Narrative Stories by Monica Carrillo

Ms. Carrillo

monicacarrillo7 — 2023-11-07 16:05:01 UTC

One hot summer day I helped my niece make lemonade to sell. First, we made the lemonade and sold ten cups! After one hour we ran out of limes and could not sell more lemonade. Finally, my sister went to the store and brought more lemons! We sold ten more cups. It was so much fun!

Jeremiah Godfrey

2023-11-07 18:30:24 UTC

One time I was playing outside.With my bike and it broke. So I grab my dads screwdriver and I fixed it.Then I got back on my bike and ride up the street.Later my dad said I had to go in the house.

jonathan bowers

2023-11-07 18:56:07 UTC

jonathan bowers

2023-11-07 19:11:13 UTC

one time i was playing on my game and the power went out. Then my step dad fixed the power. We then played a game together. We played minecraft. We had a lot of fun.

Noah Robles

2023-11-07 20:10:13 UTC

One time I went to the WestGate Hotel. Then I slept there for three days. A moment later I was at the pool. A few minutes later I jumped into the pool. Finally we got out of the pool. The end. :)

Isaiah Haddad

2023-11-07 20:27:47 UTC

One sunny day, I went into my pool to swim. After a while, I jumped out to eat pizza. A moment later, me and my brother went to our pool and we swam. Right after, that we played marco polo. In the end, we jumped out and played video games.

Abby Cortes.

2023-11-07 23:02:51 UTC

One day I went to the beach with my aunty. Next I jump in the water and we saw a dolphin. Then, I ran out the water thinking it was a shark but it was a dolphin. Right after, we got sponge bob ice cream. It tasted like pineapple and I was very happy at the beach.

Logan

2023-11-07 23:07:08 UTC

One sunny day, I went to the mol. Then, my mom got me a toy. A moment later, we go eat. Right after that, we went home. Finally, I play with my toy.

maraihlisse

2023-11-07 23:37:35 UTC

we had a great day at the beach we had fun with all the toys and running around with my brothers.

James

2023-11-08 02:42:09 UTC

one day me and mom, dad, sister, baby brother went walking and I got lost.then they found me.

Eissa Valdez

2023-11-08 02:44:36 UTC

One Sunny day, I visited Disneyland with my family. Soon after, I visited Cars Land and took lots of pictures. Now, I was looking for my favorite characters. A few moments later, I saw a parade. Finally, I took a picture with my favorite Cars character guido.

Last summer i went to grandma house.Then my dad helped build a pool.All of a sudden the pool got filled with water.A few minutes later i jumped in the pool. In the end i had a lot of fun at my grandmas house for summer

2023-11-08 04:43:57 UTC

King

2023-11-08 05:34:47 UTC

One day i was playing football with my brother and we were playing too hard and i fell and hit my shoulder on the ground and it hurted a little bit but i was okay.

IsaiahOrtiz

2023-11-08 06:38:39 UTC

One day i went to las vegas with my family. The first day we got to my aunty house to visit .After we went to get ice cream with my mom. finally we walked around and saw the dancing waters.

Princess Chloe Jimenez

2023-11-08 20:21:36 UTC

Last month we went to Chuck E Cheese's for my birthday. I played games. I met Chuck E. We ate pizza. Then we went home.

mateo gonzalez

2023-11-09 04:01:18 UTC

last summer for my birthday we went to disneyland. i had so much fun i went on a lot of rides. i cant wait to go again.

xavier gonzalez

2023-11-09 04:23:00 UTC

last summer i went to knotts berry farm. i went on a lot of rides. I took pictures with snoopy and had some yummy funnel cakes. i cant wait to go back.

Treasure Harris

2023-11-17 01:00:00 UTC

One time on a Mother's Day I wanted to do something special. Before long I came up with an idea. A moment later I went to get my notebook to make a picture for my mom. A little bit later, I was done. In the end my mom was super happy.