is air pollution. Can you remember this Monday? Basically fine dust coming from desert of China but waste gas from cars making it worse. Another disadvantage is oil price are getting higher and you should maintain condition of your car regularly. It's so annoying.

In my opinion, owning a car is very convenient, and save your time and energe. At the same time, it makes air pollution and waste of money because of maintaining. If you buy a small car or electric car. That going to be a good alternative solution. We should save our earth and also we can't give up convenient life.

When I go on holidays with my friend, I take many photos to remember that time with digital camera and share photos with friend. Digital camera makes easy to share. But is this a good thing? Are there more advantages than disadvantages?

One of the main advantages of digital camera is that photos can be moved easy to computer and other devices. These days, digital camera has wifi function so I can upload my photos on the web without any process wherever I want . If we use films, we have to develop films and scan photos by using scanner. But it takes long time.

On the other hands, It is easy to take photos so we take too many meaningless ones. For example, when I travel , I take thousands of photos and sometimes I focus on take pictures than enjoy trip. But I come back to my home, I usually don't watch every photos. Some photos use my profile on SNS but others just keep in picture folder for a long time.

In my opinion, Digital camera is very useful and convenient so we can keep photos which are precious time. but it is important to enjoy in present.

The main advetage is that you can save money on air tickets. Instead of buying expensive tickets, you can enjoy more activities and delicious food during your trip.

In addition to this, cheap flights are good for short-distance travel. They have many time schedules and destinations in a country.

Although they are popular among travelers for price, they provide low quality service. For example, they don't serve free meals and entertainment during flight. Furthemore, cheap flights are no less safe than any other airline.

In my opinion, it is good to buy cheap air tickets if you can be susceptible of unsafty and low service. However, you should accept these things. The choice is yours.

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